Teacher Chen Limin loves poetry, and every time he leads students out for spring outings or field activities, he asks students to come back to write an article or write one or two poems.

The essay is mainly a narrative essay, but you can also write argumentative essays and essays; He advocated that students write more poems and songs, and he felt that poems and songs could better condense the essence of the Chinese language and improve the level of use of language and writing. He hoped that the students should observe things carefully and carefully, ask more questions to find out their own shortcomings and shortcomings, discover subtle changes and secrets that others have not discovered, and boldly write down what they have observed and felt.

At present, the hills, woodlands and valleys are full of flowers, birds singing and fragrant, tourists are like ants, and the mountains are all over the wilderness, which is the benefit of playing.

Before leaving, Mr. Chen gave a task to each group leader: "Each group leader strictly implements the predetermined plan, and any student who does not listen to the group leader, acts privately, and has loose discipline must be dealt with seriously when he comes back, and will not be tolerated."

He also reminded the students that they must observe carefully and carefully what they want to observe this time, combine their imagination, give full play to their own strengths and their own points, and abandon clichés and articles that follow the crowd.

This time, I mainly went to a state-run Taoyuan to enjoy the greens, so I came back and asked the students to write one or several articles or poems about Taoyuan.

Mr. Chen specially contacted this state-owned farm, which is mainly based on the grafting of fruit seedlings, and has his own opinions on the grafting level of some important fruit trees, but now due to some impacts of the movement at that time, the leaders of the farm have been in short supply, and the production cannot be restored to the past level for a while, and half of the agricultural staff have been transformed.

Although such a piece of feng shui treasure land has begun to decline, it will naturally leave many valuable legacies. At this moment, the fruit trees in the garden are blooming to announce the good news: attracting butterflies, bees collecting honey, birds chirping, young girls spring, young people unrestrained, and children playing.

Teacher Chen said that although the management here is not as strict as in the past, as the younger generation that we are learning and growing, we must be strict with ourselves and be a model student. Therefore, we are strictly disciplined, we must report the situation to the farm before entering the orchard, and we are not allowed to set foot in the orchard without the consent of the other party.

The orchard quickly replied that Huanting School was welcome to organize students to come to our garden to enjoy the flowers, and was willing to send a number of guides to help the students guide some questions and answers on fruit tree knowledge. This surprised and delighted Mr. Chen. If you can get the explanation and guidance of those who have professional knowledge, the students will be like a fish in water on this trip to enjoy the flowers, and they will be better able to cognitively absorb and digest knowledge. The impression will be deeper and more lasting, which is of course a great thing, a great thing.

The orchard sent three guides. Before entering the orchard, the guide explained some common sense to the students about entering the orchard. The guide said, "Students, before we enter the garden, we must first recognize what we can see in the garden and learn what we can't learn in school." In our orchard, there are not only birds singing and flowers, but also various fruit tree seedlings, not only the refreshing air is intoxicating, but also the bird's nest and insect nest are confusing. However, there will also be many unpredictable risk factors in the intoxicated orchard, for example, when enjoying the flowers, you must be careful of being stung by bees, hurt by dead branches, weeds and thorns, and beware of being attacked by snakes and scorpions, these are potential risks, and you need to be careful at all times. As for pollen allergies, poisoning, this situation is not impossible, but it rarely occurs, if there is a student who has had this situation before, then it must be brought up to us or the teacher first, so that we can take precautions in advance to avoid unnecessary injury.

As soon as the guide's voice fell, Mr. Chen continued: "Students, these three comrades are our best teachers today, we must listen to the words of these three teachers, and implement the guidance plan given to us by the three teachers. ”

The students said "yes" in unison.

In the first class on Monday, Mr. Chen entered the classroom with a thick pile of composition books, and joy was written all over his face.

As soon as he entered the classroom, he didn't have time to put the composition on the podium before he shouted to his classmates who were standing in the corridor of the classroom: "Come in, everyone, class, class." ”

"Students, I have good news to tell you today, through the flower viewing tour last Thursday, everyone wrote very good articles and poems on Friday. The teacher is very happy that the students' understanding of their spring outing has improved to an unprecedented height, and they have written a good article, the teacher is very satisfied, and he is very happy and happy, the teacher has such a student, it is a glorious thing, a few minutes before today's class, first to explain the poetry and songs of the students. The students wrote a lot of poetry exercises to express their feelings and experiences on this spring outing, and the writing was excellent, which was wonderful. The teacher didn't sleep well all night, and she was always excited, so she wanted to share her students' own works with more students as soon as possible. ”

