Chapter 23 Teacher Gao's Love

This lecture was quite successful, judging from the reaction on the spot, everyone's acceptance was quite high, and Jiang Yulou was also relieved.

At the beginning, he was so nervous that he couldn't do it, but fortunately, when the state came, he would seem calm.

If he is not ousted, he is a success, and he will not ask for more.

After almost an hour of talking, his voice was hoarse.

When he went to the back to rest, Jiang Yulou happened to see Teacher Gao.

"Teacher Gao, if there is water, I'm dying of thirst."

He shouted, but Mr. Gao didn't respond.

He found that Mr. Gao's face was quite strange, and asked, "Mr. Gao, what's wrong with you, it's because I just said something wrong and the leader is unhappy?" ”

Teacher Gao shook his head and said, "That's not true. ”

"Hey, scared me. You just didn't say a word, and your expression was strange, I thought you were in some kind of trouble. ”

"The leader in charge of the cultural mouth in the county is very satisfied with your performance, and I am almost embarrassed to keep praising you in front of me."

"That's why?"

"Jade Building, ......"

"You say."

"How did you learn to lie at such a young age, when did I say those things to you?"

Jiang Yulou's face was sneering, "Isn't this a means of writing, I can be regarded as learning and using it." ”

"You, use less means in the future." Teacher Gao couldn't laugh or cry.

Jiang Yulou's convincing words just now almost made him wonder if he was suffering from Alzheimer's, and he couldn't even remember what he said.

"No, no, you can rest assured." Jiang Yulou scratched his head and said, "Teacher Gao, now that the lecture is over, let's go back?" ”

Teacher Gao smiled and said, "What's the hurry, the leader wants to see you." ”

"Huh?" Jiang Yulou looked at him with a stunned expression.

For the first time in his life, Jiang Yulou accompanied the leaders to eat in the canteen of the county government, and he couldn't talk about the pressure, and he was not uncommon in his previous life.

It's just that this time it's different, what does the leader say to him?

It's heavy.

This puts him under pressure not to fit his age.

Fortunately, the leader did not give him any impossible tasks, but only encouraged him to write hard and not to be burdened. If you don't get into college, the county can arrange clerical jobs.

Jiang Yulou was naturally very grateful and said that if he was not admitted to the university, he would definitely obey the arrangement.

On the way back, Mr. Gao asked solemnly, "Yulou, just now you told the leader that you are already writing the second work?" ”

"That's right, I've already started writing, and it shouldn't take long to finish it." Jiang Yulou said.

"Will the time be too tight, you are now the face of the county, if the second work is not ideal......" Teacher Gao didn't say the rest of the words, he believed that Jiang Yulou also knew it in his heart.

Jiang Yulou said with a smile: "Don't worry, the reason why I wrote quickly this time is because inspiration comes quickly, and I naturally write like a god." ”

"Okay, don't be stressed." Teacher Gao thought for a while and asked again, "Where are you going to vote this time?" ”

Jiang Yulou didn't think much about it, and said directly: "Look at which magazine gives more, "Contemporary", "Zhongshan", "Harvest" and "October" are all fine. ”

"Good boy, did you pick it up?" Teacher Gao was ruthless and said, "If you don't write it well this time, and several big magazines won't accept it, the teacher will think of a way for you." ”

"Teacher Gao......"

Jiang Yulou was very moved, Lao Gao really had a heart.

Back at school, Jiang Yulou received another praise, but unfortunately the school's finances did not allow it, and there was no material reward.

……

With Jiang Yulou's guidance, Tang Yuewen has her own writing ideas.

The story is already there, she just needs to write the novel.

If she doesn't understand, she will also take the initiative to ask, and while learning, the relationship between the two has become more intimate.

After some hard work, the first draft of the novel was finally completed.

"How's it going, can it still be in the eye?"

After the novel is finished, it is natural to hand it over to Jiang Yulou, the person who gave her ideas.

The number of words is not much, and Jiang Yulou finished reading it quickly.

Tang Yuewen's novel plot design is very clever, on a rainy night, Wenwen, a female intellectual, who returned to the city, met a young man who took the initiative to take her home, which made Wenwen suspicious.

Wenwen first thought that the young man had bad intentions, and then thought that he was a "road suitor" who acted at the opportunity; After the young man left, Wenwen thought that he was fishing for a long time, which caused a series of suspicions and speculations, but the young man never showed up. The course of events in the novel is "from existence to nothingness", while Wenwen's psychological process is "from nothing to existence", from distrust to trust.

Jiang Yulou praised: "The novel is well written, and the reverse intersection of the plot line and the psychological line makes the structure of the novel appear rigorous and ingenious. Moreover, this novel shows the romantic and persistent love ideals of a young female intellectual, which is both clear and firm, and presents an aesthetic tone. ”

He looked at Tang Yuewen and nodded: "With your age and life experience, it is already very powerful to be able to write such a novel." ”

After receiving Jiang Yulou's praise, Tang Yuewen was naturally very happy.

However, his words of appreciation were a little awkward.

After all, she wrote it all under the guidance of the other party. So, is he selling himself and boasting?

Tang Yuewen's little complaint in her heart is naturally not for outsiders, and she wants to know now whether her novel can be voted "Contemporary".

"Yulou, do you say that the novel I wrote is qualified to vote for "Contemporary"?"

"The writing is fine, but it doesn't conform to the style of "Contemporary", and the possibility of acceptance is relatively low, so I recommend that you vote for our local magazine in Shaanxi."

Jiang Yulou thought for a while and gave his own suggestions.

At this time, there were not no female writers who became famous, but there were very few.

This short story by Yue Wen can be said to be one of the few novels that shows a female perspective, which is fresh and refined.

In just a few thousand words, it expresses the persistent pursuit of beautiful and innocent emotions by women today, revealing a fresh, simple and bright girlish voice, reflecting the ideal of a better life for young people returning to the city.

Such a short story, even if it can't be liked by everyone, is still a masterpiece.

It's definitely okay to publish, as long as you find a good platform.

"Oh yes!"

After Tang Yuewen got Jiang Yulou's affirmation, she opened her big black eyes and looked at him without blinking, her eyes were full of joy.

"I can't lie to you."

The girl's coquettishness is cute, and Jiang Yulou even has the urge to pinch her delicate nose.

But thinking of the conservatism of women in this era, I can only do it.

After reading it, there is nothing to revise, as for the submission, there is no need to rush first, he remembers that Jian Xing has a teacher in the editorial department of "Yanhe" magazine, but he can ask him.

So, Jiang Yulou took Tang Yuewen's manuscript and went to Teacher Jian's house.