A little question about the work
Xiaojun has just written a book, and he can still do it twice a day. But because it's the first book, it's still a bit sluggish in some places, so I'll mention some questions here. I hope that book friends will give more opinions, and I will bear with Xiaojun a lot.
The first is about the military aspect of the book.
Book lovers may feel a little messy at first, how can they distinguish between strong and weak? First of all, the realm is the most important, and there will generally only be fights across small realms, except for the protagonist and strong supporting characters, of course. The second is the bonus of martial arts, those with a low realm can perform martial arts with a high realm, but they often require an extremely large amount of heaven and earth power or even life. Of course, those in the higher realm can use the lower realm, but they will not be able to use their full strength. There are also some weapon treasures that can be added to force, but the realm is the most important, and this becomes more obvious later in the book.
Then it's about the Origin Exercises.
The text will also mention the content of the Origin Exercise, which is necessary for people to cross from the first realm of barbarism to the middle realm of barbarism, and it is also the biggest clue of this book. Its importance may not seem apparent in the early part of the book, but it will be evident later. Different Origin Exercises will bring different effects.
There is also the fact that book lovers will feel that the plot advances very quickly in the early stage, and slows down in the back. This is because Jun hopes to unfold the main plot as soon as possible and not dwell too much on it in the early stage. And book friends will also say that the protagonist's task appears inexplicable, and these will be revealed one by one later in the book.
There is also the heroine's business. Xiaojun didn't give the heroine too much plot in the early stage, mainly because Xiaojun wants the heroine to grow up, not to become the protagonist's vase, so the heroine's story will unfold separately later, and there is more than one!
In short, Xiaojun thinks this book is still good, I hope that book friends can support more and vote for more recommendations, Xiaojun will thank you in advance!