117 Mom, I'll pick up garbage to raise you19
Before the second issue of "Fairy Tale Monthly" was released, Qi Yaning received a reply from Jiang Fanyue.
She called Jiang Fanyue her sister, Jiang Fanyue was really like a sister, wishing her peace and smoothness and finding a suitable path for herself as soon as possible.
- "I'll secretly tell you a little secret, in my setting, Ayi is not actually a stupid child, but his intelligence is not reflected in the test scores. ”
- "Do you remember that in the story, Ayi relied on her own strength to break into the well-defended elf holy land, and finally successfully saw the wishing mirror? ”
Kuang Zimo also received a reply from Jiang Fanyue.
In the letter, she answered Kuang Zimo's question very seriously.
- "The fairy tale ends when the prince and princess go through trials and tribulations together. So I chose to let the story stop at the little ear and become human again. ”
- "But your assumption is completely logical. ”
- "How can a man who once had wings resist the attraction of the sky. He will definitely do his best to achieve his dream. For he knew that since the earth did not keep him, then he should belong to the sky. ”
Jiang Fanyue didn't know what Qi Yaning and Kuang Zimo were thinking when they saw her reply.
From the time she sent the letter back to the publisher and asked the publisher to forward the letter to the reader, she put this matter on the back burner.
She had recently started preparing for her final exams and writing "The Dancing Elephant", and she was too busy to pay attention to other things, and she couldn't even forget when the second issue of "Fairy Tale Monthly" would be published.
But she forgot, Fei Shuyun didn't forget.
Early in the morning, Fei's father took the second issue of "Fairy Tale Monthly" home.
Fei Shuyun ate breakfast, picked up his schoolbag, and flipped through "Wishing Mirror" while walking to school.
"Wishing Mirror" really has two more stories.
The style is in the same vein as the previous two short stories, with a little sentimentality in the warmth, and a trace of regret in the consummation.
She wanted to cry and laugh when she saw it.
The school gate was close in front of him, and Fei Shuyun breathed a long sigh of relief, planning to wait until he got to the classroom and look at it again. She just swallowed dates in order to feast her eyes.
Just as Fei Shuyun was about to put away the newspaper, her afterglow seemed to sweep a familiar name.
Fei Shuyun thought that he had read it wrong, stopped, brought the newspaper closer, and looked at it closely.
Yao Liangcai arrived at school relatively late today.
Because he deliberately took a detour today and went to the newsstand to buy newspapers.
Holding the newly bought newspaper, Yao Liangcai looked up and saw Fei Shuyun not far away.
Yao Liangcai approached quietly, and was just about to pat Fei Shuyun's shoulder hard, when Fei Shuyun, who was stunned in place, suddenly let out a rapid and sharp scream.
Yao Liangcai was taken aback, he didn't touch Fei Shuyun with his hand: "Fei Shuyun, what are you doing." ”
Fei Shuyun looked back at Yao Liangcai, looked down at the newspaper again, and said to himself: "No, no, no, I must have accidentally bumped into the name." How is this possible, yes, it is absolutely impossible. ”
Yao Liangcai: "...... Are you evil? ”
Fei Shuyun's face was distorted: "Do you like "Wishing Mirror" very much? ”
"yes." Yao Liangcai raised the newspaper in his hand and raised his eyebrows proudly, "I don't need to borrow your newspaper this time." ”
"Have you followed the author of this article?"
Yao Liangcai subconsciously said: "Why are you paying attention to this?" ”
Fei Shuyun said quietly: "There is a surprise." I don't believe you take a look. ”
Yao Liangcai was inexplicable, opened the newspaper casually, lowered his head carelessly, and almost stared out his eyeballs in the next second.
After ten seconds of silence, he also followed in Fei Shuyun's footsteps, and said to himself: "Same name and surname, yes, it must be the same name and surname." ”
Fei Shuyun's mood relaxed: "It seems that the two of us have the same idea. ”
Yao Liangcai laughed "ha": "Do you think that Jiang Fanyue in our class, the article written by him can still be in the newspaper?" I tell you, no way. The weekly diary she wrote at that time was ridiculed by our class, have you forgotten about it? ”
"It's just that elephant and baby elephant, I'm very impressed." Fei Shuyun nodded, feeling that Yao Liangcai was actually rare to be smart, and what he said was reasonable and convincing, "How can she be at her level compared to the author of "Wishing Mirror", the only similarity between the two is their names." ”
The two said so, and they were still a little awkward in their hearts.
