Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Angry Wen Leyu

Li Ye knew that the little spy at the same table was peeking at his own writing, but he had no intention of stopping it.

After all, he still needs to write this novel for a long time, and he can't hide Wen Leyu, who is close at hand.

Besides, why do you want to hide this little girl who is 12 points satisfied?

It's too raw, not to mention, and it's a waste of energy.

With those energies, it is better to eliminate the differences of the times in "Latent" cleanly and meticulously, so as not to cause some unnecessary trouble.

It is now 81 years without the Internet, and a lot of historical knowledge that will be common in later generations should not appear in a 19-year-old boy in a small northern town.

For example, the identity of Yu Zecheng, an important character in the novel.

Yu Zecheng was born in the Qingpu special training class in the 26th year of the Republic of China, and later joined the Countermeasures Section of the Heavy Qing Army Barrel Operations Department, and later transferred to the Director of the Confidential Section of the Jincheng Secret Bureau.

The names of these three units are not knowledge points that ordinary people should know in the eighties.

If Li Ye completely copied the various details in the "Latent" TV series, it would definitely arouse the great desire of readers to read, but it would also attract many people's suspicions.

How do you know so well?

You say you have a grandfather who fought against the war? Your grandfather is a blind old man, and he still understands this?

What? In the end, Yu Zecheng went over there?

Therefore, in this kind of knowledge points and specific plots, Li Ye must be vague, and it cannot affect the reader's reading experience, which is still challenging.

【Smack~】

[The sound of gunfire aroused Yu Zecheng's vigilance, and at this time, Zhang Mingyi, the telecommunications interceptor in charge of replacing him, appeared...... Zhang Mingyi was shot in the back......]

Li Ye had already written the plot of the Gao Dynasty in the first chapter, and when he was working hard to write, his elbow was lightly touched by Wen Leyu at the same table.

A writer hates being disturbed when the plot is coherent and described, but who makes him a little mute? You can't be angry!

Li Ye turned his head to look at Wen Leyu and found that her talking eyes were full of serious looks.

The note was pushed over, and it read: "Is this Yu Zecheng the protagonist of the novel?" If so, did you know that it would cause you big trouble? ”

The little girl's consciousness is quite high.

Li Ye is very happy, a girl really thinks about you, this heart alone is rare.

Of course, Li Ye's consciousness in this regard is higher than Wen Leyu's.

He is a person who has seen the great god of river crabs in later generations, not to mention this kind of position, even some descriptions in the novel, Li Ye will also distinguish them in detail.

For example, Director Dai, who appeared in the first episode of the TV series, has a very strong aura portrayal, after all, he is a big guy! There must be the spirit of the king.

But now if Li Ye describes his personal aura in the novel, then this novel will not be too much to say, and the trouble will not necessarily be small.

And when it comes to Zuolan, it is necessary to concentrate on the ink to bring out the vigor and positivity of the youth in the new era completely and thoroughly.

This is in line with the values of the times, and business writing! It is not easy to make money and art at the same time, and it is not shabbling.

Seeing a look of worry in Wen Leyu's eyes, Li Ye wrote on the paper: "No, justice will definitely defeat evil." ”

Wen Leyu looked at Li Ye's words, looked at him and frowned slightly, and after a few seconds, she suddenly wrote on the paper: "This Yu Zecheng, is it an underground D, isn't it?" ”

Little sister, are you trying to spoil me?

Li Ye wrote on the paper: "The level of a novel's reading experience lies in whether the uncertainty of the plot is strong enough, so I can't tell you the answer." ”

Wen Leyu's eyes blinked, his little mouth pursed, he turned his head to stop looking at Li Ye, and the little fart slipped to the other end of the bench and distanced himself from Li Ye.

She was angry, visibly angry.

The angry little beauty is interesting, Li Ye sighed secretly: "It's not that the old man is not determined enough, but the beauty is too sultry." ”

Li Ye didn't deliberately coax Wen Leyu, he thought that a good girl would self-regulate her bad emotions.

Sure enough, Li Ye didn't write for a while when he turned around, and the angry Wen Leyu secretly "slipped back" from the other end of the stool.

It's just that she didn't stretch her neck anymore and continued to peek at Li Ye's novels, twisting and retaining her little temper and dignity.

Li Ye picked up a few pages of letterhead he had written, pushed it in front of her, and said, "Help, you help our school proofread the manuscript, and then copy a copy, you need to use it when you submit it." ”

Wen Leyu was a little caught off guard, but she quickly took it, and the smile on the corner of her mouth showed the happiness in her heart at the moment.

