Chapter 35: How Can We Rob People and Things?
In the 80s, intellectual youths who liked literature would be given a positive name - Wenqing.
And in this, there are real Wenqing and fake Wenqing.
The former really likes literature and likes the joy of imagining freely in the ocean of literature.
The latter likes the various benefits attached to literature, such as the ability to improve one's social status, such as the ability to feel the adoring eyes of beautiful female literary youths without spending a dime.
Even....... Invented the word "lust and prostitution".
Teacher Ke is a true literary youth, and her literary level is not low, but the literary works she has read are basically pure literary works, or serious literary works.
The writing of this kind of literary work is very demanding, but its readership audience is also relatively picky.
Some people say that this kind of literary work is actually written by a small group of people for another small group of people to read, and those who can understand it feel more and more interesting the more they read it, but those who can't understand it don't feel very good.
For example, if there is no teacher's explanation of "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond", how long will it take for a primary school student to experience its perfect artistic conception?
Popular novels are much more down-to-earth, and fifth-grade elementary school students can watch and understand the Condor Shooting.
Online literature, one step further in this regard.
It is no longer entangled in the beauty of the text, but pays more attention to the description of the plot, with the purpose of constructing various plot pictures in the reader's mind, and trying to attract the reader's desire to read.
Therefore, as soon as Mr. Ke read Li Ye's "Latent", he was substituted by his novel descriptive technique.
Especially the mastery of the first stage, Yu Zecheng assassinated Li Haifeng.
[Li Haifeng stretched out his hand from the window of the car and threw the pistol in his hand on the ground, indicating his intention to give up resistance......... He wanted to see who was ambushing him. 】
[Li Haifeng saw Yu Zecheng holding a pistol, walked out agile and vigilant, and asked in disbelief: "You are alone?" ”】
Yu Zecheng single-handedly, using the fear of death, forced Li Haifeng to drop the gun, and walked out of the car to become a fish.
In addition, Yu Zecheng killed three traitors, and then touched their necks one by one to determine whether there was no heartbeat, which made Mr. Ke even more fascinated.
In "Condor Shooting", there is no bridge where people are slaughtered and their necks are touched, and the characters in it are all martial arts masters, and they can see through people's lives and deaths at a glance.
But "Latent" is not, what he describes is a living ordinary person.
Mr. Ke read page by page, and unconsciously read the last page, and then suddenly woke up.
When I looked at the time, it was already the second half of the night.
[This novel...... It seems to be useful........]
Teacher Ke suddenly felt a light flash in his mind, and thought of a possibility.
Her thoughts drifted quickly, and her mind raced fast.
I saw that she sometimes frowned, sometimes ashamed, sometimes sighed, sometimes gritted her teeth, and before she knew it, it was dawn.
。。
After the self-study class the next night, Mr. Ke invited Li Ye to his office.
Then she said to Wen Leyu: "Xiao Yu, you go out for a while first, I have something to talk to Li Ye." ”
Wen Leyu's eyes suddenly widened, and he looked at his mother without saying a word.
Teacher Ke sighed lightly and said, "I have some serious things to talk about with Li Ye, you go out and close the door and watch a little, okay?" ”
Wen Leyu looked at his mother suspiciously, and after making sure that he was not looking for trouble with Li Ye, he reluctantly left the office.
After Wen Leyu went out, Mr. Ke chatted with Li Ye.
"Li Ye-san, I heard that your grandfather is a veteran, and your father was also a glorious soldier, right?"
"Yes, Mr. Ke, the elders in the family did fight."
"So the elders in your family, or the elders you have come into contact with, have you ever worked in espionage?"
“...........”
Li Ye looked at Teacher Ke and said with a smile: "No, they are all soldiers of the front-line combat troops, why does Teacher Ke ask that?" ”
Teacher Ke said: "Li Ye, in fact, I read the novel you wrote yesterday, which is very exciting....... It's just that there are still some ........ missing."
"Lacking?"
Li Ye was surprised, he didn't expect Mr. Ke to ask him over at night, and closed the door mysteriously, actually to discuss the novel with him.
"Yes, it is lacking," Mr. Ke stroked his hair and said eloquently: "For example, when you describe Yu Zecheng's identity, you are not clear enough....... Zuo Lan's description is also very vague........"
Listening to Mr. Ke's "correction", Li Ye couldn't help but be a little stunned, because the deficiencies she pointed out were many sensitive knowledge points that Li Ye avoided in order to avoid trouble.
"Of course, you can't be blamed for this," Mr. Ke said, "After all, you have not been in contact with professionals, and many details are based on imagination, and the description must not be in place." ”
Li Ye said very modestly: "Yes, yes, I wrote this novel because I was inspired by "Eighteen Years in the Enemy Camp", and I imagined it out of thin air, just to write for fun, hehehehehe........"
The enemy camp has been in the camp for 18 years, and it is a spy war TV series that premiered in 81, which has been popular for a while, and it is also an excuse for Li Ye's novel materials that he has thought of a long time ago.
"You're writing for fun....... It may be a shame for many professional authors,"
Teacher Ke pondered for a moment, and finally said to Li Ye: "Actually, I can help you...... I can help you improve the flaws and omissions in the novel, and I can also help you polish some of the textual simplicity. ”
“..........”
