Ding, the class bell rang, Gu Xu seemed to wake up instead of sleeping, and his brain was confused.

In a Chinese class, Shen Hanyang talked about the situation of this monthly exam.

"In this monthly exam, our class has a good Chinese score! And there is also a full-score essay, which is also the only full-score essay in this monthly exam. Guess who wrote it! ”

Gu Xu listened without saying a word.

At this moment, Gu Xu's eyelids were fighting, this kind of thing definitely had nothing to do with him.

Normally, at this time, Shen Hanyang has to deliberately sell Guanzi, and then, everyone praises it, and then, Shen Hanyang will personally read the composition.

Then, analyze why and where this essay is well written.

In this way, more than ten minutes have passed!

Gu Xu was happy when he thought about it, and he just took the time to take a nap.

"Gu Xu!"

In a daze, Gu Xu heard Shen Hanyang say his name.

Oops!

Gu Xu's heart tightened, and he was caught by Lao Shen when he was sleeping in class.

I haven't slept yet!

Could it be that he saw the desertion?

When did Lao Shen's eyes become so poisonous!

Although Gu Xu was very confused, he forced himself to wake up, and he raised his head to look at Shen Hanyang.

At this moment, the whole class looked at him.

Gu Xu was even more surprised.

He subconsciously looked at Lan Ruosi, who was looking at him with a smile and a deep appreciation in his eyes.

Gu Xu's expression was clouded, what happened!

As soon as Zhang Song saw it, he knew that Gu Xu probably hadn't heard it.

He hurriedly said: "Gu Xu took the only full-score essay in the whole grade, should there be applause here!" ”

He clapped vigorously.

Gu Xu raised his eyelids suddenly, and he didn't feel sleepy.

What?

Won the first place in the whole grade in your essay?

What did I write at the time?

Lan Ruosi looked at Gu Xu in a daze, a little puzzled, did he wake up from class just now? So didn't you hear that?

Still, I've never won the first place, so I can't react a little!

Lan Ruosi smiled: "Gu Xu is great!" ”

Hearing Lan Ruosi's praise, Gu Xu believed that he had really scored a full score.

"Okay, let's analyze it now, Gu Xu's composition." Shen Hanyang was very relieved to see Gu Xu achieve such results.

He didn't expect that in just one month, Gu Xu's grades in composition would improve so much.

His grades were not good before, and he probably didn't care about it, but now that he is in his third year of high school, the time is urgent, and he is also anxious, and his grades have naturally improved.

Shen Hanyang finished reading Gu Xu's essay as usual and began to analyze: "The structure of his essay is a typical total score, which is also what we often say, leopard head, pig belly and phoenix tail.

At the beginning, the argument is shown in a sentence arrangement, the road of life.

Then, present the argument and then use a lot of material and metaphors to argue the point.

He wrote in the second paragraph that the brilliance of the road of life does not lie in the beginning. Perhaps, you think that you are just an inconspicuous dust, but when the wind comes, as long as you seize the opportunity, you can fly high.

His argument is relatively new and very meaningful.

Then the third paragraph goes on to argue.

The brilliance of the road of life lies in your acquired efforts, as the saying goes, God rewards diligence, diligence can make up for clumsiness, the turtle continues to work hard, and finally defeats the rabbit and becomes possible.

The brilliance of the road of life will not be covered by your natural defects, some people may think that they are an ugly duckling, and give up everything, but the ugly duckling will eventually become a white swan.

This is a typical example to demonstrate.

I won't talk about these examples of arguments, but when I read them, you all heard them.

After the argument, the last paragraph is to sublimate the composition.

His last paragraph is that everyone's starting point is different, and the path of life is different, but you must seize the opportunity. When the opportunity does not come, you have to keep working hard, and when the opportunity comes, you will soar. However, even if the opportunity does not come, you should not be lost because of your flaws, if your heart is sunny, you will one day shine on the road of your life! ”

Lan Ruosi listened, her hands slowly tightened, and she sighed in her heart: Gu Xu's composition is really good! Sincerely.

Ugly duckling......

Gu Xu, I know that you have been encouraging me, and I will definitely not give up on my own.

I will definitely shine on the road of life.

Shen Hanyang said, his voice choked: "His opening and ending are well written. However, there are shortcomings in the beauty, and some examples of arguments in the middle, I personally feel that they are a little biased and not so perfect.

In his third argument, he also used it, Phoenix Nirvana and Breaking the Cocoon into a Butterfly, these two examples were used at the beginning, and they can be replaced with others, for example, an iron pestle is sharpened into a needle or something like that. It would be better that way. ”

Shen Hanyang said and looked at Gu Xu: "Gu Xu, did you hear it, next time you change more materials, in this way, the composition will be better."

Also, he just chose a point, the brilliance of the road of life, when we write, we can also use contrasting techniques to write, brilliant, frustrated......"

"Uh-huh!" Gu Xu nodded, "Teacher, I will!" ”

"I've made a copy of this essay, and the class leader will post it on the back of the blackboard newspaper after class, so you can go down and take a look." Shen Hanyang said.

When Lan Ruosi heard this, a smile bloomed on her face, and she was happier than she had a perfect score for her essay.

"I'll go!" Zhang Song couldn't help but sigh, "Gu Xu, buddy, you're done, it's really soaring now!" Lan's essay was not posted. ”

Gu Xu was completely stunned, this was really a sudden happiness. He wanted to say something, but his tongue knotted again.

Lately, what's wrong!

It always happens that I get knotted in my tongue.

Yang Wanli disdainfully: "I don't know, I copied it from which composition book, the teacher didn't see it, I was lucky to get the first place, and I actually posted it behind for the whole class to study, it's a shame!" ”

Wang Xianchao was also unhappy: "Hasn't Gu Xu's composition always been bad?" How did you suddenly come up with an essay like this......"

He looked at his essay score, 45 points, and his heart was cool.

A lesson was quickly over.

The squad leader posted Gu Xu's composition at the back of the classroom according to Shen Hanyang's instructions, and a group of people gathered around to read it.

Lan Ruo thought about it, but she felt that there were too many people, and she didn't like to squeeze.

She stood next to her seat and looked at Gu Xu.

Gu Xu also looked at her.

Gu Xu walked up to her, he wanted to say something, but before he could speak, Lan Ruosi said: "Whole universe, your essay has such good results this time, I'm really happy for you." ”

Gu Xu could hear that Lan Ruosi was really happy for him.

Wang Xianchao listened on the side, and his heart was sour, Lan Ruosi called him the whole universe? His name is Lan Ruosi's little porridge!

There must be ghosts between the two!

Zhang Song also walked to Lan Ruosi and Gu Xu's side.

"Gu Xu, have you seen it, they are all watching your composition, I am so crowded that I have no place to sit."

"Fatty, do you need to be so pretentious? It's the end of class, class, everyone is back to their seats, and you have a place to sit. ”

Zhang Song sighed: "Gu Xu, I instantly knew why God wanted Jia to have diarrhea!" ”

Gu Xu was surprised: "Why?" ”