The headquarters of the end novel network.

Cen Xiuhui sat down at her desk after the morning meeting.

looked at the data of Zhu Xian on the screen in front of him with a serious face.

Yesterday Zhu Xian was on the shelves.

Lu Yiming sent four chapters in one go.

Seeing that the number of subscriptions for the first chapter was only two thousand six, Cen Xiuhui couldn't help but sigh and said, "It's only two thousand six, I hope he can keep updating!" ”

Zhu Xian's writing is really good.

But whether it is the plot style or rhythm, it is a little unsuitable for the current online literature circle.

In her opinion, Lu Yiming wants to preach at the finish line.

If you don't think about changing the style and pace of the story, it will take a long time to accumulate fans.

However, the first order of 2,006 is also quite a good result.

Take a screenshot of the data page.

found Lu Yiming from the chat software and sent it over.

And enter the text: "The first order score is not bad!" Come on! ”

Meanwhile.

Lu Yiming was looking at his data panel.

......

Suboccupation (2): Web Novel Writer (D-level 10021/1000000)

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Skills: Lucky Aura [Passive], Destiny [0/3], Vegetable Cultivation Silver [1855/2000], Lucky Drop LV1, Eagle's Hand

Item Backpack: Web Novel Writer D-Rank Pack, Energy Drink*4, Lucky Treasure Chest LV1*88, European Emperor Elixir*3, Lucky Paper Crane, Alternate Time and Space Literature Extractor

"! How is a million!! ”

Yesterday he knew he had upgraded.

But it's a bit much, and I haven't had time to take a closer look.

Over the weekend, the two took the time to look at the car and picked up an Oriental Peugeot 408 worth more than 100,000 yuan.

Yesterday morning, I went to complete the formalities with the people at the 4S store, and in the afternoon I was busy with live broadcasts, and when I got home in the evening, I couldn't help but try energy drinks.

So it's just a quick glance at the data panel.

Thought the upgrade would only require a 100,000 subscription.

This million subscriptions can be upgraded, which directly made Lu Yiming break the idea of exploding.

If it's 100,000, he'll explode forty chapters.

But a million.

He didn't have 400 chapters in reserve.

At this point, the edited message was sent.

Looking at the content, he replied with a smile: "The results are very good!" Thank you! ”

Lu Yiming is still relatively content.

To put it bluntly, this novel is not his hard work, and the poor grades have nothing to do with his code word machine, but there is still a little disappointment.

After all, this is a novel that is systematically rated as platinum.

At first, he thought he could directly become a platinum author with this book.

An energy drink that looks at the backpack of the item.

A strange smile immediately appeared on his face.

"Hey, hey, hey~ That's a good thing! It's much more powerful than the blue pill, I hope I can draw it out a little more! Five bottles is really not enough! ”

Although he knew the effect of the blue pill, he had never experienced it personally, but he dared to pack the ability of this energy drink to definitely not lose to the blue pill.

Just because he went to play CSGO like no one else afterwards, Fu Xiaoli slept until dawn.

I remember how I felt after using it.

Lu Yiming couldn't help but sigh: "If this thing can be taken out and analyzed for batch production, the richest man in the world will be easy, right?" ”

He shook his head.

"That's not right! If this thing can be mass-produced, World War III is probably because of it! ”

Infinite stamina!

And there are no side effects.

The product of the cross-century.

After scanning the items in the inventory, he looked at the D-class bundle and opened it directly.

[Congratulations to the host for obtaining the exclusive skill work sublimation of the online novel writer.] 】

Sublimation: The work obtained from the Alternate Temporal Literary Works Extractor can be optimized to a certain extent.

Look at the skill introduction.

Lu Yiming's eyes lit up.

Got the system from the beginning of October.

It's been more than two months now.

From the first deputy job to choose the game anchor, to the second deputy job to choose the author, the skills given by the system are basically beneficial to the selected deputy position.

At this moment, Lu Yiming somewhat understood why it was an auxiliary system.

The main function is an auxiliary.

At this time, Lu Yiming couldn't wait to use the new skills.

[Is "Zhu Xian" optimized? ] 】

Zhu Xian Lu Yiming has carefully read the full text.

The overall feeling is that it is a very good novel.

But the disadvantages are also very obvious.

He reads novels in middle school, and what suits him is not necessarily suitable for current readers.

And for this book, he feels that the style of painting has changed abruptly since he went down the mountain, which is in stark contrast to the previous dozens of chapters.

From the beginning to the Seven Veins Huiwu, the whole story is funny, funny, and funny, especially the burning stick, he can laugh so much that he leans forward and closes, and he can't wait to read it in one go.

Among them, there are several tear-jerking points: first, Baguio held an umbrella for Zhang Xiaofan and died; the second is to worship Baguio and pity himself; the third is that Ghost Li and Lu Xueqi reunited, and they were speechless; Fourth, Tian Buyi's death.

Let him personally summarize this "Zhu Xian", first of all, the emotional aspect is really well written, the first 80 chapters can be given 10 points, the middle 80 chapters can be given 8 points, and the last 80 chapters feel a little unfinished, he can only give 6 points, a total of 8 points.

Of course.

This is from the reader's point of view.

If he were the author, the book would only deserve to be read on his knees and looking up...

Thoughts began to retract.

Lu Yiming silently confirmed in his heart.

【Ding! 】

[Zhuxian optimization success! ] 】

The same process as the previous process of obtaining Zhu Xian.

The optimized Zhuxian appeared directly in my mind.

It's nine o'clock in the morning.

Until 11:30 p.m., he had been sorting out the difference between the optimized Zhuxian and the pre-optimization.

The most obvious change is that the word count has been reduced.

For example, the vampire bat at the mouth of the blood-dripping cave, the original text used 10,000 words to describe it, and the system directly brushed over the plot.

At the same time, it enriches the details of fighting with people and the depiction of Zhang Xiaofan's relationship with Lu Xueqi and Baguio.

Weakened the side plots such as treasure hunting in the plot.

Some important characters in the play also gave them a clear ending.

See the end of the optimization of the immortals.

Zhang Xiaofan retired after success, returned to the original Caomiao Village, and finally got together with Lu Xueqi; Xiaohuan joined hands with Zhou Zhou Xian, Wild Dog Daoren, and Jin Zhu'er to explore the rivers and lakes; Lin Jingyu eventually became the head of Qingyun Mountain; And the last Yuhime of the demon clan embarked on a journey to find the Hehuan Bell.

Lu Yiming opened his eyes and muttered, "So Baguio still hasn't been resurrected..."

The front has changed so much.

Lu Yi thought that Baguio's ending would also change.

But it's not bad!

At least it's much more comfortable to watch than the original ending.

"Wait! Doesn't that mean I have to rewrite it? ”

Lu Yiming, who reacted, frowned slightly.

Zhuxian has updated almost 200,000 words, and at least half of the places to be changed are not low.

Immediately looked at the screen.

Above is the chat box and edit.

After thinking about it, he still made up his mind to change the text, after all, the optimized Zhuxian is more in line with the current online literature circle, and maybe the results will skyrocket after the change.