Chapter 13, you should fit the direction of the plot
Revenge for the royal family surnamed Su is Fu Chengze's spiritual support step by step to the present, and now someone hints at him that "your life experience is different", it is difficult for a person to calm down.
Although it is a hostile position to this holy doctor girl, I have seen her superb medical skills in the past six months, I know her cold and unspeakable character, and I know that she is relying on the Yuanlu faction behind her, Fu Chengze believes in her words, and if you want to compare her own life experience, the little emperor can be completely stupid or not.
"The biggest beneficiary is the most likely real culprit behind the scenes," Lu Xianchen said calmly, "Do you want me to say your name?" ”
Fu Maoan fell, and the military power belonged to the Liang family, which is the biggest beneficiary, which is self-evident.
Fu Chengze put a bottle of pills on the table: "Evidence." ”
"You can go and visit your teacher, the head of the Xiantai Hospital," Lu Xianchen said calmly, "Go and ask him whether your grandfather Fu Maoan was given a cup of poisoned wine to death or died of illness in prison." ”
Lu Xianchen's eyes fell on the pill: "And coincidentally, the time of the onset of the illness happened to be his best friend, the night after the old man of the Liang family paid a visit." ”
"However, it was the Empress Dowager Mingxi who took my grandfather to prison, which is always right." Fu Chengze asked.
"Although Imperial Doctor Fu is a practitioner of medicine, he should have heard of the 'bitter meat plan'."
Fu Chengze's eyes widened: "You mean ......?"
"When Princess Dilan wanted to ascend the throne, the ministers objected, but the princess stood in the court early, and her political achievements are obvious to all, although there are voices of opposition, but no one wants to be this bird, but it was General Fu Maoan who took the initiative to stand up and swore to oppose the princess in power, so that the ministers echoed and embarrassed the princess." Lu Xianchen said.
"Later, the princess took power, and took General Fu Mao'an to kill the chickens and monkeys, and after he was imprisoned and died, there was no opposition from the DPRK and China, and the princess sat firmly in the country, which is of course the simplest explanation, but is this really the case?"
"There is no basis for words." Fu Chengze frowned and spoke.
Lu Xianchen couldn't wait a little, and spoke a little faster: "You can go and ask your teacher first, ask how the old general Fu Maoan died, and by the way, inquire about what happened to the Fu family's men and women after they became slaves, and whether the grandson of a criminal minister with a surname is qualified to enter the Tai Hospital." ”
After saying a few words, Fu Chengze broke out in a cold sweat.
Lu Xianchen didn't want to say more, stood up, picked up the bottle of pills that Fu Chengze put on the table, and smelled it pretendedly, but in fact, he was asking the system if this was the right antidote.
The system reluctantly gave a "yes" answer.
Lu Xianchen took the medicine and left.
The little emperor was sick, accompanied by the eldest princess, and when Lu Xianchen pushed the door in, he watched, the sister and brother leaned together, just like the most ordinary sisters and brothers in ordinary people.
"Xianchen, what should I do, Ah Mo's burn hasn't subsided yet." Su Fengyao said bitterly.
Lu Xianchen stretched out his hand, took out the medicine bottle, poured out a pill, and fed it to Su Fengmo.
Su Fengyao trusted Lu Xianchen unconditionally, and didn't ask her where the medicine came from, just asked, "How long does it take to work?" ”
Seeing that the little emperor took the medicine, Lu Xianchen breathed a sigh of relief: "Let's see if he can survive it." ”
"Her Royal Highness the eldest princess, go back and rest, Your Majesty, I'll just keep it here, I don't see that your face is not very good......"
Su Fengyao was very sad, her spirit was really not very good, seeing that it was twilight, thinking of coming back at night, she nodded and agreed to go back to rest.
Lu Xianchen was stunned for a moment, and reacted consciously: "There seems to be a plot point here, right?" ”
The system said numbly: "Host, after your round of trouble, there are more pits in the novel, do you need to take a look?" ”
Lu Xianchen didn't want to see it, but he couldn't stand the system and pressed it on her face.
First of all, Shen Feng is still in prison, the prison will be able to hold Liang Bin in the future, and of course Shen Feng will be able to be locked up now, it is unrealistic to expect him to escape from prison by himself, and how to release it is a problem.
But Lu Xianchen, who is familiar with the plot, thought of a countermeasure early: "I'll just release this for him, in the original book, Shen Feng and the female supporting role had a childhood sweetheart, didn't they?" ”
The system searched around and found that this was indeed the case, and even the female partner almost killed the heroine, and later it was found that she was going to be executed, but Shen Feng knelt down to intercede for her, and the heroine had a very high opinion of Shen Feng at that time, so she had to agree to his request, so that this emotional line had twists and turns.
At that time, the childhood sweetheart in that paragraph was inserted very suddenly.,It's purely a forced continuation of life when the female partner has to die and can't die.,There is no foreshadowing in the preface.,The afterword is not mentioned again.,The system wants to delete this paragraph.。
"Okay, host, we helped you delete the pit that was set up and dug it back by your own hands, you can choose to add it, but if you want to make up this paragraph, you still have to maintain the existence of this setting in the later stage, and you can't have a collapse plot like 'five male protagonists beating female partners' later." The system says.
