An author, uh...... Still a writer...... When writing an article, the most important thing you want to know is what is wrong with your work. Even if it is criticized for being incomplete, it is a great happiness. If you have read my work, if you have time, please give a comment: Yes: the sentence is stiff and rigid, the plot is cliché and vague, the sense of substitution is poor, there is no desire to read, the sentence is incomprehensible, annoying, rough? There is no YY point, and there is no passion for reading?

I sincerely ask for criticism!!!!!!!!!!!