A mistake at one o'clock in the afternoon led to a summary at the end of this volume, and it was sent into a paid chapter, is this what people do?

Fortunately, the king of Huya acted in time, and I rushed to write the manuscript in a hurry, and covered the new chapter on the summary, so that the friends who automatically subscribed would not be lost.

So the first chapter of the second volume, if you can't see the text after the overlay, you can press and hold the drop-down in the bookshelf interface, refresh it, synchronize the bookshelf, or clean up the starting point app cache (mine - upper left corner setting - clear cache), if it still doesn't work, just take it off the shelves and collect it again, which has caused a lot of inconvenience, and apologize again.

Straight to the point.

The first volume, as the beginning, occupies a large proportion of the whole book, and it is necessary to bury the thread, and there is a lot of foreshadowing for the later text, and the content will inevitably become bloated.

The evil ghost is the early clue, leading to the characters and development;

Hou Andu used it as a clue in the later stage, bringing the characters together again and ending it.

In this process, one story after another is deduced.

Similarly, the characters explained in the front will naturally be collected later, after all, with history as the context, they or their descendants will still appear in the future.

There are also some details and easter eggs during the period, as a few dark lines.

More obvious, such as: the layout of the old beggars, the rise and fall of the dynasty, the rebellion of Hou Jing (the difficulty of the Taiqing), the foreshadowing of the Buddha Sheng of the Southern Dynasty, and a bunch of leaders of the Nanzhan Buzhou, in short, don't let me see the outline, I ...... I don't think I remember clearly.

But on the whole, it is a process of spreading first and then putting it away.

Of course, some people deleted the various adjustments in the middle before they appeared on the stage, and some people could only mention it in the closing curtain of Aoyagi.

But then again, there are really a lot of foreshadowing that haven't been discovered, and the pen power is still limited.

For example, the old beggar's question, a friend happened to ask it, and he answered it briefly.

Why do you have to appear before the decisive battle with Hou Andu?

In fact, the old beggar appears twice before and after, both of which have internal logic and drive, and the answer will be found later, and part of the reason can be found in the first volume.

For example, the second meeting must not be placed after Hou Andu's death, nor before Hou Andu arrives at Aoyagi Garden, so that when you come back and look at it later, you won't feel illogical.

Two things have to go hand in hand.

In the early stage, he made his first official appearance after the birth of the demon, giving the protagonist a clue to the first turn, and in the later stage, he appeared again before Hou Andu was annihilated, giving a clue to the second turn.

During the period, some weaknesses were also strengthened, such as bringing in characters to think about problems, so as to increase the person's body.

Take an example, Chen's mother.

The protagonist's surname is Chen, and he must have a background, at this point in time, the Chen Dynasty clan is an ideal choice, and then check the biography, speculate on the characteristics of the characters according to the history books, set up family relationships, and then put them in and deduce.

On the other hand, I must emphasize that there really are such eccentric mothers!

For example, my grandmother, in the eyes of the data a few years ago, I mapped this part, because it was a family ugly, and I didn't publicize it.

Of course, there are also unsatisfactory points

For example, in the middle of the period, there were a lot of official criticisms, how did you jump for so long, how did you survive five chapters!

Actually, when I was doing the initial design, I didn't see anyone or anyone as a mini-boss, a mid-boss or something, or a small goal to complete first, and then to complete a medium-term goal, but to see them as an element in the story, to establish the characters, and at the same time to serve the story.

Moreover, many characters have historical prototypes, although artistic processing has been carried out (some became officials in advance, and some lived for two more years), but the original context still has to rely on a little bit, which has caused problems, coupled with obsessive-compulsive disorder, always pursuing a sense of ritual in the structure of the screen

After all, it's an online article, and the data eye is still looking at me at the grave, so I have to be sober (snap!)

All of the above is still quite a lot of effort.

So it's still sad to see a lot of people asking for who to kill, saying who and who's dragging how many sheets, because I want to make the story complete, I want the characters to be complete, but I don't want to make the reader uncomfortable, I can't sleep all night, I rely on energy drinks, coffee, and watching Zeta (?) to refresh myself, revise the outline, and change it to a few, more than ten hours.

The outline is tens of thousands of words, seven or eight tables, and the front has to be changed and the back has to be changed.

At the peak of my life, I also had eleven chapters in storage, each of which was three or four thousand words, but because of the problem of evil ghosts, I threw seven chapters directly, and I didn't make it back until it was put on the shelf, and I was still repeatedly changing and deleting it in the middle.

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Here are some tips for the second volume.

It's not an overhead cultivation of immortals, after all, it is the beginning of the Southern Dynasties, and it is mixed with history, the immortals are ethereal, and the history is thick, but there is one thing in common, that is, the fate of a person is very small in it, but it is also important.

The vicissitudes of life, the change of dynasties, that kind of indifference, and the fairy road.

Please continue to support, even if you don't watch it, you can subscribe to it, after all......

The new book is not easy, and the cat is in tears.

PS: The first chapter of the second volume.,Because it's an overlay update.,Re-upload the mistake one.,