I carefully read everyone's opinions, and although in the end there were more people who chose not to revise it, but the fish pulled the details and found that it was indeed not handled well enough.

Especially the position that should be an emotional flashpoint, but it was directly solved in a "non-protagonist" way, which led to the weakening of the meaning of the previous judgment and effort, although it was pulled up and replayed again, but it seemed too procrastinating, so in the end, I thought about it and changed it.

What is written (modified) is the modified one, and if there is no (modified), you can download it again, which is guaranteed to be much stronger than the original version.

And then...... In short, it's all about the ...... It's all the fish's fault,

After the two major repairs before and after the Yufa book, I didn't go through the details again, and made a low-level mistake that I shouldn't have made, I'm sorry.

And because the 1st is going to be on the shelves.,It's a little anxious to catch up with the manuscript in the past two days.,Happy before sending the code.,I didn't read it more and send it again.,I didn't find that these two chapters felt wrong.,Leaked this mistake in the past.,Apologize again.。

Covering his face, he was really in a hurry.

Let the fish cry here, today the more than 10,000 words have been written, and the fish's manuscript has been deleted, deleted, modified, and moved, which can be regarded as completely zero...... Or2

At last...... This time the fish completely recognized (lying flat), the fish seemed to be really not fast, as soon as the water of the book came up, the quality will also decline, and when the brain is not very clear today, there will be a big mistake.

So it's really not like the fish doesn't want to write more...... The main thing is that I can't write fast, and when I feel that I have spare energy, the fish will try to write as much as possible, but sometimes I really can't catch it.

Looking at the big guys in the author group who are moving day by day, the fish is really envious and drooling, but the quality, speed and rigor seem to be an impossible triangle in the fish.

Starting from the second year of the previous book, every time the fish wants to occupy all three, it will completely collapse one, causing the whole to start a landslide...... Or2。

When I wrote this, I suddenly found that I seemed to habitually ramble a lot...... Well...... The most important thing is just to put it at the end, I wish you all a happy Mid-Autumn Festival!!!

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