So when they arrived in class, when they heard Zhou Feng and others discussing "Fairy Tale Monthly", neither of them joined the topic.
Zhou Feng sensed that something was wrong, and wondered: "Don't you two like "Wishing Mirror" very much, why aren't you excited at all today?" ”
Yao Liangcai and Fei Shuyun glanced at each other.
Although they have not communicated with each other, the two have a strange tacit understanding: to hide the name of the author of "Wishing Mirror". As long as they don't say it, others shouldn't notice it.
At this moment, Jiang Fanyue walked in.
Yao Liangcai and Fei Shuyun looked at her together.
Jiang Fanyue noticed the gazes of the two and looked back coldly.
But as soon as she collided with the eyes of the two, Yao Liangcai and Fei Shuyun brushed away from each other.
Jiang Fanyue: ?
These two people are a bit eccentric.
Soon, it was time for the language hall.
Xu Kangtai first spent a class time explaining the skills of writing proposition essays, and then gave everyone a question on the spot to write before the next class ended.
When the bell rang for the end of the second period, the representative of the Chinese class stood up and asked everyone to hand in the essays to her.
Yao Liangcai's eyes rolled, and when everyone had finished handing in their homework, he slipped to the representative of the Chinese class and said that he had forgotten to write his name.
The representative of the language class handed him the homework: "You can find out which one is yours yourself." I'll go to the toilet first. ”
As soon as the class representative left, Yao Liangcai immediately took out Jiang Fanyue's composition and read it with Fei Shuyun.
Junior high school essays are generally about 600 words, and the two of them can easily read them.
Yao Liangcai asked, "What do you think of the writing?" ”
Fei Shuyun said: "That's it, it's just slightly better than me." ”
"Do you think so?"
"......" Fei Shuyun was speechless, "Haven't we all communicated this issue at the school gate?" ”
"It's called just in case you don't understand." Yao Liangcai pursed his lips, and Yu Guang swept the class representative into the classroom, and hurriedly stuffed Jiang Fanyue's composition back into the homework pile.
Yao Liangcai is not the only one who pays attention to Jiang Fanyue's composition.
Xu Kangtai got this pile of homework, and he was the first to turn out Jiang Fanyue's homework and start correcting it-
The examination is correct, straight to the point, the first paragraph
Title.
The structure is complete, and quotes famous quotes enhance the persuasiveness of the essay.
At the end, the central idea is again elaborated and appropriately sublimated.
Xu Kangtai read it to the end, a little dumbfounded.
Jiang Fanyue's essay was written in accordance with the skills he said, and he couldn't see anything else at all.
After school, Jiang Fanyue rode home with Erniu.
"I think Yao Liangcai and Fei Shuyun are weird today, you say, did they find out?" Jiang Fanyue told Erniu about the two of them today's abnormalities.
The second girl almost couldn't stop laughing: "I should have found it." ”
Jiang Fanyue nodded: "I think so." They must have thought that I could not be the author of "Wishing Mirror" and couldn't help but secretly observe me. ”
"Are you going to tell them?"
Jiang Fanyue said narrowly: "Don't worry. Now they are the ones who are really anxious to know the truth. ”
Yes, from that day on, Fei Shuyun and Yao Liangcai unconsciously paid attention to Jiang Fanyuelai.
Fei Shuyun has always disliked Jiang Fanyue.
The two of them have to start from the time when they were at the same table.
Although he had only been at the same table for two days, Jiang Fanyue left the impression on Fei Shuyun that he was taciturn, not easy to get close to, gloomy and eccentric.
But now, the impression that Jiang Fanyue left on Fei Shuyun was extreme self-discipline.
Every day in class, Jiang Fanyue sat up straight and listened carefully to the teacher's lectures.
Every day between classes, others are playing and playing, and Jiang Fanyue is burying her head in homework.
Fei Shuyun noticed that Jiang Fanyue never brought homework and textbooks home, and completed all the exercises at school.
During self-study classes and lunch breaks, Jiang Fanyue used it to read famous books, and from time to time he would make some excerpts and notes.
It's not a three-minute heat, it's every day.
Even if Fei Shuyun still has a lot of prejudice against Jiang Fanyue, he has to admit that Jiang Fanyue is really good now.
On this day, Fei Shuyun was burying his head in his homework, and his tablemate and friend suddenly sighed: "Shuyun, I found that you have been working hard recently. ”
Fei Shuyun was stunned: "Is there one?" ”
"Yes, you used to often fail to hand in the homework assigned by the teacher, but during this time, every time I asked you how your homework was, you finished it early." The table nodded earnestly, replied in the affirmative, and asked her with some curiosity how she did it.
