Volume 5 Chapter 1 Storming the Camp 1
ps: This chapter and the next chapter are actually the end of the previous volume, but I think it's more malicious to end with Ying Feiyang's lovelorn being dumped, so I put this chapter in a new volume
In the western suburbs of Luoyang, Mu Zixuan strode forward, his face was calm, there was no joy or sorrow, the direction of his travel, the campfire was in the sky, if it was not night and day, a sword and soldier breath came to his face, it was the northwest battalion where the Youzhou Army under Zhang Shouqi was stationed. οΌβ§β―
And next to the tree on the side of the road, Hu Li stood leaning on the tree, waiting for a long time, when he saw Mu Zixuan coming, he raised his eyebrows and said: "It's been so long, just now I sensed a dark aura in Si Tiantai, but what happened?"
"Yaoyu, dance with love, before the fall, she entered the Tao with dance. β
Hu Li sighed, and said with a look of longing: "Entering the Tao with dance, the last dance of Lord Ji Xiang will be amazing, but it's a pity that I didn't have the opportunity to see it, and now I regret a little bit, I didn't have the cheekiness to witness the end of Lord Ji Xiang with you." β
Mu Zixuan's expression darkened slightly, and he didn't want to say more about it, so he immediately said, "Don't talk about this, let's solve the last trouble first." With that, continue in the direction of the camp.
Hu Li also walked side by side, and sighed at the same time: "Yes, I left Zhang Shouzhi alive, I wanted to create a dispute between Buddhism and Taoism, but the emperor was also calm, and he actually pressed this matter down, and later wanted him to die in Si Tiantai to cause you some trouble, but the result was still a failure, and the calculation was unsuccessful, and in the end he was almost used by Ji Xiang to use Zhang Shouzhi, causing a war between the Tang Dynasty and Beilongtian, which was really a good game laid by my uncle!"
Mu Zixuan ruthlessly exposed: "Brother Hu should accept it when he sees it, don't get cheap and sell well, at least take Zhang Shouqi out of the water, I heard that Beilongtian intends to cultivate forces among the Hu tribes such as the Turks and Khitans in the North, without Zhang Shouqi, the current tiger general, Beilongtian's actions should no longer be tied, and this alone is not a loss." β
Hu Li laughed and said: "Then it is necessary for Zhang Shouzhi to die, Ji Xiang may have a follow-up move, only when Zhang Shouzhi is dead, can we cut off the regeneration of things, and we can rest assured." β
"Yes, Bei Longtian hasn't waited for him to start a war, and the strength of Huang Shi Xingtian is not enough, and it can't be consumed, for the conspiracy of Bei Longtian, for my calculations, for our common interests, Zhang Shouzhi must die. Mu Zixuan's voice sank, and his words were murderous, and he had arrived in front of the camp.
The soldiers guarding the gate at the gate of the camp sensed the murderous aura, and immediately raised their weapons and asked, "Who is it!"
When the sword soldiers were approaching, Hu Li turned a blind eye and corrected: "What conspiracy, calculation, and interests?
"-We are for the peace of the human race and the demon race!"
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In the main tent of the camp, Zhang Shouzhi was lying on the bed in a faint place, and a military doctor with the army was frowning and taking his pulse for him. On the side, the envoy of Youzhou Jiedu, when Zhang Shouqi, the general of the auxiliary state, paced back and forth impatiently, and there was a burst of "da-da" military boots.
As soon as the military doctor let go of his hand, Zhang Shouqi hurriedly asked, "How is it!"
The military doctor bowed his head and said respectfully: "The eldest lord is a fairy-like figure, and his subordinates dare not assert that their medical skills are shallow, but they just feel that the eldest lord's qi and blood loss is terrible, although there is no danger to his life now, but I am afraid that it will affect Shou Yuan's ......."
"Loss of qi and blood, then use ginseng, deer antler, He Wu, and the medicinal materials that Your Majesty has rewarded me this time, and give them all to him!" Zhang Shouqi ordered with his hand.
The master who was accompanying him coughed lightly and said, "Grandpa Guo, there is a saying, subordinates don't know whether to talk about it or not......
Zhang Shouqi frowned and waved his hand: "Then don't talk about it, if you don't say it, I also know what kind of fart you want to fart!"
