Horse thief B stood next to him: "There are months every year when people don't seem to want to die. A year ago, after the beginning of spring, I have not bought or sold. But now it's finally there, the person who wants to die is our boss, I don't know why I came with him to rob tens of thousands of Warat troops, maybe I'm really stupid enough to believe that heroes can't be killed. ”

A horse thief pointed down the mountain: "Boss, our goods are here." ”

"Okay, brothers, this time our goal is ......"

"Wushuang!"

"Robbery...... The horse thieves let out what might be the last time in their lives and swept down from the long yellow sand hills.

The Knights of Warat looked in amazement at the dozens of sand lines on the dunes, like rabbits screaming and rushing towards the wolves.

It wasn't until Aaron rushed to their side that the Warats hadn't reacted.

Where the knife flashed, people turned over on their backs, and dozens of yellow dust rushed into the black sea.

Slash, slash, slash, rip black, and more black comes in. The horse thieves threw up the unprepared tens of thousands of cavalry. On one side were the nomadic cavalry skilled in archers and horses, and on the other side were horse thieves and bandits roaring in the mountains, and the riders played a race of equestrianism and chase......

Dear readers of "Banzha Zhen Wulin":

First of all, thank you for your family choice and support for this book! Because of your choice, we have become friends; Because of your support, the author's distribution work has been motivated! Therefore, I regard your choice as fate and firmly treasure it in the name of family affection; I take your support as motivation and give you a peach and plum in return!

In fact, for a long time, the meager subscriptions and few collections made me feel like I wanted to give up.

A few days ago, I was discouraged, complained, and even had the idea of abandoning the book.

I was really touched by your messages of encouragement and support. It's not a polite remark, it's really moving.

In today's chaotic writing environment, you can still see so many warm messages, and your nose is sour.

Perhaps, there are some people's messages that I can't reply to in time, but I keep them all in mind.

In the mountains and seas of messages, I can express very little gratitude, I can only repay everyone with more updates, better stories.

Readers who have clicked in, please read the following words patiently, and will not waste too much of your time, which are all from my heart:

First of all, a very, very important word: be sure to collect it first (not in your own computer browser or folder, but click on the blue [Bookmarking] icon below the introduction of the work, otherwise you may not be able to see my updates on time every day.) Because the site sometimes has frequent convulsions.,The display content will be delayed for a long, long time.,Everyone has to collect it first.,Every time you log in to the novel.,You can see my updated content in your personal user center collection for the first time.。 Even if the website is not displayed, in fact, there is already new content in the website's personal collection!

Every time I open a new article, the initial pressure is very great, no matter how hard I try, there are variables in everything, which is caused by many objective reasons and unknown factors, so I hope that readers and friends who are reading this article can continue to support me, the support method is very simple, just two steps:

The first step is to register the username of the novel in less than a minute, and then click on the blue icon below the book description——— [Bookmark] and [I want to recommend];

The second step, please leave a message to tell me after the collection is recommended, and let me know that there is a reader like you.

The weather is getting hotter and hotter, so you should pay attention not to catch a cold while blowing the air conditioner. Getting to know more and more readers is one of the things I think is the most enjoyable thing about writing articles, thank you.

Now you are like me, holding your mobile phone and reading novels or various types of articles, we have always liked to read, and the text always has the magic that attracts us, and the heart is full. When you see some articles, you will feel that they are really well said and reasonable.

When you see some of the episodes, you're like, alas, I've been through it or I wish it were. Most of the time, we feel the same as the author, and our imagination is even more different!

I can't organize an article with fluent and appropriate words, I can't properly express what I want to express, or this is not the way I express myself. It is the author who has achieved the perfect expression, and at the same time, thinking about it, the author also hopes that we can understand every word of them, or write what they want to say for us, and also hope that we can read and appreciate it.

Thank you to every author and reader. It is each author who attracts the reader, and every reader who makes the author. In fact, we are complementary and indispensable.

I'm a novice.,Writing articles inevitably has some deficiencies.,Please forgive me.,You're welcome to ask questions like me.,But it's to refuse trolls.,No matter how bad the article I write, it's also my own hand-typed word by word on the keyboard.。

If someone sprays me, I will accept it with an open mind, because after all, I am a novice and don't like to read it, I can not read it, and I thank those readers who support me, I am very grateful in my heart, thank you for writing for the first time for giving me the courage to continue writing.

I'm a newcomer, a newcomer in the truest sense of the word, and although I've written a lot of novels, it's the first time I've written a novel at the beginning. I'm now living a life of codewords, codewords, and codewords every day. I asked myself, are you tired? The answer is yes. Tired, very tired, my dreams when I sleep now are all plots from novels, this is really not an exaggeration. When I went to bed at noon today, I was thinking about the plot of Jiufeng Mountain, and I really dreamed of the scene in the novel.

I'm a little enchanted!

It's good to be enchanted, so that you can get things done. But I didn't do it well. I was not satisfied with many of the chapters I wrote when I looked back, but I didn't have time to change them because of time. Only later on, I will change it slowly.

Please forgive me for being so irresponsible.

I'm not here to complain in this article, I just want to say some of the feelings I felt when I coded words these days, and some heartfelt words.

