The first volume of the new book has finally been completed.

The first time I tried science fiction, it was really hard to write......

It's not just a change in subject matter, it's also a change in style.

The style of "The Man in the Path" is joyful, while the book is more cyber-oriented.

In this volume, a lot of foreshadowing was buried in the early stage, and then it was withdrawn later.

◎Let's talk about the first line first: Doctor Ash.

When the protagonist reported the crime in the first chapter, he said his home address, Room 2501, Building 17, Langyun Waterfront;

Then in the seventh chapter, Team Lu received a phone call, mentioning the name on the information, not Zhou Zhen;

In the eleventh chapter, Team Lu checked the information, and the one they checked was Room 2501, Building 17, Langyun Waterfront, the owner is called Fu Shangjing, not Zhou Zhen, and on the list of information next to it, there are four titles of runaway numbers: Double Seam Man, Mathematician, Doctor Ash, Dr. An......

In Chapter 41, when the talent is matched, the protagonist recalls the memories of his "past life" and dispenses with talents related to medicine;

In Chapter 101, Fu Shangjing officially appeared, codenamed Doctor Ash, the real owner of Room 2501, Building 17, Langyun Waterfront, and has the same [overclocking interference] as the protagonist.

◎ And then there's the second line: the test subject.

The main character's first chapter is born in an underground morgue, and when it comes out, the door is engraved with an upside-down scepter and a two-headed snake emblem for spitting letters;

In chapter 19, the ghost team investigates the three infected people infected by the protagonist, and their attention is diverted by the order of the ashes;

In Chapter 37, the protagonist completes the deal with the black boss Li Ge, and the entire black boss's power is raised by the ashes order in his backhand;

In Chapter 54, Xie Qiongning mentions the promotion news of the "second tier";

In Chapter 70, Xie Qiongning's teacher appears, and the character description deliberately emphasizes the balance emblem on the skirt, which is the first appearance of the second illegal organization of the Dusk Trial;

In Chapter 72, after listening to Xie Qiongning's situation, Team Lu mentioned the word "big fish";

Chapter 93, the observer of the twilight trial, needs more experiments, and connects with the promotion news of the "second ladder" mentioned by Xie Qiongning earlier;

Chapter Ninety-Four, The Subject of the Twilight Judgment Appears;

Chapter 99, officially identifies the protagonist as an experimental subject of the Ash Order.

◎ Then the third line: [split personality].

In chapter 10, the protagonist sleeps in bed, but wakes up from the living room in the middle of the night, and the next morning, he goes back to bed;

Chapter 21, Memory Transplantation Technique, First Appearance;

In Chapter 22, the protagonist appears for the first time [Protection Mechanism];

Chapter 25, the three dangerous laws of memory transplantation: [mental rejection], [protection mechanism], [split personality];

Chapter 27, using Daniel Zhang's digital domain, his personality becomes the same as Daniel Zhang's;

Chapter 40, a detailed explanation of the [protection mechanism];

In Chapter 53, the protagonist discovers his [split personality] for the first time and triggers the second [Protection Mechanism];

Chapter 67, the deputy personality is on the line, killing all sides;

In Chapter 80, the protagonist discovers his [split personality] for the second time and triggers the [Protection Mechanism] again;

In chapter ninety, the protagonist discovers that he has a problem for the third time, but is interrupted by the sound of an elevator;

In Chapter 91, the protagonist discovers his [split personality] for the fourth time, and this time before triggering the [Protection Mechanism], he leaves a hint for himself......

In addition to these three lines, there is also the protagonist's plug-in, which is the line of the classroom, which everyone should be able to see, so I won't list it.

There are also some small foreshadowings, such as such an advanced mobile phone, which will freeze when opening the album, because it is not a photo, but a person......

These clues, when the latte was written, were buried in one event after another, because they were too clearly written, and they felt too untechnical.

But now this way of writing also has certain drawbacks, that is, once you miss a detail, many plots will not make sense.

For example, in Chapter 83, the candid shooting case, some readers feel that the protagonist is ...... because the protagonist does not doubt himself

In fact, in Chapter 40, it has been explained very clearly: once the [Protection Mechanism] is triggered, the brain will forget those abnormal memories and make leaps and bounds of correction, and the person concerned cannot find his abnormality on his own.

Just like in Chapter 53, the protagonist discovers that he is [split personality], but quickly forgets about this discovery, and the brain gives himself a very outrageous explanation: he is a time-traveler, and the other people in the classroom are all the golden fingers of his own time-traveler......

Therefore, the plot here in Chapter 83 is the same, the protagonist has triggered the [Protection Mechanism] the day before, all the clues related to [Split Personality] have been forgotten, and the brain has deceived itself, at this time, it is impossible for the protagonist to doubt himself, unless he opens God's perspective.

It's like someone says you stole something and you found stolen goods in your pocket, but you don't have any memory of stealing anything, what do you do?

Admitting to stealing?

How can it be!

This must be someone who blames himself!

In the case of latte itself, even if someone else brings the surveillance video as evidence, the latte will firmly believe that the other party's video is P's!

Okay, that's all for the foreshadowing, in addition to what is written above, there are indeed many places in this first volume that have not been written......

Starting from chapter 43, the role of Xie Qiongning has not been shaped enough.

Because the positioning of this book is a single heroine, and this Xie Qiongning is the female supporting role, so at the beginning, Latte wrote this role in order to lead to the dusk trial, but because she didn't want her to rob the heroine's role, she couldn't completely write it as a passerby...... The degree in the middle is not well grasped, resulting in this Xie Qiongning being too mediocre compared to the female characters in "Gou Dao People".

In the future, Latte will find an opportunity to rewrite chapters 43 to 45, and the big plot will remain the same, mainly to stand up the image of the characters. (Changed: 2023-11-14)

Let's talk about the number of words in the chapters, the book on the latte has always been a 2K party, and the fourth watch is 8K words, but it is a waste of time to have four titles every day and think about four broken points.

Therefore, the last book was combined in the later part of the chapter.

This book wants to focus on the plot, so it comes up directly with chapters, 8K words per chapter, which is the same number of words as the four in the previous book.

However, some readers don't like the big chapter very much, so let's synthesize it next, one chapter is 4K, and two chapters are 8K.

Well......

The number of words in the summary is already a lot, and if you write it down, it will be enough for a chapter......

Let's talk about the addition, latte has opened a document to remember, and I won't forget it!

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