I read the reviews and realized that I had a problem with writing all along—I loved to play up thrilling atmospheres.

As I said in the last single chapter, the plot structure and framework are all prepared, and I know that the follow-up and the outline are all assigned, and I am sure of this.

Then I read the comments again and found this problem, I love to play up the thrilling atmosphere too much, which causes the protagonist group to seem unorganized.

Without affecting the outline, a few small adjustments have been made:

1. When the building was set on fire, there was no need to be too thrilling, the fire came together, and Lu County's order, the gentry, and the real local snake also came (the reason I will say later), and Xue Bai's plan at the beginning did not have to put Du Yan in danger. It's true that I'm writing and writing, habitually rendering. Modified back here.

2. Gao Chong just wanted to kill someone, but was stopped by the real head snake, which is the success of the protagonist group's plan, and it was also like this when it was conceived, but it was not reflected because of my habitual rendering of thrills. It's been modified here.

3. There are only 6 veterans around Gao Chong, and 2-3 people are generally sent, and 3-4 people are sent at most, which I didn't emphasize originally, which caused the protagonist to plan too risky feelings. A sentence has been added here to emphasize.

4. Armor is the reason why Lao Liang and Jiang Hai have a hard time beating each other, because armor is evidence of crime, they didn't expect the other party to use it so quickly. This was not emphasized in the first place. A sentence was added.

5. In the design, this fight scene actually wants to say that Xue Bai got the help of Ren Mulan and Li Twelve. Written in the tunnel, or in front of Xue Bai, it has no effect on the structure, but I habitually render the thrill. It has been changed here, and Jiang Hai's injury has been changed a little smaller.

6. Xue Bai's plan, this still has to be explained later......

It's probably the adjustment of these places.,I haven't even changed the chapters and paragraphs.,This chapter says that maybe a dozen articles have been lost in total.,Nothing else will be affected.。

I've never been a susceptible reader to readers, and I was very critical of the last book, but I still wrote it according to my own ideas, but I didn't change the structure this time. But I have to admit that I just have the problem of over-exaggerating thrills.

Changed it a bit to make the implementation of the plan a little smoother and less risky. Without affecting the progression, I hope everyone's perception is different.

I also hope that less over-rendering is my progress.

I haven't slept much in the past few days, and my schedule is messed up again today, and tomorrow it should be 6000 words.

Finally, I wish you all a happy mood~~