I have a short coding time now, and I have to go to work during the day, so I only code a little in the morning and evening. Someone said in the QQ group today that I'm slower, but it's really not slow, I changed four chapters yesterday, more than 10,000 words, this is more than 10,000 words I worked hard to write. Although you may finish reading it in more than ten minutes, I have to write for more than ten hours. For more than ten hours, I racked my brains to think about the plot and what kind of sentences I wanted to use to present the plot through words, which is a big project, and people who have never written novels really don't know. After I finished writing each chapter, I had to read and read it, and then check it for my wife if there were any typos or sentences that didn't make sense, and then correct it and come back up. I really don't want to leave myself with regrets, and I don't want to compromise, so I'm serious.

I guess some people will complain and write this kind of garbage so seriously? I just want to say that as long as I write seriously, this is not garbage, this is a part of my life.

I enjoy writing and sometimes laugh at the plot I set. Sometimes I will also read my novels as a book friend who is chasing more, and find problems and solve them in time!

I may lack followers, I may not have thousands of subscribers! I can also do without excellent writing, but I have one of my most precious things!"Attitude" I aspire to become a god! Like the three young people of the Tang family, like the silkworm potato! So I take every word I write down seriously, every keyboard I type!

I'm not going to make writing my profession, I just want to think of it as a hobby, a hobby to be willing to share my own stories.

I'm not a writer, please call me a "storyteller". I would like to share with you the story of my creation and my life. So I also ask you not to be stingy with the referral votes in your hands. It's a matter of clicking "add to the shelf" for a second, but for me, it's a huge motivation to keep writing!

I hope that interested readers can give me valuable advice, whether it is the general direction such as the plot or the small details such as character building, etc., I will accept it with an open mind.

In addition, several readers have told me that they want to try their hand at writing a book, and here are a few tips from me:

First of all, you have to find the right positioning, whether you write it for girls or for boys (Wulin's words should be for boys), you want to write a little deep or relatively superficial.

In addition, if you want to be profound, refuse to write coolly, if you want to write with depth, then you need to have some writing skills to win over readers, if you want to be a little shallow, then it is easy to say, it is not difficult to get a little meat on the prologue.

And then, actually, I read your prologue and I didn't want to read it, why? I can't tell, I feel that your language organization skills are not in place, if so, then no matter how atmospheric and wonderful the content of your own story is, it will be difficult for you to show it. Now most readers of online novels don't have the patience to watch your anger and hatred under this premise, and it is better to take a look at Xiao Huangwen if you have this kung fu.

For me, dialogue forms the core of my writing. Because the dialogue contains very rich elements, a large number of characters and plot driving need the role of dialogue, and the limited and necessary clue information is an extremely important part of the entire narrative structure. After the outline is established, the inextricable logical connections most of the time need to be reconciled and fleshed out by dialogue.

Of course, it's also the hardest part to work with, because it's full of uncertainty.

But then again, if you put it simply, there is really only one essence of writing dialogue: let people speak.

Don't laugh, because I've seen countless authors who ask men to say things about women, cowards to say things about heroes, farmers to say things that are not human words, and people to say things that are not human words......

Many writers never seem to think about what the dialogue means for the object and the whole, but more about using dialogue jitter or mechanically narrating what the author wants to tell the reader like completing a task.

The dialogue should be subordinated to the character, the scene and the events that are taking place at the same time.

First of all, let's start with the characters.

We generally divide the characters into three categories, which are three-dimensional figures, flat figures, and awl figures.

The so-called three-dimensional character, as the name suggests, is a systematic personality image under the author's shaping. That is to say, all aspects of this character, the good and evil of the character, the wisdom and stupidity, the advantages and disadvantages, the positive and the negative, all the contradictions, are presented to the reader in a complete and three-dimensional way like a normal person. But to create such a character, it takes a lot of space and ink, and generally this type of character is used as the protagonist of a medium-length novel.

The so-called flat figure is like a piece of paper, you can only see one side or the other side of it, and nothing more. You might wonder if such a character is used as the main character for a short story, but it's not. This type of character is an extremely unsuccessful candidate for the protagonist in short, medium, or long stories. Because its positioning is more inclined to a simple good guy or a bad guy, a communications soldier who brings information and then dies, a character who can be discarded after showing an aspect, that is, a supporting role, a trick.

The awl character is a character with a sharp character prominence, this type of character has a sparkle that pierces the reader's heart and catches the reader's eyeballs, which is unforgettable. So this type of character is also often used as the protagonist of a short story. Of course, in the middle and long series, the use of this type of character must not be noisy.

Such a character is the beginning of the part compared to the horse thief B in "The World's Unparalleled" where he is now.

Thief B, as a supporting character, appears very few times in the book, and his description is limited to a few sentences, but after you read it, an image of loyalty and courage emerges vividly, and you will never forget him and the knife he blocked.

Never try to control more stereoscopic characters than you can handle, and often writers unwittingly write different characters that are very similar, or very similar to one of the characters in the previous game - although he is not set to do so. It is necessary to stop this kind of action that will make the thinking rigid, otherwise there will be a situation like Tang Qi, where the male protagonist of each novel comes out of a mold.

If you don't have a lot of experience in writing for a long time, try not to try to create a three-dimensional character in a short story, it takes a lot of skill to create a character in just a few thousand words, and it's not the same thing as how to stuff an elephant in the fridge.

If you choose an awl character as the main character type, then don't let the supporting character appear more brilliant than him. Because the character of the awl is characterized by a single point of breakthrough, then it is determined that he is useless in other aspects, so that the core of your novel always revolves around the point that should be broken through.

That's it, thank you

Three-fingered Langjun