There have been a lot of responses to the book reviews in the past two days, so let's make a special note here.

First of all, I said in the testimonial on the shelf, my writing ability is very poor, and the main purpose of writing this book is to practice writing.

On this premise, each volume of the book should be a different type of story.

This may be dissuading, but I don't want to fool readers who can see it.

What's more, you should be able to see this as well as the second volume is written here, right?

But even if I practice writing, I will do my best to write the story well, and I must ensure that I do my best at this point.

Then there is the question of redness that many people care about.

Her appearance parameters are impulsiveness and violence, and the naivety of losing her memory.

In my mind, she walks with the protagonist, which does not mean that the two people are completely on the same page.

But I didn't seem to write this well in the previous article, which led to a very violent reaction.

I'm also sorry for the misunderstanding caused by the writing ability.

It should also be noted here that the personalities of some of the people in this book will be consistent. Some characters don't stay the same.

Just like the protagonist Lindsay, his mentality and thoughts have changed a lot from the time he first arrived on the hidden edge to the time he left.

Today, I will open a single chapter, and by the way, I will record the problems found in the writing of the first volume.

Hopefully it will be improved in the future.

The first is that the foreshadowing is not obvious enough.

As a result, many plots and items will appear very abruptly. After all, readers and creators are not from the same perspective, and there are some things that I know in my heart, but readers certainly don't know.

This kind of information should have been written earlier, or partially revealed, just like the state of the dragon beast in the second volume.

The second is that the ratio between the system and the plot is a bit out of balance.

Survival games, equipment crafting, loot acquisition, these are all things that bring positive feedback to readers, and I love writing about them.

But it's a trap.

Writing like this, it will be easy to fall into a cool routine, and you will take care of one or the other, and grasp and develop the plot, so it will be out of balance.

Therefore, we must pay attention to the proportion and primary and secondary status of the two in the follow-up.

The third is the position.

In the volume of Hidden Frontiers, my original idea was that the conservative side and the radical side were opposed to each other, and it was simply a collision of two different positions, but after reading it, the reader exuded strong feelings.

This is something I didn't expect.

As a result, the reader's substitution sentiment was stronger than expected.

This requires more thought, and it can be a good thing or a bad thing, and it is the most important thing to pay attention to in writing.

Fourth, there is the problem of reality.

Because a power outage can completely interrupt my update rhythm, and my routine will become bad.

In the past two days, because of the problem of dangerous trees in the community, there has been a long-term power outage, and the result is that the time is further compressed, and there is less time for writing.

This kind of thing should be avoided as much as possible, so consider the issue of depositing.

To summarize these four points for the time being.

I will slowly improve it in the subsequent writing, and hopefully by the end of this book, these problems will be solved.

2023/11/23

Ah, yes, with a little bit at the end.

If you have any criticisms or good feelings when reading the book, please be sure to say it, which is an important reference for me to improve my writing ability.

I'm begging you here!

It's like a character like Red, who is a peer but has different positions, and I didn't think that many readers would not accept it before.

But don't swear, the ban will be removed.

(ps: I'll cry if I spray too hard)

Well......

In the future, I will make a summary after each volume.

(End of chapter)