"Students, in the period of the splendid culture of the motherland, a large number of literary talents will emerge, all of whom can write masterpieces that are popular, eternal, and famous for centuries. Chinese culture has been carried up and down for 5,000 years, and the masterpieces are like ants, and the sweat cows are abundant. All these are the precious treasures of our ancient Chinese culture, and the ancient cultural heritage needs to be passed on from generation to generation. ”

I don't think that our generation is inferior to the generation, that is impossible, our Chinese civilization has developed to this day, science is advancing by leaps and bounds, and some things that used to take decades and hundreds of years to develop, we modern people only need a few years, months or even a few days to break through and achieve, this is what we can say is inferior to the ancients? Good students, as soon as I talk about history, I will go far away, so I will quickly come back and get to the point.

Students, I will first read the following poem, and then explain and analyze the advantages and disadvantages of this poem.

The moon is silver dew, and the night is closed, one by one into the peach orchard;

Although the peach blossoms are not left, teachers and students are happy to travel for a day.

The beginning of this poem is good, through his own imagination and thinking, the metaphor is written very lively, and the sentence "although the peach blossom is difficult to stay," the artistic conception is special, after all, in addition to the peach blossom in the nursery, there are many other flowers and trees, are competing for beauty, therefore, can not only care about the peach blossom, you need to pay attention to the perfect combination of man and nature.

The second poem is more old and spicy, which shows that the author is a veteran of writing poetry.

Spit on the branches and fight each other, and fall dust piece by piece;

Dare to ask your classmates if you know? Life is too smooth and regretful.

A 'spit' word, the peach blossom is written so wonderfully, spit on the branches to compete with each other, when it withers, it is just a molecule of dust, just like life, ups and downs, very good, overall rigorous structure, rich imagination, it is a good thing to have the ambition of a great poet.

The third poem also has a surprise, please see:

The shades are suitable to celebrate each other, and the pear blossoms are buried in the soil with tears;

Peach gum is more expensive than agate, and it is better to enjoy flowers than to go green.

When I read this poem, I was thinking about a question, what does the author want to express? Is it the beauty of peach blossoms and pear blossoms or the mutual foil of flowers and leaves? Later, he wrote about peach gum and agate, and the author's rich experience made him unexpected.

In the four famous novels "Dream of Red Mansions", Daiyu buries flowers with words: 'Peach blossoms with tears', students, do you think it is very interesting, why did Cao Xueqin write such an artistic conception? That's because the author is writing with his heart, and he writes some artistic conceptions to be fascinating. ”

Speaking of 'peach gum', maybe many students haven't figured out what this thing is, in fact, this is a kind of 'resin' substance secreted from the peach tree, the shape is similar to amber and agate, it is said to be usable, the nutritional value is still very high, it is a kind of beauty brain nourishing health products, but I have not eaten this kind of thing, and I don't know how it tastes, I believe this classmate has tasted it, otherwise, how would he know that it is more expensive than agate?

Well, there are many more works below, if I have time, I will explain them one by one, please take a look at the following one:

Recruiting bees and butterflies counts it as ruthless, and pieces fall into lonely souls;

The flowering period has an end and must be exhausted, and the fruitful period is endless.

What is the power of this poem? I talked about bees, butterflies, and regrets about the blossoming and falling of flowers, but the result of flowering is a lot of fruit, so isn't it going further? Very good, this kind of poetry is not bad in the adult world, not to mention that you are only a junior high school student, it can be seen that the 'future life is terrible', students, it is not impossible to study hard and work hard to be a great poet.

Okay, and there are some good poems below, so I'll explain them a little faster due to time constraints. Come on, listen to the poems and read them!

The Huangping flower garden has a large belly, devouring a hundred gardens into one side;

After the flowering period, the fragrant fruit is pregnant, and the grains are full and ideal.

And also:

Three feet above the ground lime white, over the top of the branch flowers more fragrant;

Cordyceps in the field listens to the complaint, why should the grapes smile peach blossoms.

And also:

Caiyun is a guest in the peach garden, taking in the world;

Although the flowering period is short, it must be rewarded in the end, and the white clouds are endless.

The bell has been ringing, and the students are still enthusiastic and refuse to leave class, Teacher Chen said, we are the most greedy, and we can't take up the time of other teachers, I am looking for a thought, and then the class is over.

Spots are dotted with a branch of red, and the pear blossoms are everywhere to give birth to the east wind;

Good soil breeds green seedlings and strong seedlings, and it is easy to be in the flowers.