Bai Juan snorted unceremoniously, thinking that Li Xuan was overwhelmed.

Li Xuandu has also read several books, especially the four strange books, which are historical romance, heroic legends, gods and demons, and human affairs, which are very well explained and extremely worldly, but unfortunately the book "Travels to the Western Regions" was banned by the imperial court. In addition, there is a "Feng Shen", compared with the four strange books, the writing is slightly inferior, but the idea is excellent, it can be said that it is a collection of various legends of Taoism, combing the relationship between the three saints of Xuanmen and the two saints of the West, and there are twelve golden immortals and many scattered immortals, as well as many wonderful magic weapons and formations, which are fascinating.

Li Xuandu thought that he didn't have much ink in his belly, he couldn't write beautiful words, he couldn't write moral articles, and he couldn't write the four strange books, but he could write a few books that didn't go into the stream, so he said: "What's so difficult about this? It's not that I'm boasting, and I'm writing my experience into it, and that's it. ”

If it was in front of other people, Li Xuandu would definitely not act so frivolously, but in front of Bai Juan, he would not be too restrained about himself, but it was different from the usual Li Xuan.

At this time, Bai Juan also let go a little, and said: "Don't talk big, if you say that you are a genius who is rare to see in a hundred years when you practice swords, I admit this, but if you want to say that you are a civil and military all-rounder, then I will never believe it, don't think that you can write a book, and don't think that you can be a storyteller if you can speak, the threshold of this line is in the door." ”

Li Xuandu smiled and asked, "Then what is Miss Qin's opinion?" You might as well talk about it, and let me, a layman, have a long insight." ”

Bai Juan stretched out two fingers and said, "I'll just say two points." First, the script is not a moral article, not a high-level handout, not a gorgeous rhetoric, and the audience is not literati, but ordinary people, so you must not fiddle with the writing too much, write obscurely, that will not work, to focus on the vernacular. Secondly, the core of the script lies in the story, and all the premise is to tell the story you want to write. ”

Li Xuandu nodded: "I understand, you don't need writing to write a script, the key is to tell a story." ”

"Wrong, very wrong. Bai Juan's face was straight: "It's not that you don't need writing, but don't be too demanding about writing." If the writing effort is counted as ten points, the famous article is probably more than nine points, if you can write a script with four points, it is a passing grade, five points is considered beautiful, if it is further up, it will be too much. But if you only have one or two points in your writing, you must not underestimate the effort of writing, let alone believe words that are not important. ”

Li Xuandu then asked, "What about storytelling?"

Bai Juan carried his hands behind his back, but there was some of the appearance when he taught those children to learn the piano in Guide Mansion, he was a teacher, his expression was solemn, and he said: "The essence of the story is not novel, such as the story of your Zifu Sword Immortal, it is not very exciting, it is nothing more than a big ups and downs, and there is no essential difference between the revenge teenagers who happened to encounter after being destroyed, revenge or the righteousness of the world, it is all a thread, all kinds of people and things you meet, are beads, and finally strung into a bead curtain, this is the story." ”

"With a story, how to tell it is also knowledge, just like a chef cooking, the ingredients are already there, but different chefs use the same ingredients to make dishes that are completely different, this is the level of cooking, in the details to see the real effort. The text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the flat, and the painting is like making friends. If you want people to like the story, you must first put the listener in the story, and the mind goes up and down with the joys and sorrows of the people in the story, and secondly, ......"

Bai Juan's words stopped abruptly, she suddenly raised her eyebrows and looked at Li Xuandu, and said in an unkind tone: "Hey, are you listening?"

"Of course I'm listening. Li Xuandu smiled and nodded, "It's just that I have a question that I haven't figured out." ”

Bai Juan asked, "What's the problem?"

Li Xuandu said bluntly: "Since Miss Qin already understands it so well, why is the last book still unsatisfactory?"

This sentence is tantamount to hitting a snake and hitting seven inches, scolding people and exposing the short, no less than his "Taiyin Thirteen Swords".

Bai Juan was so angry that his chest trembled slightly, and he took a deep breath to stabilize his emotions, and then said expressionlessly: "It's easier said than done." ”

Easier said than done.

It's like an official in the world, who doesn't know that he should be a clean official? But if you really want to do it, it's too difficult.

Li Xuandu nodded thoughtfully: "Reasonable, I have been taught." ”

Bai Juan couldn't help but grit his silver teeth, and thought hatefully, why did this person be so underwhelmed! No wonder he was chased and killed by the Jiangbei heroes in the first place. Also, didn't the rivers and lakes say that the Purple Mansion Sword Immortal was arrogant and indifferent? If you don't agree with each other, you will draw your sword and kill when you see blood, is it all a lie? Or is it that the Purple Mansion Sword Immortal in front of you is a fake at all, or has his temperament changed greatly after falling into the realm?

Just when Bai Juan was eager to cut off Li Xuandu's dog head with a knife in his heart, Li Xuandu's words changed: "In all fairness, I admire Miss Qin very much, she practices swords well, she is also proficient in music and rhythm, and she can write good articles. I can't do it, except for some talent in sword practice, in other things, it's a mess, piano, chess, calligraphy and painting, everything is not fine, poetry and songs, bullshit. ”

Bai Juan knew that he deliberately flattered himself, but he didn't refute it, and even had a little bit of unspeakable self-satisfaction, after all, the person who flattered was the first person on the Shaoxuan List, the original Purple Mansion Sword Immortal, and although this person was a little annoying, he didn't hate it.

Most things in the world are like this, there is no woman who does not like to listen to beautiful words, and the reason why some women seem to be immobile is just because the person who speaks is wrong.

After the two continued to walk side by side for a while, Bai Juan suddenly remembered something and said to Li Xuandu beside him, "Hey." ”

Li Xuandu was indifferent and looked up at the sky.

"Hey!" Bai Juan accentuated.

Only then did Li Xuandu retract his gaze and said with a blank expression: "Is Miss Qin talking to me?"

Bai Juan said in an unkind tone: "Who else is there here besides Your Excellency?"

Li Xuandu smiled and said, "I don't call me 'hey', just call me Zifu." ”

Bai Juan said: "Shameless." ”

Li Xuandu said: "Each other." ”

Bai Juan said: "Dengzi." ”

Li Xuandu said: "Each other." ”

"Who is with you and each other?"

"Purple Mansion and White Silk. ”

"Shameless. ”

"Each other, each other. ”

"you. ”

"Where?"

Unconsciously, the two returned to the inn and came to their respective rooms, the two rooms were opposite the door, and Qin Daofang's room was next to Li Xuandu's room. ”

Li Xuandu put away Fang Cai's frivolous posture and nodded: "This is natural. ”

The girl thought for a moment and added, "Also, don't quarrel with me. ”

After that, the girl didn't wait for Li Xuandu to respond, she went directly into the house and quickly closed the door, for fear that Li Xuan would follow in.

Li Xuandu stood still, touched his nose, and then turned and entered his room.