Finished writing another little broken book.

Suddenly, tomorrow I don't need to code, and I always feel empty in my heart.

Starting from the millions of words before the book opened, the inspiration is like a spring, ready to write all the way to kicking the laughing moon and punching the day!

In the middle and late stages, I don't know how to write, I don't have an outline, I can only rely on daily inspiration, drag it out until the evening stuck point update, typos and language problems constantly.

The follow-up can still be watered, but the experience and preparation are still too little, and the whole book has collapsed, so I can only write here.

The theme of this book is a play on words and a steampunk post-apocalyptic worldview, which is a relatively unpopular subject.

But now that I think about it, in addition to the plot at the beginning, I haven't been able to give full play to the two characteristics of this theme, one is the 'funny option' of 'word games', and the other is the atmosphere of the player forum.

If you can grasp these two points, it will actually be a lot more interesting.

However, because of the problem in the setting, there is no forum for the existence of the rule-level of 'New Day Game'.

As a result, a lot of plots can't be unfolded on the forum, because the forum is made by people after all.

Looking back now, this book has been buried with a collapsed mine from the first 200,000 words on the shelves, and it has committed many problems.

One of the biggest problems is that as a game otherworldly upgrade text, it has collapsed into the most outrageous combat power and upgrade system.

It all started with the fact that there was no special node for the profession 'herb picker', but just an ordinary position and title.

The level node of the upgrade text is very important, but the level in the book has no node limit, which directly leads to the existence of almost no 'rank' in the book.

This also leads to the level becoming useless, taking so many professional names, but the 'profession' has not been able to have a good embodiment, if you insist on dividing, it can probably only be divided into ordinary people, strong people, witches, prison masters, these more vague ranks.

Tracers, dog trainers, burners, scourge messengers, witches, etc., now think about it, if you can design a unique effect for these professions, and then divide them into levels, the combat power and upgrade system of the whole book, and the level of fun should be much better.

In the upgrade text, the upgrade system is very important, and it can even be said to be the skeleton of an upgrade text.

The collapse of the upgrade system, which also causes the protagonist's subsequent upgrades to become aimless, and needs to be forcibly triggered by some events.

Then there's the skill system.

As the talent of the golden finger 'Rising Star', a treasure hunting golden finger, it is also used as much as possible.

However, there are still some things that are not used, that is, the protagonist locks on the hostile players who are taunting in the New Day game, by locking the 'objects' on their bodies, and then chasing them thousands of miles offline.

There is also the invincible black fire walking, a magic skill that really goes from writing to the end, and it has both displacement and invincible frames, which makes the 'iron block' that the cup is proud of ashamed.

But also because of this skill, there are few hand-to-hand combat situations, resulting in the protagonist Although he has been in crisis many times, his body has hardly been seriously injured, and it is difficult for others to hit the protagonist, resulting in the battle description not knowing where to start.

The second is the characters, under normal circumstances, the characters in a book should have many connections, or have a super specialty that cannot be replaced by others, which is also the key to the protagonist's soaring combat power in the early stage.

However, when writing many characters, I didn't do a good job, which led to many characters being directly hidden in the later stage.

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And then there are some big holes in the plot of the book.

The first one is about the Rising Star of Enlightenment.

At the beginning, I wanted to write Daystar's upgrade talent as the kind of 'tarot meeting', which was to pull in and exchange information.

However, I found that I couldn't control the plot of the meeting at all, and the text was changed.

At the same time, it's useless for the protagonist of this book to join the organization.,It seems that it's okay not to join at all.,The fishing guy directly stocked the protagonist.。

The second is Luo Qing, and 'Li Xiang', who pulls the protagonist into the New Day Game mutual aid group (this character may have been forgotten by everyone, because it was hardly mentioned).

In the original plot design, the leader of the death group, the people of the clock tower, and the death row prisoners all stepped through the gate of heaven and came to the existence of the earth.

Among them, the death row group relied on the opening god costume to manipulate the player and create a huge Holy Calamity Association, and the people of the clock tower also became an observer-like existence due to some adaptation reasons, and the leader of the dead group was seriously injured because of the power of seizing the stars, and was hunted down by the Holy Calamity Association.

And the head of this dead regiment is Li Xiang, who is also the one who pulls the protagonist into the New Day game.

And at the beginning, many plots in reality were ready to revolve around this.

But then I felt that there were some clichés, and I didn't dare to write a realistic plot, so this character was directly hidden.

In terms of plot, there is no non-combat 'daily skill' designed for the protagonist, and I don't know how to write daily and astringent, which leads to some enchantment in the back, and in the past, I pursued the protagonist's light and blade appearance, and I can only continue to enter one adventure after another, and the plot in the back has also collapsed again and again.

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Looking back, there are a lot of problems with this book in many aspects, but despite this, I still quite like this book, and it is painful to write.

For example, the name of the protagonist Kai, as well as the worldview setting of the book.

The worldview of this book is a steampunk apocalypse, a person looking for a high heaven in the world, and a simplified sexual setting for the magic change......

In terms of setting, led by the White Sun Clock Tower, the twenty-four regions have mastered different heavenly techniques and duties, and with the efforts of each district, Shindu feeds the white sun with blood, and tenaciously survives in the endless calamities.

In these districts, countless people are eager to find the existence of the high heavens in these ideal towns because of the arrival of the end of the world and the ambition in their hearts, and of course, these 'high heavens' that can only be reached in a lifetime may not be friendly.

The core setting of Xindu District 8 is 'prison' and 'desolation'.

Unfortunately, the original worldview is much more difficult than I thought.

At the same time, the preparation of this book is too little, and the setting of this world is not well done.

The details are too poorly described, so that the other regions are not well written, coupled with the lack of real-world references, the whole world also seems to be in the air.

And due to the collapse of the upgrade system and the lack of confrontation between the regions, there is no introduction to change the regions.

There are also some characters, such as the witch of Hanhan flowers who has long flowers on her head and pursues elegance, the fisherman who is often fished, the teacher character who likes pets, the witch of the book who exists in a book, the witch of the master of theory, the master of abstraction Calamity soothsayer, the seabird who likes to take pictures, and so on.

If you think about it carefully, in fact, many characters are quite suitable for writing about daily life, but because of the enchantment caused by the collapse, the excessive pursuit of light and blade phases, there are almost no daily chapters, and many characters also seem very thin.

Now that I think about it, if I could have started all over again, this book would have been much better, but I have no regrets.

In general, it's still too vegetable, and the writing is not formal, and I don't care.

Let's go back to practice.

It's painful to write, but it's actually quite enjoyable to write, and I've learned something.

The new book in the future should be a similar worldview, as well as the 'replicas' of some characters, and the protagonist of the new book is probably still called Kai.

Will it add a little nautical element, or the type of the game's otherworld, it may be a prophetic plot, and then travel to become a game's otherworldly NPC, or an ordinary time-traveling to the game's otherworld......

If only to compensate for these shortcomings (agitation, squirming, fantasy!) ), then......

Thinking about it this way, I am quite excited to open a new book.

But I'm graduating from college, and I'm worried about finding a job (damn it!) (〃> dish <))

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