Let's send a single chapter to explain it
First of all, I'm sorry.
I have been mwishing for many days before, and I don't know how to face it (mainly because I am a little evasive, I want to say it but I dare not say it, I only promise, but I have to say it)
This book is going to be cut.
[Here are some of my quibbles]
Before opening the book, it was too sloppy, and it was reckless to open the book without making it clear what to write, which led to the donkey's head not being in the horse's mouth.
I'll know how to write it later, but... The framework set up in front of me makes it difficult to write in the way I want to write, which is very tangled, and what I write has no quality and no state.
For the first few photos, I wanted to write a little more cheerfully.
What kind of cow throwing, what off-line character design....
[The main reason here is that I am a bit of a bull horn in the horns of "readers like to watch light" things, and mistakenly think that funny is easy, although funny is an excellent answer]
But being funny is a talent, a rare talent, and when I realized that I didn't have this talent and forcibly changed the character and route, it was too late....
And then there's the basic structure.
I think it's an interesting premise for a player to die in another world — and of course, it's inherently interesting. If I can write a funny joke well.
But I've added a "Infinite Stream" setting. In this regard, I was indeed influenced by "The Respect of the First Generation".
If this is just a "fantasy infinite stream", maybe it's still a decent story.
But when I combine them, it essentially becomes a "Three Realms Text".
The real world→ fantasy world← dungeon world
Pay attention to the symbol of my hair clipping, structurally speaking, as the intersection of the "Three Realms", the fantasy world should be set to the main world. But in fact, I am the main world in the real world, which leads to a big dislocation.
There is nothing to write about in the real world, and the fantasy world that should be written about is not mentioned because of the wrong structure.
The same is true for the writing of the small world of the dungeon, which should be written around the truth of one thing, that is, the structure of the later copy of the First Venerable. But... The absence of the overworld leads to a small copy of what I write, which is a very floating state.
These are screwed together, and the result is very wrong.
I didn't immediately eunuch and finish... It's very selfish, mainly trying to use this time to figure out what I should write and what kind of ideas I have.
I don't have the face to ask for anything for a new book.
But the number change will not be (mainly because the starting point is not allowed to merge now, I still have a long appointment)
See you all soon!
Baa scolding and not fighting back, not fighting back!