Writing is a hard task, especially for long forms.

The writing of this volume should be considered the completion of the established plan.

After this volume, I was finally able to talk about creating the main character.

Time travel and rebirth are two very powerful ideas, and its biggest beauty for the Internet is that it allows the author to skip the process of the protagonist's growth and directly come up with a protagonist's character for the reader. And you can add various branches at any time with the "memory" that can be added at any time, and you can completely ignore the logic itself, which saves what a huge amount of energy!

It's wonderful.

I don't mean to say it's bad, in fact I didn't choose these two ideas, just because it doesn't fit the logic of the self-consistent world of the Red Heart Survey, that's all.

This is not one of those worlds that do not have extraordinary powers, and after being reborn and crossed, it will be left alone, and it can be regarded as a miracle.

In a world like the Naked Heart Survey, it can be done, it can be perceived, and it can be explained, but it can't be used.

I want to create a real Xianxia world, and it must first be logically valid. If I can't even explain where the main character comes from, what can I do to convince the reader that this is the real world?

Choose to create a primordial protagonist, a living person in the world of the Red Heart Survey.

Really starting from scratch, creating a protagonist, writing about his changes and growth, is actually laborious and difficult to please in online articles.

For example, many people say why the protagonist was deceived by Dong A, and why was the appointment of three things led by Bai Lian...... Is the protagonist stupid?

For Dong A, Jiang Wang's psychology has a process from vigilance and vigilance to acceptance and trust. Details of the psychological changes, so far only one reader has seen such a comment. Give me a little comfort.

The protagonist is born in a small town in a small country, with limited vision and limited knowledge.

Many times it's not that he's not smart, it's that he can't see so high, so far!

How can the son of a medicinal herb merchant stand on the world and judge state affairs? Can he sit in a well and watch the sky?

Unlike the first volume, which is more used as a story clue and a bystander of events, in the second volume, the protagonist has grown to a certain extent, his horizons have been broadened, and his human feelings and sophistication have been honed, including employing people and cultivating people...... All aspects are logically grown, and also in this volume, more as participants in events.

The influence of the protagonist is expanding.

At the beginning of the second volume, I roughly showed the outline of this great world, represented by the Yun Kingdom and the You Kingdom, and pointed over Jiang Wang's thousands of miles away, introducing places including the Luo Kingdom on the Water and the Immortal City of the Sin King.

The entire second half of the second volume is basically a deconstruction of the fall of a kingdom.

Why did the Yang Kingdom perish?

Writing, calendars, all lost.

Bureaucrats at all levels are selfish, from the pavilion chief, to the city lord, to the county guard, and even the entire Yangting ruler, all have their own ideas and interests.

There are also some Yang people who have long been spiritual Qi people.

The infiltration of Qi into Yang is all-round. Political, economic, cultural, military...... So much so that when fighting the plague, it is also necessary for the Four Seas Merchant Alliance of the Yang Kingdom to take on the material operation.

And the root of all this lies in the fact that Yang Country is on the side of such a powerful country in the world as Qi State.

Its fate was preordained.

Yang Jiande was fighting against fate, but he failed.

This country is not without heroes, from Sun Ping who passed through the city in a prisoner car, to Mr. Qin, who is a vegetarian for ten miles, and then to the veteran Ji Cheng......

The history of the fall of the Tianxiong Ji clan can be regarded as a microcosm of the history of the Yangguo struggle.

When a son dies, a grandson dies again, a man dies, a woman dies again. When the young man dies, the old man dies next.

In the end, the family was full of loyalty, and the pile of corpses failed to withstand the surging torrent.

The sadness of the country breaking the mountains and rivers, the tragedy of dying the country, and the sadness of being powerless.

I think I wrote it out.

......

Furthermore.

Many of the foreshadowings shed in the first volume have also been unraveled in the second volume.

For example, if the rat face is not so powerful enough, why can it still be the head of the twelve bone faces?

For example, why can the dark candle warn Jiang Wang.

For example, Zhang Linchuan took away the Ghost Gate Pass in the Battle of Fenglin City, and Wang Changji's tears...... In the second volume, the will of the White Bone God is buried......

And so on.

There are some details that the reader may just skim over, but they are my efforts to enrich the world.

For example, some slang and colloquialisms are actually original in line with the world of red hearts.

For example, the black words such as "loose", "boiling oil", and "private room" in Yuecheng Prison are actually made up by the author himself, in order to make this world more like, even if it is just a very tiny branch line, a scene that flashes away......

These subtle efforts are expensive and unbelievable, and they may not be loved by readers, but they are of great use, but I still do it.

I am an easy-going person in life, a perfectionist in words.

The entire second volume, in terms of the creation part, I was quite satisfied.

Taking the lazurite vein as the entry point, the Hu family, and then the Xi family, a mine, a town, a city, a domain and a country, are interlocking, from small to large, and there is no useless pen.

The competition between Chong Xuan Sheng and Chong Xuan Zun is one line, and the various demands within the White Bone Dao are another line.

There are two places that stand out from me.

One is the secret realm of Tianfu, although it is reversed and reversed, I feel that it is already very exciting. However, many readers have complained that the secret realm is not written for too long, which in another way shows that this secret realm is very popular.

But I think ...... The end is over, the expression has been expressed, and the thread that should be buried has been buried, so unveiled, no matter how wonderful it is. There is no point in watering.

One is that when I was deconstructing the collapse of the Yang Kingdom from multiple angles, before the peak at the end of the volume, some readers expressed their reluctance to see the fragmentation of the bricks and tiles. I feel bored, confused, and don't understand what the author is trying to express.

In order not to affect the reader's pleasure of reading, I can't explain it.

But at the end of the writing, presumably all the questions have been answered.

If there is no shaking of the foundation, is it too abrupt for the building to topple?

The shattering of the tiles was a prelude to the collapse of the entire house.

They are symphonic and progressive, and they complete the finale.

In this way, when the entire Yang Kingdom finally fell, so many readers were moved.

I've tried to make the foreshadowing and foreshadowing as good as possible, but it still doesn't seem to be balanced and gripping enough.

Hopefully, the third volume will do a little better, if there is enough energy.

......

In the process of writing the second volume.

Anxiety has always tormented me.

This anxiety that began with being ridiculed by the group as soon as I wrote five chapters of the Red Heart Survey has tormented me until now.

I often break down while encouraging myself.

The spirit goes back and forth in a state of collapse and blood.

In the end, I still didn't stop repeating it once, and I don't know how I managed to persevere.

Now that the two volumes have been completed according to my plan, they have been written to the letter, with a total of more than 800,000 words, and I finally have an explanation for the readers.

I can say, worthy of anyone.

Hopefully I can sleep soundly tonight.

......

The grades are still very poor, I hope you can give me a little strength.

It's really hard.

At last.

The name of the next volume is, "Breaking Through the Galaxy".

From a poem written by myself, "Difficult to Walk".

"It's hard to walk, it's hard to walk, and this body only goes higher. ”

"It is not enough to boast of climbing to the sky and the moon, and it is the end of the world to break the galaxy. ”

Lewen