The first volume of "Beautiful Jade Adorned with Luo Ying" is finally over.

In Xiao Rong's grinding and chirping, it was finally written.

The next volume, which is currently ready to be called

"I want to know you"

Well, listening to the name, you can probably understand~

Let's summarize the first volume.

From the title, introduction, and first ten chapters of the book that seduced everyone to read the book, they are all related to Qingjun's story.

Zhao Rong and Qingjun meeting is also the biggest expectation.

So the main line of the first volume is actually Zhao Rong sending jade and meeting.

However, one thing to admit is that the two copies in the middle take up more than half of the space.

Only the next twenty or thirty chapters began to write Qingjun.

This is the plot of the meeting that everyone was most looking forward to at the beginning.,I don't know how to write it.。。。

So the plot of the first volume, logically speaking, is reasonable, because sending the jade to pass at a glance is impossible to be so fast in reality.

But as a newcomer, especially a newcomer like Xiao Rong, writing like this is a death......

So I hit the streets.

However, if you start all over again, Xiao Rong will still write copies of Zhongnanshan and Dawei.

Well, there are also Su Xiaoxiao, who is said by many brothers to steal the scene, can also write.

Because, Xiao Rong is the first book, and he has grown up by writing about these things.

Writing the end of Nanshan and writing the Great Wei is the exercise of the pen power of this story.

Writing is small, and the exercise is the writing of writing emotional dramas.

Write Liu Sanchang, write Lin Wenruo, write Lin Qingxuan, write Lan Yuqing...... It's all about practicing writing characters.

And if you write directly from the beginning, you can find Qingjun and meet her.

Then I'm probably going to scrap the first volume.

There is no such thing as the current sword girl.

Of course, there is another possibility...... Maybe it's taking off, ahem.

Anyway.

Xiao Rong writes like this, which increases his fault tolerance, and he can try to write Jianniang well.

But it's easy to dissuade too many book friends who have just read Jian Niang.

Except for you who endure for various reasons and see this line of words, others will not and have no obligation to buy for Xiao Rong's growth.

Understandable.

Because of the positioning of the online article, in addition to the people who love it, it is actually a commodity, no matter how others make your product, your product only has two impressions of good and bad for others.

Far from it.

Pull it back.

First of all, let's explain a few common questions asked by brothers.

First, between the protagonist and the heroines, there will be no abuse in general, at most there will be occasional short twists and turns, but it will also be very short, mainly sweet.

(Jian Niang is a multi-heroine, but it won't be too much~ and only has an emotional line.) ）

Second.

When Xiaorong coded words, he didn't read the news and comments, and he didn't ignore the brothers......

It's just that I'm afraid of being distracted, and sometimes seeing bad comments will affect the status of the codeword.

So it's generally after the words of the day that you finish replying to messages and comments, well, and water groups.

Everyone's comments and news, Zhao Rong will take the time to read them.

Those who are convenient to reply will definitely reply!

Third, on the issue of Zhao Rongzha.

Actually, I am also to blame, because I am a science student and pay attention to the logic of the story.

The characters, the dialogues, the plot development, the changes in feelings, all try to have some logic.

So it is inevitable to write that the protagonist "cheats" the pure little to some extent.

In fact, I can use vague methods to write that Xiaoxiao doesn't ask Zhao Rong if he has a woman at all, and also writes that they are separated directly in Duyou City, and Xiaoxiao doesn't stick to Zhao Rong.

I've read a lot of books before, and it's all treated like this, with only one vague reason, vague treatment.

But I think when I think about it, there will be no sense of reality, no sense of logic.

So, well, Zhao Rong had to be scum.

This is the consequence.

But there are many heroines, how the protagonist is, they are all scum.

As long as you have a sense of responsibility and live up to the heroines, it's okay to be domineering.

Of course, Zhao Rong can also choose to tell Xiaoxiao directly that there is Qingjun.

But how to say it...... Actually, it's good to have some Shura fields, so that the plot is richer.

Anyway, there shouldn't be a life-and-death plot between Qingjun and Xiaoxiao in the future, chickens and eggs, and unflattering dog blood plots.

Our slogan is all of them.

But Qingjun is the first heroine, which has been set since the beginning of the book.

Other than that.

The feelings written by Xiao Rong will be more idealized and beautified.

But Zhao Xiaorong will try to write truthfully.

So, brothers who know the emotions in reality very well, please don't laugh~

Fourth, the early main line of Jian Niang is not an upgrade.

This also creates a problem.

Although the copies of Dawei and Zhongnanshan are both protagonists, they finally turn the tide and promote the plot.

But these are all contradictions created by others, and the protagonist only joins in halfway.

It will give people a sense of not belonging.

The reason for this is that there are two ways to write this story to drive the plot.

One is that the protagonist creates the general trend. (This is the most rewarding of this)

The other is to be carried by the general trend of others and participate in it.

The main line in the early stage is not based on cultivation, and the protagonist's cultivation is low.

In addition, the protagonist left Da Chu at the beginning and went to a wider world, rather than growing up in a small pond that was easy to climb to the top.

As a result, the protagonist is unable to create a general trend.