Li Ye didn't tell him the "answer", she thought that Li Ye didn't believe her as a friend, but now that Li Ye asked her to proofread the manuscript, wasn't she thinking about it just now?

Proofreading is to find out the typos in the article and the inappropriate use of words, which is still a test of language skills.

Wen Leyu's language is actually stronger than Li Ye, Li Yeqiang is strong in test-taking ability, and Wen Leyu's scope of involvement and accumulation of words really surprised Li Ye.

It seems that over the years, not only has Mr. Ke taken great care about Wen Leyu's education, but the little girl is also a good child who is eager to learn.

But what Li Ye didn't know was that Wen Leyu, a primary school bully, quickly threw himself into the ground for the five bodies that Li Ye admired.

After she took Li Ye's first draft and letterhead, she began to carefully proofread and copy, but before she finished copying a page, she forgot her serious work and fell deeply into the plot of the novel.

[Zhang Mingyi fell to the ground, the gunshot wound and blood stains on his back were shocking, but Yu Zecheng didn't look at him again, but quickly retreated to the right dead corner of the door, pulled out the gun, and bent the flat end of his arm to aim forward.......

This position allows you to flexibly change the angle of fire, and it is not easy to be knocked out by a surprise attack........]

Wen Leyu had never seen such a novel description of the novel, she just read through the words on paper, and imagined in her mind a vigilant dog agent, in the face of sudden danger, made sharp firearms tactical movements.

In 81, there were already pirated martial arts novels from Hong Kong Island on the market.

But whether it is a person like Jin Guliang or more ordinary fiction authors, his writing technique is very different from the high-quality online articles forty years later.

Jin Guliang's literary skills are not to mention, their classic masterpieces can make readers have endless aftertaste.

The boutique online article may not have this kind of profound heritage, but it is better because the plot is novel and the brain is open.

High-quality online texts may be looked down upon by authentic martial arts, but if authentic martial arts are placed on online text websites, they are also unsuitable. (The martial arts channel at a certain point is really cold.) )

Wen Leyu read quickly, quickly read three pages of the letter, and then she went back and read it all over again.

After reading it again, she habitually touched Li Ye with her elbow and asked excitedly, "Li Ye, have you ever shot a pistol?" How can you write so skillfully? ”

Well,I'm very skilled.,As long as the teacher I like comes out with a new issue.,It's definitely going to be skilled once.。

"Ahem, my grandfather used to kill dozens of enemies, so I heard him talk about some ....... when I was a child"

Li Ye quickly spoke to cover up, and at the same time took a deep breath and silently recited "color is emptiness is color", and then completely regained his calm.

This body is too kind and loyal, Xiao Chu G is one, I can't even think about it.

Wen Leyu is also a pure girl, she didn't notice Li Ye's abnormal reaction at all, and she got closer again and asked Li Ye: "Will there be such a plot in the future?" ”

Li Ye said: "Not necessarily, but there must be similar plots." ”

Li Ye wrote this novel, since he weakened some sensitive data background, then he had to compensate in other aspects.

So he decided to highlight the tactics and reasoning in the field of special warfare, and later generations of spy war novels emerged in endlessly, and a lot of common-sense reasoning knowledge in them was absolutely amazing in this era.

For example, in the article of Ivy League, the eldest brother of the spy war, there was a plot of catching Japanese spies.

King Ning Yan had already confirmed that the other party was a woman, and found out that the other party had made a public phone in the grocery store.

But the grocery store owner could not describe the woman's physical characteristics.

King Ning Yan took advantage of the woman's comparison psychology and asked the proprietress of the grocery store.

Women look at women from different angles than men, men look at XXX, women look at clothes, hairstyles, perfumes, shoes and other external features.

Sure enough, the proprietress made an accurate description of the woman's clothes, makeup, and hairstyle, and also pointed out that the fabric of the flag worn by the woman was very expensive.

So King Ning Yama deduced the exact characteristics of the target, and found the hidden spy among the VIP customers of the high-end clothing store.

This kind of reasoning plot can arouse a cheer in the reader group forty years later, let alone 81 years?

Look at the spy war movies of this year, the radio station hidden in the popsicle box can cause an exclamation, so it is strange that the meticulous reasoning, burying pits, and broken hooks of later generations do not fascinate readers.

Wen Leyu was fascinated by Li Ye, and she unconsciously stuck to Li Ye's side,

Watching Li Ye write the novel slowly word by word, the anxious little Nizi couldn't wait to open his mind and read the follow-up plot to the end.

But when Li Ye looked over and asked her questions, Wen Leyu woke up that his work was not finished.

"You're done? Show me! ”

"What? I...... I'll copy it right away. ”