Carvin, take a day off (send it wrong, don't subscribe, send one tomorrow to make up for free, sorry)
Let's talk about the book! To be honest, this book is the popularity of the Immortal Road evergreen, at the beginning of writing, I am not used to this way of writing, no way to start, I admit that this book has a lot of shortcomings, at the beginning of the writing like a lone ranger, but with the family, and then wrote to the green generation, I vaguely understand the difference between the family cultivation of immortals and the lone ranger, to be honest, now the starting point of the family text, I have read, but not to read carefully, I mainly read the reader's comments, some readers said, why the pig's foot family can destroy the family at every turn, other families are only promised, I can't help but think, why the pig's foot family can rise, other families can't, burn and loot?
What can the pig's foot family do, why can't other families, some people want to say, you write online articles, not red mansions, do you have that level to write red mansions?
I admit that I can't write it, but, what I sent out, I have to pass this level first, in fact, the next plot is Wang Changping, Wang Changhuan, Wang Qingqi, Wang Changyue's role, Wang Changyue as the protagonist's sister, I really didn't write it well, and there is no plot next?
No, there is, but I don't think it's appropriate, for example, Wang Changping found a certain ancient monk in the cave, and the Hui invited the same clan to break the formation, doesn't this use Wang Changyue?
Or Wang Changping was seriously injured and needed to refine some kind of elixir, wouldn't this use Wang Qingqi? Or if he found a certain spirit mine, he went out to fight with other families, which required the use of array mages and alchemists, or the discovery of secret realms, and the opening of dungeons, these plots are all right, I think the family text!
The most inspirational thing is the plot before the knot, why do other families have been submissive, once the pig's foot family, it is a spirit stone mine, a metal vein, I also wrote this kind of plot, but I suppressed it more powerfully, I didn't give the pig's foot family much benefit, I have enough to suppress the pig's foot family, otherwise get a third-order demon pill, just refine a few Zhuji Dan, and you can have a few more clansmen in the foundation building period, or discover the ancient monk's cave mansion, get a magic cheat, but isn't it too easy?
I don't think I can write a classic, but I want to write a family essay that I recognize, and I can write about metal mines, spirit stone mines or secret realms, but the problem is, this is the early stage, the critical moment for the rise of a family, and then pies fall from the sky, and hundreds of thousands and twenty thousand spirit stones fall?
I might as well write about the Lone Ranger! The whole clan worked hard, deducting the expenses, and the profit of a year was thousands of spirit stones, and then the author opened the golden finger, and the pig's foot family occupied a spirit stone mine and metal mine?
Falling from the sky at once, a dozen or even hundreds of thousands of spirit stones? I can't accept it myself, I can write like this in the later stage, I can't in the early stage, I sat for most of the day today, and I conceived a lot of plots, but I can't pass this level, why can't other families rise, the rise of the pig's foot family, so I cut a lot of plots, and I plan to write about farming honestly, starting from farming, not farming all the time, there will be fights, but I don't want the pig's foot family to be too rebellious, the thinking has not been clear, I remember to write a symbol, a book friend who deducted the buckle to read wrote a long comment, saying that Xianxia should write love and hatred, not fighting, killing, killing, there can be fighting, killing, but not often, as long as I write Xianxia Wen, I will always remember the comment of this book friend, This book still has a lot of shortcomings, I admit it, I didn't say that other family texts are bad, don't spray me because of this, the above are my personal opinions, I hit the street, I'm not proud, but I want to be responsible for this book, that's all,