Fei Shuyun opened his mouth.
It seems that whenever she doesn't want to do her homework and wants to play, Jiang Fanyue will appear in front of her eyes and write her homework.
Yao Liangcai also experienced a similar conversation with Fei Shuyun.
Zhou Feng said: "You don't fight and make trouble recently, and you don't call other people's nicknames indiscriminately. What's the matter with you, are you scared of Jiang Fanyue? ”
Yao Liangcai glared: "Who was scared by her!" How many times have you laughed at me for this, little man, I'll tell you, you give me enough time! ”
Zhou Feng wanted to beat someone.
As soon as he praised Yao Liangcai for not calling other people's nicknames, Yao Liangcai turned his head and called him "little man".
"Then tell me about the situation. You and Fei Shuyun have both been very strange lately. ”
Yao Liangcai didn't bother to answer at first, but he was really annoyed by Zhou Feng, so he simply told the whole story.
Zhou Feng: "......"
Zhou Feng also began to join Fei Shuyun and Yao Liangcai.
Jiang Fanyue was indifferent to this, she didn't waste her mind on Yao Liangcai and them at all. Now she is sitting in front of Yao Rong, nervously waiting for Yao Rong to finish reading the first 20,000 words of "The Little Elephant Who Loves to Dance".
Yao Rong didn't see it quickly, except for the sound of breathing in the room, it was the rustle of paper turning.
After a long while, Yao Rong closed the notebook and breathed a sigh of relief.
At Shangjiang Fanyue's gaze, the corners of Yao Rong's lips curled slightly: "No one will not like Yiyi in the story." ”
[That's right, even the intelligent system loves Yiyi in the story.] 】
Systems with massive amounts of data are all impressed by this fairy tale, let alone the editors of publishing houses.
After reading the 20,000-word manuscript, Xiao Jianguo slapped the table case with his palm and shouted "wonderful".
A group of editors took a look.
Lu Junhao was the first to speak: "Editor Xiao, is this article wonderful?" ”
Xiao Jianguo happily handed over the manuscript: "You can see for yourself." ”
Lu Junhao stretched out his hand to take it, looked at the beginning, and said in surprise: "She has improved so fast, and her writing is obviously smooth and plump." ”
Xiao Jianguo held the thermos cup, smiled without saying a word, and motioned for him to continue looking down.
Lu Junhao quickly couldn't care about his feelings.
He was completely immersed in the story of the baby elephant.
It wasn't until he turned the page and found that there was a blank space that he came back to his senses: "Why is it gone so quickly?" ”
Xiao Jianguo laughed: "Do you have an urge to watch it again?" ”
Lu Junhao flipped the notebook back to the first page: "Indeed, I feel that I haven't seen enough at all." ”
Xiao Jianguo said: "Tell me about your evaluation of this article. ”
Lu Junhao organized the language: "The most attractive thing about this article is the setting of Yiyi, the author writes it too vividly. It's like a real character, and as a reader, I can fully embody its emotions, feel its inferiority, and look forward to seeing Yiyi's transformation from the bottom of my heart. ”
Xiao Jianguo nodded.
His views are similar to those of Lu Junhao.
The author portrayed the character of Yiyi very successfully, whether it was psychological or various demeanor descriptions, they were quite well figured out.
As soon as the sluice opened, Lu Junhao couldn't stop the car: "In addition to Yiyi, other animals on the grassland also left a deep impression on me. The old elephant king in the herd reminds me of my junior high school homeroom teacher, who conducts repressive education all day long, and Yiyi will become inferior and have plans to escape from the herd, which is really normal. ”
Xiao Jianguo smiled because of his true feelings: "This is also the success of this book, whether it is adults or children, they can see familiar shadows from this book." I have a hunch that this story will be very popular. ”
The two of them chatted energetically, without deliberately lowering the volume, and several editors not far from them heard their conversation and gathered around, saying that they also wanted to see it.
After a long time, the editor in charge of "Changjin Weekly" patted Xiao Jianguo's shoulder and sighed leisurely: "Old Xiao, I originally thought that "Fairy Tale Monthly" would be short-lived. Because the newspaper lacks good regular contributors. ”
"After reading this article, I changed my mind."
"As long as you can win "Dancing Little Elephant", as long as "Dancing Little Elephant" maintains its current level, it will be serialized for one more issue, and the data of "Fairy Tale Monthly" will go up more."