Lu Xianchen couldn't ask for it, and hurriedly said: "Yes, just make up for it, you didn't tell me in the future, don't change the plot blindly." ”
She continued to explain: "This time I exchanged information with Imperial Physician Fu for an antidote, and it was also an information exchange, that is, I would not leak the matter of his poisoning by default, that is, only I knew that Shen Feng was wronged, plus the previous setting of my childhood sweetheart, I went to save him in private, and I didn't explain it to others, how reasonable, right?" ”
She seemed to be right, but the corners of the system's mouth twitched, and she always felt that it would be another big bad article to continue to change according to the logic of the host.
"The second new pit, today's plot point, should be Su Fengyao guarding his brother who is almost stupid, it's uncomfortable, wait for a while Wang Weice will come, the two have a big quarrel, and then Wang Weice left angrily, and only then did he clearly realize his feelings for the princess for the first time." The system's tone was a little cold, "But you persuaded the princess to go back and rest." ”
Lu Xianchen was really in a hurry, and he really forgot about this key plot point.
"Well, Wang Weice likes Su Fengyao, this is a process, he doesn't necessarily like it when there is such a moment, he can have such a process of realizing his mind step by step, I think the idea of a certain moment should not be so important, right?" Lu Xianchen argued.
"No, host, the heartbeat is sometimes a matter of that moment," the system said, "There is a moment, you feel that the person in front of you is very beautiful, which makes your heart move, although the heartbeat has been brewing for a long time, but the moment of triggering is definitely not to save if you want to save it, and the breaking of the ground of feelings needs an opportunity." ”
Lu Xianchen muttered: "And this is the case? Why is it so troublesome? ”
"Host, as a writer of romance novels, don't tell me you're single in the womb." The blue woolen ball was pinched into a crooked heart shape.
Lu Xianchen, who has really never been in love: "......"
I was taunted.
"Then I'll pretend to be sick now and pull the princess back?" Lu Xianchen considered, "Otherwise, let Wang Weice go to the princess's room to find her, and seeing the tired sleeping face of the eldest princess is similar to seeing the sadness of the princess, which can trigger heartbeat." ”
The system had to give her a "stop" gesture: "Host, our system can affect the direction of the plot within a reasonable range, and can help the character implant memory, but it can't affect the character's emotions and true thoughts, so you need to act, Wang Weice is not moved, what kind of scene is heartbroken, this is not something we can decide, your 'almost' idea is not within the detection range of system parameters." ”
"Then that's too much variable, isn't it?" Lu Xianchen couldn't help but didn't roll his eyes, "Then even if I didn't let Su Fengyao go just now, the sister who knew that my younger brother might be saved must be different from the eldest princess who collapsed before, wouldn't that be possible but not trigger my heartbeat?" ”
"Host, the little emperor should have been stupid." The system said, "This is also a key plot point, but you forcibly changed it, causing a butterfly effect that spreads widely, which is the price of destroying the original work." ”
Lu Xianchen was stunned.
The system deliberately replaced the voice with a mechanical voice without any ups and downs: "You know, the little emperor is stupid This is a key plot point, and Wang Weice realized that his heart is different, Wang Weice missed this recognition, but he himself likes Su Fengyao, he can't realize it this time, sooner or later he can realize it, but the little emperor is stupid, he is not stupid this time, he may not be stupid in the future, everything may change with it - the change of key plot points, the follow-up impact is huge." ”
The little emperor was lying next to Lu Xianchen, maybe it was a little cold, he swayed and moved, and his face was attached to Lu Xianchen's hand.
Lu Xianchen touched his head, it was still very hot, but she felt that it was not so hot.
"Sister Slim Dust, is it Sister Slim Dust?" Su Fengmo said in a daze.
"Yes, Your Majesty, Ah Mo, I'm here, I'm here." Lu Xianchen responded.
The little emperor in a daze seemed to be greatly comforted, and hugged her forearm, so that Lu Xianchen had to lie on his side and hug his arm.
Looking at the fragile and cute appearance of the little emperor, Lu Xianchen's heart was so soft that he was confused.
"I don't regret it, I don't regret what the plot has turned into, such a child shouldn't be used as a tool in the first place."
The system wanted to say something more, but Lu Xianchen spoke: "You also said that my original work is a superb bad article, and there are countless pits, so what else can I change, isn't it good to rewrite it directly?" Now I'm going to rewrite it, according to the big framework of the original work, I will write a new article, isn't it better than making up one pit after another? ”
"Host,It's not like this," the system is a little anxious, "Although the original book is rotten, the overall framework can go down, you know the general direction of the plot, and our system can help you change it, if this is completely out of the way, into a dead end, we can't do anything." ”
"That's what I'm going to do!" Lu Xianchen was a little angry, "You are an auxiliary system, you are here to assist me, I can change it as I say, I said that if you want to save people, you want to save people, just like the reader complained that the Empress Dowager Mingxi can't be too a tool, and the little emperor must be miserable, just to make the heroine sad?" ”
Lu Xianchen paused: "Everyone has their own life, there is no reason for anyone to exist for whom, I think, every character should have their own life." ”
"Host, there are no readers complaining about the little emperor's tool man," the system said bitterly, "The existence of the little emperor is very reasonable, you don't have to be too emotional, if this book is not recognized by readers, you will not be able to return home in the end, you must understand this, you must remember the task you came." ”
The smile on Lu Xianchen's face disappeared.