Superfluous words
Recently, my teeth are still hurting, my energy is a little unfocused, and I have difficulty coding words.
Recently, I have read a few books of great gods, and I feel a little regressive, I feel that the plot is a little confusing, or the plot is a little watery. So I commented a few words. As a result, I was said to be a water army, deliberately black, and some said I was jealous. I'm also speechless, there are so many gods at the starting point, am I jealous?
So, just delete those comments, choose to be silent, and never write comments again.
The environment for online articles is deteriorating, not only in terms of writing topics, but also in terms of commentary.
In fact, many of the starting points can be seen by piracy, and it only takes a few seconds for piracy to be seen.
But why, there are still people who choose the genuine version, mainly because of the support for the author.
In the past, after reading some books, there were a lot of good reviews and a lot of bad reviews, but now it seems a bit naïve, sometimes the author responds, sometimes there is no response. But at least no one called me a water army, saying that I was jealous. Sometimes, those authors respond with a response or two.
, it is difficult to reconcile, some people like it, some people don't like it.
Even Dream of Red Mansions still has some people who don't like it.
It is said that Bingxin does not like Dream of Red Mansions.
In the books I wrote, some book friends said that the writing was poor, the logic was confusing, and there were other problems, but I accepted one or two, and if I didn't accept it, I chose to be silent.
Only if there is no swear words or insulting language in the comments, the post will be deleted directly.
The success of online articles lies in the wide range of topics and the fact that anything can be written, among which there is a lot of dross, but also a lot of excellent ones have been born.
But now, the subject matter of online articles is actually becoming more and more limited.
The city has become a forbidden area for online articles.
As for the suspense class, suspense reasoning, which inevitably involves crime, gore, etc., is also a tightrope walker and is easy to be harmonized.
History, the dynasties that can be written are all badly written, and now looking at those, it's extremely boring.
I remember that a few years ago, many histories, Xianxia, fantasy, etc., all had love descriptions, because the online writers of that era, who were in the era of young people, were all influenced by Qiong Yao's TV series and Jin Yong's love, and there were a lot of love descriptions in the plot.
But now many online writers seem to be married and seem to have become mature, there is no love among them, there is no female pig's foot, even if there is a female pig's foot, it is a passing pass, or simply a tool person.
This is not an isolated case, but a common case.
Recently, some great gods have opened a book, and I also stepped forward to read it a few times, and after reading the three golden chapters, I felt average, so I gritted my teeth, and read the golden ten chapters again, and I was still in the clouds.
Looking at the introduction again, I don't know what to do.
So, I think, maybe my level is insufficient, continue to grit my teeth and watch, see thirty, still can't see the highlights, maybe I want to learn the legend of mortal cultivation immortals!
Now many great gods open books, and they seem to pursue writing, and they have dropped a lot in the plot, looking sleepy.
Many great gods no longer pursue the golden three chapters, the golden ten chapters, and the golden thirty chapters, but the golden hundred chapters.
It's like the legend of mortal cultivation of immortals, reading the first ten chapters, drowsy, there are no highlights, and seeing the first 100 photos, I am also drowsy. It wasn't until there were more than 200 that it was interesting and gradually got into a good situation. The legend of mortal cultivation of immortals seems to be describing the story of cultivating immortals, but it is better to describe the various states of life and professional career.
It is said that the mortal cultivator passed on 600,000 words before signing the contract.
It's not that editing can't do it, in fact, the first two hundred are really average, and I'm really sleepy.
Now, I'd rather look at Okami's previous works than look far from Okami's new works.
Some people say that if someone has a poor level of literature, they say that elementary school students write essays.
I'm speechless.
In fact, in the field of writing, the most difficult to write is the essay for elementary school students.
After Bai Juyi wrote the poems, he had to let the old woman understand them, and some of the jerky words had to be removed.
Picasso said: "After I was able to draw as well as Raphael at the age of 14, I spent my life learning to draw like a child." "In the eyes of a master, it is more difficult for a child to draw than for a master to draw.
Just like Picasso, at the age of fourteen, he was already the Renaissance era, the level of a top painter, and his debut was the pinnacle. But he was satisfied, not satisfied, but kept innovating, so he became the only living moment, when a painting entered the Louvre.
Primary education, shaping the three views;
secondary and high school education, which teaches common sense of life;
Only universities teach social knowledge.
Primary school textbooks are more important than middle school, high school, and even college textbooks.
Because of the mistakes in primary school textbooks, it can ruin a generation.
What qualifications do we have, to despise those schoolboy essays.
Literature is divided into pure literature and popular literature.
Popular literature, pay attention to the plot of the story, pure literature, pay attention to the writing and plot.
For example, "Norwegian Wood" is mainly written to win, as for the plot, there is really no plot, and the characters are also weak;
and "Dream of Red Mansions" is also pure literature, and the writing wins, as for the plot and the like, it is average.
If you look at the plot of Dream of Red Mansions, it is enough to fall asleep, but if you look at the writing, you will find it interesting.
I remember that back then, I gritted my teeth and finished watching "Dream of Red Mansions", gritting my teeth and watching "One Hundred Years of Solitude", after watching One Hundred Years of Solitude, I felt that my head was going to explode, and I felt that I was very illiterate.
Now, looking at some of the new works written by the great gods, they are even more jerky than "One Hundred Years of Solitude", which proves once again ...... I'm speechless too!