Black History [Continuous Update]
The Eye of the Templar is the first novel I intend to write with my heart and mind. What kind of black history of short cute articles in junior high school and high school...... I won't mention it.
I started thinking about the Eye of the Templar in September '13. At that time, I didn't think about uploading it to the Internet or anything, so I wrote it casually in my notebook, and I didn't even write the outline directly. After about five pages, it felt wrong and stuck. Then let it go for a while.
When I started writing again, I estimated that it was November, and then ...... I started writing on my phone, "How nice it is!" I could write when I took it out, but I still didn't have an outline. Later I learned that writing a novel requires an outline. I started writing an outline based on what I had already written.
Because the time and space relationship of this novel is very chaotic, I was dizzy at that time, I only knew what the beginning should be, what the core goal of the protagonist is, and as for the ending, I didn't even think about it. So the outline I wrote can't be called an outline at all, but a pool to record the points of inspiration.
Slowly, I learned that what plot I want to write later, first summarize it in the pool in concise language, and then write all the environment, characters, and psychology as if it were an expansion exercise, so as to flesh out the story.
Also recently, I have reworked the main line of my outline...... When I felt like it was already a complete story, I decided never to touch it again......
When it was like playing, it was intermittent, and it was written like this for a year, and it was only 200,000 words. Some people say that you don't send 200,000 manuscripts? I said I don't dare, I'm afraid of Kavin. If I continue at this rate, the manuscript will run out, and the novel will not be finished.
So lately I've started to push myself to code. Even if the quality is slag, the number of words must be guaranteed. The writing can be retouched, and the online text is relaxed and pleasant, just look cool, what gorgeous rhetoric do you want.
And then it's today. I suddenly thought about drawing the cover myself...... Although most of the online covers are swinging base maps, add a few words...... But I love the novel I wrote, I love the main character, and I love the Templar Assassin in Dota 2. So I thought, since there is love, why not paintโ_โ
The ghost-like cover of this book was born...... Let me explain, on the left is the main character who is human, and on the right is the main character who is the supernatural person. Because after the protagonist is modified by the human body, the protagonist with the human body dies forever, so her eyes are closed. The background on the left is a sea of fire, how can you not see it! Who called me a painting scum......
(The paragraph about the cover was written around 14.12.20, but the cover has changed several times, so ...... You won't see it.)
After the black history, let's get to the point.
Eye of the Temple, I put it in Western fantasy, but in fact I gave Dota 2 a hero an original story.
That's right, it's Lanaya, the Templar Assassin......
So this book is about Lanaya's upbringing, from her childhood to her thirties, and how she became a Templar Assassin, how she fought Dire with other allies after the "cultivation level" was upgraded, and some messy stories such as life and fate.
The Eye of the Templar is divided into three parts, and the one that is now being serialized is the first one, Eyes of the Templar I.: Miracles. Please allow me to keep the names of the next two parts a secret, and there will be a preview when the first part ends.
This trilogy can be seen as three separate stories, which were originally intended to be written in three books, but these trilogies are coherent in time and ...... It was my first time writing a long story, and I felt that I couldn't write much longer, and the minutes were short, so I decided to combine them into a book.
2015-7-8 00:02:18......
However...... As I wrote and wrote, it wasn't until I was serialized for half a year that I suddenly realized that my first part seemed to be only halfway through. The plan was to finish the first part of the first part in 60w, and the result was ...... Readers, I was wrong! I didn't handle the line properly...... I added a lot of branches to my head, and then, and then I couldn't get it back...... When I wrote this, it was just the beginning of the summer vacation, so I'm going to try to put it away and start the second part as early as possible, after all, more than 100 heroes are the highlight
A sophomore is a sophomore, writing is purely a hobby, by the way, YY, the writing is definitely not as good as the experienced ones, but as long as there is a reader to support me, I will definitely try to write the best.
So don't be stingy with your comments, with your suggestions, I can improve.
Above ~bow~
2015.9.21
So, I also made a recent decision, and I decided not to update my black history from time to time! After all, isn't it a cheat to put these things in the testimonials of the end of the book when the time comes.
First of all, let me follow my journey from the beginning of the book to the present.
There may be some duplication of the above.
In September 13, I started writing the manuscript, and I didn't conceive it, yes, you heard it right, I didn't conceive it.
About November, I started to use mobile phone code words, and I began to slowly have an unformed outline, one yard is a year, and there is about 19w, which is about sixty chapters. When I wrote it, I didn't think about sending it, but I just wrote it as a hobby and had fun, but one day in December, I embarked on a road of no return. I forgot exactly what day I wanted to post the book on the website, so I thought about it for a few days, and on 12/20/14, the first chapter of the book was officially released.
Then, there are the n-number refusals that I like to see...... Now that I think about it, I was 6 ah, and I actually lasted 44w, more than four months, I dare to say, if I open a second book, I will definitely abandon the article if I am rejected for the first time. Of course, the help and encouragement of various teachers, authors and friends in the middle will be briefly mentioned, which are all in the signing testimonials.
In August, the novel was put on the shelves, 77w words. I won't talk about this, please move to the shelf testimonials.
It was also in August that I started my first attempt at two shifts a day. And some readers reported to me that what I wrote during that time was not as good as it used to be. There's no way, I feel like I can only write this book seriously in my life, and what I should experience is to take it seriously, such as adding more new books to the shelves, I will have two changes, and I am actually still a scumbag compared to others, but I am really tired, I tried my best.
Then it was September, school started, and I returned to the state of one watch, and vowed never to die again.
Dividing it up, speaking of the author's business, let me follow the black history of the novel's conception.