Only the latter method can be chosen.

But this situation will slowly improve.,In the new volume.,There's no more running around.,The protagonist will grow up steadily.,Well,There's also Qingjun and a little companion.,Comfortable~

But then again.

As soon as the protagonist runs around at the beginning, leaving the novice village, as if traveling, to a high-standard copy, this kind of taboo for the author, this kind of writing that goes against the mainstream, will it give readers a unique sense?

I'm ashamed to think that this may give some book lovers who are used to seeing a steady start a sense of novelty...

In fact, this also stems from the fact that when I used to read books, I always saw the protagonist climbing up step by step from the bottom, and the linear writing of changing copies step by step felt boring.

And the idea of "the protagonist starts with wastewood, and he doesn't stay in the novice village very much, but runs outside non-stop, sees the wider world, and brushes up on more advanced copies".

This will give the reader a sense of the world's greatness.

And there is a peculiar sense of realism, because reality is not, which allows the author to arrange for the protagonist to grow step by step.

And in fact, we all want to jump out of our daily lives and explore a wider and new world.

Well,Thinking about it this way,The invincible text that is very popular at the moment,It seems to have this similar effect。。。

But Jian Niang is not an invincible text, strictly speaking, it can't be regarded as a son-in-law or a soft rice text......

However, Qingjun's soft rice can't be let go......

It's far away again.

Pull it back.

Fifth, on the issue of slow pace.

Xiao Rong writes very carefully and seriously, and sometimes it takes four or five hours to code 2K words in a row.

So Xiao Rong really has no water, if the water is used, you can just code the word, and you can fool it out, why spend four or five hours?

This is also the reason why Xiao Rong often cooes.

I don't want to fool myself, fool you, scribble the hydrology and send it out...

I'm going to write it carefully, I'm more satisfied, so I will send it out and subscribe to it for you.

So sometimes it has to time out.

Well, if you really want to talk about water, it's also serious water!

It is pure natural and pollution-free mineral water, not tap water!

The meticulous writing leads to delicate emotional scenes, driving, and character portrayal, all of which are good.

But.

Write slowly.

And Xiao Rong is very good at breaking the chapter...

I was scolded to death by you.

It's short, it's watery, it's broken......

By the way, why haven't they all run away?

Something is wrong with you.

(~_~;)

If you write this carefully, you may not be able to change it in a short period of time.

Xiao Rongxi is used to writing seriously, savoring every sentence, and trying his best to write the best sentences he can write.

Well, you can scold and scold, as long as you don't run away.

Please leave some good brothers and feed the sword girl~

In fact, this is also the reason why Xiao Rong chose to start the first sword girl on this platform.

Because this is the largest and most mature genuine male frequency web website.

There are many old white and old bookworms here, and they are no longer keen on fast food literature, and can tolerate some young and carefully polished books.

However, Xiao Rong also has to do his best to code words, and the plot is slow, so use the number of words to make up.

Brothers who can't wait, you can raise it. (Don't forget~)

Here, thank you for supporting the sword lady!

Thank you for your subscriptions, tips, tickets, comments, and other support!

Seriously.

Really feed the book.

It's you.

No one is stupid and knows how to read books for free.

So, thank you very much for supporting Jian Niang!

The first volume is finished.

As originally envisaged, it was written that he met with Qingjun and returned the jade successfully. (A piece of jade was also snatched away in turn...) ）

Next, the second volume begins.

The story of the sword girl has just begun.

The return of the jade was successful, but Qingjun we haven't completely won it yet, hehe, and we haven't driven yet!

In terms of emotional dramas, there are also Xiaoxiao, there are also possible Shura fields, and there are some other possible new heroines and so on.

In the second volume, there will also be Zhao Rong's down-to-earth growth.

I will also bury some of the pits in the first volume one by one.

Bring out some of the previous dark line foreshadowing!

It will also reveal the real main line and conflict contradictions of Sword Niang.

So the story of the sword girl has just begun.

Let's rush!

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Let's talk about it here.

In the future, the update time of Sword Niang will be twelve o'clock in the evening!

Xiao Rong will send out all the things he has written throughout the day.

It's generally two more!

No less than four thousand words!

At last.

Thanks to the brothers for the tip!

I haven't had time to thank you for the tips in the past few days.

I will go back at the end of the chapter, thank you one by one.

Well, there are some brothers who have a one-time reward that is much better......

Last week, the arrears paid off every Wednesday seem to have been made up again.

I owe a couple of brothers an update... I won't forget, brothers.

The last of the last.

Ask for a monthly pass!

Xiao Rong deliberately wrote so many words and wrote so sensational, the brothers gave face, posted "moved" and "tearful" in the chapter, and then voted for it~

Help Jian Niang get higher on the monthly ticket list and "deceive" more readers who don't know the truth into the pit!

Let them understand what it means to "I have a fox fairy lady", "I am reborn on the way to send jade to the lady and a little fox demon "embarrassed", "I am reborn in the other world to send express", "Xuanhuang stranded", "crooked mouth scholar Zhao Ziyu", "dare to ask where the road is?", ......