Li Ye was really surprised.
Before he arrived, he envisioned various possibilities, such as discussing why he didn't continue to be selfless and provide more and richer new test questions for the whole class.
For example, with the attitude of "I'm all for your good", let him keep his distance from Wen Leyu, and don't think anything wrong.
But Li Ye would never have thought that Mr. Ke would help him "perfect" his novel.
Li Ye was silent for a few seconds, then slowly shook his head and said, "Teacher Ke, have you ever thought that if you make up and improve it according to what you just said, this book may not be published because it is too sensitive?" ”
“..........”
Teacher Ke's eyes shrank suddenly, and he looked at Li Ye incredulously, and he was a little unable to deal with it for a while.
Was he really an eighteen or nineteen-year-old child? How would such a subtlety be known?
Or did he not write the book himself, but was instructed by a master?
Teacher Ke pondered for a moment and said, "I really didn't pay attention to this, I thought the current situation was very good, so I didn't think about it in that direction." ”
Li Ye looked at Teacher Ke carefully and caught a trace of shame and disappointment in Teacher Ke's eyes.
He quickly analyzed Mr. Ke's intentions in his heart, and ruled out unreasonable possibilities.
When Li Ye comprehensively considered Mr. Ke's identity and current situation, he finally suddenly realized.
Li Ye immediately said: "Actually, I'm just blindly worried, some of the ideas you said are still very valuable, I will ponder and ponder after I go back, use them as soon as possible, and then ....... Would you count yourself a co-author? ”
“..........”
Teacher Ke was really shocked.
Li Ye just now surprised her, and Li Ye's performance at this moment can be said to have hit her heart.
How did he guess my intentions? I didn't tell Xiao Yu! 】
Teacher Ke couldn't figure out how Li Ye guessed his mind.
She only had this idea after reading Wen Leyu's manuscript last night, but she didn't tell anyone.
If you want to say that it is a coincidence, it is Li Ye who said it casually, then you look down on people.
Just looking at Li Ye's calm appearance at the moment, looking at his eyes that are completely inconsistent with his actual age, how can it be casual?
After all, a novel is not a thesis, and a co-author can drag a large number of votes after the first author, and novels rarely have a second author or co-author.
What's more, I can't help myself! originally thought that he was "lacking", Li Ye didn't need it, so why did he take advantage of others in vain?
[What should I do?] Promised? But will it be ....... Too shameless? 】
"That'...... All right! I'll hurry up and sort out some material for you, and see if you can use it, as for the co-authors......."
Teacher Ke was still very entangled, blushing and not agreeing directly.
But how fast did Li Ye react?
He immediately stood up and walked out: "Then I'll go back to Mr. Ke first, just let Wen Yueyu give me any materials." ”
Teacher Ke had no choice but to stand up and send Li Ye away, "Oh oh...... All right! ”
However, after Li Ye walked to the door, he first stopped and waited for two seconds, and waited until the light and hurried footsteps outside the door completely disappeared before reaching out to open the door and walking out.
After going out for more than 20 meters, Li Ye and Wen Leyu staggered.
The little mute's hands were twisted behind his back, and his eyes flickered, obviously a little uneasy.
Li Ye smiled and said, "It's okay, go back quickly!" I've got class tomorrow! ”
Wen Leyu looked at Li Ye, walked back quickly, and questioned Teacher Ke after entering the door.
"Mom, how can you do this? That novel is Li Ye's brainchild, how can we rob other people's things? ”
“.........”
Teacher Ke was silent for a long time before he asked the stubborn and angry Wen Leyu: "Xiaoyu, do you miss your father?" ”
“..........”
Wen Leyu was suddenly struck by lightning, and his thin figure shook several times in a row.
Teacher Ke asked again: "Xiaoyu, do you miss your brother?" ”
Wen Leyu hurriedly lowered his head to prevent his mother from seeing the tears in his eyes.
The mother and daughter were silent, and after a long time, Wen Leyu whispered: "Dad told me in the last letter...... He's doing well, so don't worry about it....... Mom."
"But I know Dad is having a bad time, he writes on papyrus and pencil ......."
"Ah~~"
Teacher Ke sighed lightly and hugged his daughter.
Husbands and wives in adversity have always reported good news and not bad news.
The husband, who is thousands of miles away, does not know that his daughter has become withdrawn and silent, and he also hopes that through his daughter, he can encourage his mother to cheer up and be optimistic.
Teacher Ke said softly: "Xiaoyu, you are already a big child, and there are some things that should be known to you.
We need help now, but we can help now, and we are willing to help us...... Less and less. ”
Wen Leyu dragged his nasal voice and asked, "But what does this have to do with Li Ye's novel?" ”
Teacher Ke said: "It's related, at least we can have a reason to enter the door, meet some people, and say a few words." ”
"A few words? Did it work? Wen Leyu asked suspiciously.
"It works!"
Teacher Ke answered very affirmatively, but in her heart, she was actually not so sure.
But Mr. Ke understands very well that even if it is a straw now, he must try his best to grasp it.