Finally, after two months of hard work, the first plot of "Under the Magician's Crown" is officially over. Here, please allow the little snake to make an excited expression here.

Very well, and then let's get back to the point, and in the first volume I exposed a lot of shortcomings.

For example, the previous dividing symbols are used too much, friends who have been reading Little Snake will find that my use of dividing symbols has been greatly reduced since then, and the second volume will try not to appear such symbols that affect reading, and the scene transition will be expressed naturally in words as much as possible.

There are too many explanations of magic and skills.,Little Snake will try to correct it.,After that, Little Snake will try to naturally show the effect of magic in battle or in the plot.,But some little snakes that can't be shown on the surface will still be introduced.,But it's not too much.。

The plot is also a little dragged, especially the manor battle in Zuihou, which is indeed a bit dragged, and many friends have reflected this situation. It is impossible to make a major change to the front. Little Snake is a newcomer, a major overhaul, no matter how it is changed, Little Snake's book is a waste. But the little snake assured that this would not be the case again.

There are a lot of battles between the supporting characters, but in fact, this is similar to the previous question, and the little snake will try to minimize it later. But there won't be none. Little Snake has never liked reading books before, and from beginning to end, it is a novel in which the protagonist plays stand-alone there alone. Therefore, there will be no battles between the supporting characters, so that when the protagonist defeats the character who wins, he can better reflect the strength of the protagonist.

The digging hole is too big, and many readers don't understand that the little snake weishenme wants to describe so many irrelevant plots, in fact, this is all to pave the way for the second volume, originally the first two volumes were one volume, but because there was too much content, it had to be divided into two volumes.

Leave a message in the book review area, pay attention to the tone, you can point out my shortcomings, and I will try to correct them, but please try not to be murderous in the tone, I also said this in Sanjiang's testimonial.

For example, the whole post even the title and content, a total of two words "garbage", don't ask me weishenme to delete the post. For this kind of post, I can only reply with the same two words "hehe".

There are a lot of disadvantages mentioned above, but I won't talk about the advantages, I personally have personal likes, and if you want to find the advantages you think, please continue reading this book, and the new plot will definitely allow you to find out what you like.

zuihou, thank you for your support in the past two months, thank you, I will definitely write everyone, favorite characters, favorite plots, favorite shijie, and favorite novels in future writing.