First of all, let's talk about the outline, this thing, I haven't had a more detailed one so far, I haven't thought about it in the middle, I completely go step by step, and I only know what kind of ending I want to write. Let's talk about it here, readers who have been reading books, please don't worry, the heroine is my goddess, I can't be ruthless, and the finale won't be sad! Okay, spoilers are here first.
This book, which can be called a complete concept, is the flower water. That's right, flower water, the brand of Liushen. When I had this idea, I was writing the * part of the Ice God chapter, and I calculated it, if a god is 50,000, 300,000 will be done! Immediately, I found that my too young, too simple Tucson was broken. In the process of writing, my ideas were invisibly expanded by me, and when I was halfway through the Fengshen chapter, an hopeless idea suddenly popped up: how can I only mix in this one world, rise to the top and then wear it back......!
The initial idea for the second part was born.
The second part is about to start, and the background is Radiant and Dire fighting, however, I still haven't figured out what plot to write......
The rough outline of the book really took shape a few days before it was published. Otherwise, I wouldn't have posted it!At that time, the third part was also added, and the estimated length of the whole book exceeded 150w. What, you guys like spoilers?Okay, so the third part is to travel back again......
I guess it was about the summer of '15, and I found that I had added too many branches to my first part, and I couldn't stop it. I was going to finish the first part in 60w, but ...... You get the idea. But there's no way.,The pits dug have to be filled back slowly.,Fortunately, I'm actually happy to fill it.,Because these pits are quite interesting.,Filling it can greatly increase the combat effectiveness of the heroine.,For example,The antidote to the voodoo scorpion spanning more than two hundred chapters...... Cough.
However, just as I was filling in the heart, tragedy struck. I really hate my brain, because I had another idea, yes, the originally planned trilogy has become a tetralogy! What a milestone in history! A few more exclamation marks must be added! Eye-catching!!
Of course, the origin of this fourth part is very simple, and I feel that the third part is not enough to write, so I divided it up.
2015.12.13
Now the second part has more than 30 chapters.
The second part is to open my mind, combine the backgrounds of all the heroes, the relationship between the heroes, and then connect to my own original main line.
Because I have to write it well, at least not like the ball of yarn that the cat has played, I'm back, yes, back to Dota 2.
In the vanilla game that I used as a background, I could look at the little line under each skill for each hero, and the little print under each item.
The most valuable reference should be regarded as DOTA2's huge library of accessories.
This thing helped me a lot, and some of the little backgrounds of each hero were introduced from under the accessories.
Then, on my PC, I have a large Dota 2 world map on the Internet. I forgot the author's name, anyway thank you for the map, because I don't know how to find you, if you can see this, what licensing or something......
Actually, I can give you money...... (Lying down.)
This map, some people say that it is very unscientific, a continent, two ruins of the area squeezed in the middle, is this to let all the heroes run to the middle and fight.
But I think it's good...... I also admire that someone can draw such a detailed map.
When readers are watching the second part, they can take a look at this map, which will be easier to understand.
While respecting the official, I myself am also changing something originally. For example, the Sanctuary in the game does not have such a thing as the Sword of the Firmament, and it usually does not wear a mask, such as the bounty in the novel, which becomes a beautiful blonde man wearing cat ears, and so on.
After all, it's weird to let some strange-looking creatures pick up girls and be soaked, isn't it? (laughs.)
2016.9.12
It's been a long time since I've written here, and I suddenly want to write today because it's a chess birthday.
The second part is basically almost unfolded, and the next thing is to fight and reduce the number of people. But what I didn't expect was that the more I wrote, the more I owed...... QAQ seems to have to be corrected......
2016.12.19
The current state is in the process of rewriting, and the content of the rewrite is the first 100,000 words of the novel, in fact, it was theoretically said that 60,000 is enough, because the free chapters that Migu reads are the first 20 chapters, 60,000 words. These 60,000 words are written, and as long as they are not bad in the future, readers will not run away, and they may come back after not reading them for the time being.
The reason for rewriting 100,000 is that there is a plot that can end in about 100,000 words, that is, the plot of Silver Snow City, which can be picked up without any changes.
This rewrite strengthens the presence of the male protagonist, optimizes the personality of each character, enhances the plot and the compactness of the story, deletes unnecessary bridges, and upgrades the style of writing from elementary school students to being able to understand elementary school students.
I always feel like I'm writing a game changelog [
It's not an excellent or mature beginning, but at least it's much more pleasing to the eye than before, and I personally think it can still be watched......
However, in doing so, there will be bugs in the future, but the overall does not affect the reading, after the completion of the rewrite project, if someone finds a bug, welcome to me to point out, there will be a red envelope reward, and if it is convenient to change, I will also make corresponding corrections.
2017.5.5
Thinking about this chapter today, I will first explain two things, one is that the rewriting project has been completed, although the writing change is very abrupt, I don't want to care so much [you], retaining talent is the right way, but it doesn't seem that anyone will come in to see.
The other thing is that the tracing chapter is nearing the end, and the next thing is to start a new chapter, called the second parallel song.
Why not the third part?
Looking back at the end of the last chapter of the first part, the world line is separated, and the tracing chapter writes the plot of the real world, and at the same time, the plot of the ability world will naturally take place.
And interspersed these in the main line, one is that the reader looks chaotic, and the other is that I can't pay attention to it myself.
And these plots are necessary, and it is not easy to make flashbacks, which would be too omitted. However, it won't be long, and in my patience, it may end in 30,000 words if I'm in a bad mood, and it won't be more than 150,000 in a good mood. Probably not......
Having said that, I don't even know how the first part of the previous series could be so long. No more water in the future.
tbc