In the blink of an eye, this book has been officially on the shelves for two months, and I have gained a lot from listening to the rain in the past two months, and there are also many shortcomings, I want to chat with you.

First of all, let's report the results, the first order on the shelves of the arcane is 1600, the current high order is 9300, the average order is 4200, and the posthumous order is 900.

Anyway, as the first book to be put on the shelves of Tingyu, this result is indeed very good, and it has reached a high-quality product, which is a result that I didn't dare to think about before.

Thank you for reading this book!

After talking about the results, the next thing is the shortcomings.

First of all, since the recommendation, because of Tingyu's own reasons, the results have been falling, chasing 900 can be regarded as a crash, and the average order has also dropped from the highest 4700 to 4200.

Because after the flu fever some time ago, the state of listening to the rain is not very good, the update time is unstable, as a novice to maintain a stable update for a long time is also a challenge for himself, after all, listening to the rain is not a very diligent person.

After talking about the other situations, back to this book, the book of Arcane embodies Tingyu's hard work in the past few months, and Tingyu is trying to write this book well.

There are many deficiencies in the plot before it was put on the shelves, and everyone also gave Tingyu a lot of suggestions, and Tingyu accepted it humbly, such as the character descriptions are monotonous, not full enough, the plot setting is old-fashioned, there are too many coincidences, and it is not reasonable enough.

Listening to the rain also paid attention to the later plot setting.,At the same time, I'm also reading other bigwigs' books.,Especially "The Master of Mystery.,Recently, I've been learning to pay attention to the description of the environment.、Character psychological description and side description.,Of course, I'm just learning.,If you can have a squid's pen power, I think it's enough.。

After yesterday's update, because I was on duty in the unit, I took the time to finish the code, and sent a writer to say that I would ask for a monthly ticket or something, but I didn't expect everyone's reaction to be very strong all of a sudden, and put forward a lot of suggestions to Tingyu.

Well. Sincerely, when the author saw a page of criticism in the background, his mentality of listening to the rain was a little collapsed, and he even had what kind of garbage he wrote, and did he write a book by himself? One-class thought (laugh~)

Here's a thank you for the big guy at the beginning of the legend.,I couldn't hold back and reflected on it in the Q group this morning.,It's still the big guy who comforts me and encourages me.,And the red bag.,Love!

After thinking about it, I suddenly felt

I'm so hypocritical!

Isn't it hypocritical that readers are willing to spend real money to read their own books, instead of going to see pirated copies, and they are still complaining and annoying themselves here?

It's better to have more code words than you have this time!

I'm sorry readers, but I will humbly accept the criticism you give me and work hard to correct it!

Then back in the book, I briefly summarized it.

First, the recent problems of slow progress and water on the main line do exist in this regard.

This is a matter of listening to the rain plot control.,I always think,Will it be too sudden to go directly into the ruins?,Will it not be unreasonable enough?,Always want to insert a new storyline.,Always want to slow down the rhythm.,This is my problem.,I'll pay attention to it later.,Pay attention to ensure that the main plot advancement and world view foreshadowing and other aspects are combined with each other.,Control yourself.。

Please believe the bigwigs, I'm not really water for water's sake!

In terms of supplementing and describing the background, I think ArEmper's words in chapter 197 are very right, the previous description of the world of Gaia is a bit too thin and has no depth, and I think more ink should be added to this aspect.

Especially in the words with the Lord of Mystery, through a variety of simple environmental descriptions, you can build a deep and real world, which is amazing.

In the future, I will work hard in this regard, and so on, as well as the fullness of the protagonist's image and the description of the supporting role.

Second, the update is insufficient.

This problem is very serious, because listening to the rain is part-time, so you can only code words in your free time, and you don't have the intention of listening to the rain full-time in the future.

I've been looking back at the previous plot for the past two days, and to put it mildly, I personally feel that the arcane is still a book that can be read. I can barely read it, and the most important thing is that I have few updates.

To put my reflection on Q group,

The biggest problem is that I update too little,

I would like to add a view of the world,

I want the plot to be reasonable,

I want to plump up the image of the supporting role,

I still want to ambush the pen,

Two chapters and four thousand words a day,

I'm thinking about fart!

I work hard, starting today, sacrifice and save manuscripts, and focus on code words!

Don't dare to brag about it, it is guaranteed to be more updated than before!

I try to show you a story about Li Si, a past that everyone can watch after dinner!

Listen to the rain

Written late on Christmas night 2023!

(End of chapter)