After New Year's Day, Jiang Yulou was full of energy, and the drama script "Rise to Fame", which took him several months, was finally created.

This drama work can be said to be the one in which he has invested the longest time, the most revisions, and the most attentive. Thanks to Sun Qingsheng's guidance, otherwise it would be difficult to rely on him alone.

Now, the script has been written, but there is still a question, whether the script is qualified and whether there is any change, but we still need to listen to Sun Qingsheng's suggestions.

So, he couldn't wait to go to Sun Qingsheng's house with the script.

When I went, Sun Qingsheng was having dinner with his wife.

"Yulou is here, I haven't eaten yet, come and sit down and eat together."

"No, no, I've eaten it, my wife."

"After eating, then eat less, there are more dumplings today, and the old man and I can't eat so much."

"Oops, that's embarrassing."

"It's just an extra pair of chopsticks."

The master and wife were too enthusiastic, and it was difficult to resist the hospitality, so Jiang Yulou could only sit down and eat in the living room with a cheeky face.

Hey, don't mention, the pork and leek dumplings wrapped by my wife have thin skin and thick filling, and they are particularly fragrant. After Jiang Yulou took a bite, he suddenly felt a great appetite, and ate more than twenty in one go.

Jiang Yulou leaned back on the sofa, rubbed his stomach comfortably, and praised with satisfaction: "Master, the dumplings you made are so delicious." ”

"It's good if you like it, say it in advance next time you come, and my wife will make dumplings for you." Mrs. said happily.

After a long while, Sun Qingsheng finished eating.

The master knew that the two of them were going to talk, so she refused Jiang Yulou's help, and after cleaning up the table by herself, she went to the kitchen to wash the dishes.

Sun Qingsheng elegantly wiped his mouth with a towel, and after taking a sip of tea, he said: "Yulou, you kid has nothing to do but go to the Three Treasures Palace, it's so late, you are looking for me and you have encountered writing problems again?" ”

Jiang Yulou said aggrievedly: "Oh, Mr. Sun, am I so unbearable in your eyes?" ”

Sun Qingsheng smiled and said, "Don't talk about those useless kids, I've been your teacher for so long, I don't know what kind of person you are." ”

Jiang Yulou sneered: "That's the case, I finished writing the script yesterday, don't I want to ask you to correct it." ”

As he spoke, he took out the script of "Rise to Fame" from his bag and respectfully handed it to Sun Qingsheng.

Sun Qingsheng took the script and said in surprise: "It's done so quickly? ”

From the time he instructed Jiang Yulou to write the script, to today, Jiang Yulou came to him with the script, how much time has passed, and this speed is inevitably too fast, right?

No, this script has to be checked for him, such a good story can't be wasted.

Thinking of this, Sun Qingsheng nodded at him: "Yulou, although creation pays attention to speed, quality is more important." Especially if the story you tell is so good, don't let the pursuit of speed go to waste. ”

"Teacher, don't worry, I know it in my heart." Jiang Yulou said quite confidently.

Everything that needs to be said has been said, and it depends on how well the script is written.

So, Sun Qingsheng sat on the sofa, holding the script in his hand, and read it quietly.

In the process of reading the script, he sometimes frowned, sometimes smiled, which made Jiang Yulou's heart go up and down.

After a while, he put down the script in his hand, but he didn't say anything, but pondered.

After a while, Sun Qingsheng looked up at Jiang Yulou.

"Teacher, how is the script, you have something to say." Jiang Yulou said uneasily.

Sun Qingsheng smiled: "What's the matter, nervous?" ”

"Sort of, the first time I'm writing a screenplay, I'm afraid of messing up." Jiang Yulou nodded honestly.

He really put his heart into the script of "Rise to Fame", whether it is the characters' expressions, inner dramas, or lines, he strives to be accurate, which belongs to the first time since his creation.

The reason why he is so attentive is that, as Mr. Sun said, he doesn't want to live up to the good story.

Sun Qingsheng glanced at him deeply, and Jiang Yulou was furious, and then slowly spoke:

"Yulou, this script of yours clearly presents a complex and compelling story, with smooth connections and tension between the various plots. As long as the actor's acting skills are okay, they can definitely successfully channel the audience's emotions.

The characterization is also successful, not only vivid but also three-dimensional. Each character has their own unique personality and motivations, which makes them more authentic and more resonant with the audience.

The most important element of the drama is the dialogue, which is vividly displayed in your script, which not only reflects the personality of the characters and their relationships. And the strong conflict and tension make the script even more tense and exciting.

The most amazing thing is probably your depiction of the scene. The scenes in your script are excellently depicted, and in a mystery-filled setting, the game-like environment further influences the characters' actions and the psychology of the audience, and in terms of atmosphere, this script can give you perfect marks.

As for the final ending......

The teacher really wants to rip out your brain, how the hell did you come up with such an open-ended ending.

I can guarantee that after watching this drama, the enthusiasm of the audience for discussion is absolutely unprecedented. ”

Sun Qingsheng's evaluation is not high, and his hanging heart finally let go.

"I'm relieved to have your words." A smile reappeared on Jiang Yulou's face, and he said gratefully: "I still want to thank you for your guidance to me, teacher, without you, there would be no script." ”

"Don't pat me on the back." Sun Qingsheng pointed at him, shook his head with a smile and said: "My guidance is secondary, the main credit is your story, the lines are concise, and the plot connection is smooth, it's not like writing a drama script for the first time." ”

"But no matter how good the script is, it also needs the actors to present it to him on stage."

As he spoke, he patted the script in his hand and said uncertainly: "Yulou, such a good book, are you sure you want to give it to the students for rehearsal?" ”

Jiang Yulou hesitated slightly, nodded vigorously, and said, "Since it is said that it is good, I will not change it." ”

"That's right." Teacher Sun pondered for a moment and said, "When the school's drama troupe performs, I'll invite a few friends to watch it, don't you mind?" ”

"Of course there's no problem, your friends aren't my friends, besides, my script is written for people to watch." Jiang Yulou said with a smile.

Teacher Sun patted his thigh and said with a smile: "Cheng, then it's no problem." ”

After chatting about the script again, Jiang Yulou proposed to leave.

On the way back, he was in a particularly good mood. One more thing. When the script is handed over to the repertory theatre, he can continue his literary creation.