The master bookkeeper looked embarrassed, but he still continued with a cheeky face: "Grandpa Guo, the time limit for you to come to Shendu to report on your work has expired, and it is said that you should return to Youzhou, but for the sake of the eldest lord, you still refused to leave under the pretext of being unwell and stationed in the northwest camp, although in order to show loyalty only left eight hundred brothers, but, this is still a taboo for Your Majesty, and now the eldest lord who escaped from prison is brought back to the camp, which is more suspected of interfering in politics with military power, if it is a general crime, but the eldest lord is guilty of killing the teacher, Grandpa Guo, you are so disobedient to the meaning of the saint...... β
Before the main book's voice fell, he heard a snap, and was slapped by Zhang Shouqi so that his eyes were full of stars, and before he fell, he was pulled to his eyes by Zhang Shouqi with his collar, Zhang Shouqi's eyes were like devouring tigers and leopards, and he said: "The crime of killing the teacher? Which one is disobeying the will of the Holy Lord? The holy decree is written in black and white that Sima Zhenren is dying and ascending! You actually listened to those demon and evil monks and accused my eldest brother of killing the teacher! What a bold man!"
The master bookkeeper was so frightened that his face turned pale, but he still insisted: "Grandpa Guo, but the eldest master escaped after all, if we hold him back, if the people of the immortal family find him......"
Zhang Shouqi shook him to the ground and shouted: "When the old man was young, there was a fortune teller who said that the old man was a bad man, and he was a bloody murderer, destined to be less than thirty, but the old man is fifty this year, and he has been rolling so many times in the sea of corpses, and the ones who are bleeding are the old man's enemies, what are the reasons why the old man can live until now? Isn't it that the eldest brother has been a monk for me since he was a child, praying for blessings! The old man's life was saved by the eldest brother, and now the old man has protected him, what a fairy, God, I want to see who dares to take him away!"
Suddenly, when there was a commotion, a soldier went straight into the main camp and hurriedly said: "General, someone outside the camp broke in, saying that it was Si Tiantai, and he wanted to see you!"
"Si Tiantai, hmph, no, drive them away!" Zhang Shouqi said angrily.
"They're already rushing, but unfortunately, they can't do it!" a clear voice came, followed by a series of screams, and several soldiers were shocked into the tent and fell to the ground.
"Guarding the Guogong!" The master hurriedly opened his hands in front of Zhang Shouqi and shouted, but Zhang Shouqi pushed him away, opened the door curtain and went out of the tent, but saw the soldiers in a circle, and the swords pointed directly at the two young men, and the two young people were surrounded but their faces did not change, among them, the purple-clothed young man smiled and saluted: "Mu Zixuan, the Tiantai Lingtai Lang of the next lawsuit, has seen Zhang Guogong." β
Zhang Shouqi had seen him before, and he also knew that Zhang Shouzhi was mostly convicted because of him, so he naturally didn't have a good face at this time, and said in a deep voice: "A mere seven-rank Lingtailang, he dares to trespass into the barracks!
Mu Zixuan looked around at the sergeants, even if they were fighting against inhuman forces, the sergeants were still neat and tidy, and they were not chaotic at all, and couldn't help but praise, "It is worthy of the Youzhou Iron Army, but eight hundred people have such a fierce sword and soldier aura, if it really doubles or doubles, it is really difficult to deal with it, no wonder the prince of the country can ask me for guilt without fear." β
But in the next moment, Mu Zixuan's figure flashed, and he was already standing beside Zhang Shouqi, and said, "Then the Duke of the Kingdom knows what kind of crime it is to harbor criminals in the military camp!"
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It seems a bit out of place to start writing testimonials in the new volume, but I've done a lot of inappropriate things, and it's not clear how to write the new volume, so I can only slow down and write testimonials
First explode two materials that want to explode from the third volume.,About the original setting of the third volume.γ
1. Sun Changji respects Sima Chengzhen so much because he developed a teacher fetish after being rescued by Sima Chengzhen, and he felt that he was too heavy-mouthed, so he was abandoned by me, but judging from the plot shown, it still evokes reverie.
2. The reason why Zhang Shouzhi was sure that his master had cultivated Yin Dan was because Hu Meier disguised herself as Sima Chengzhen's daughter when he practiced Yin Dan in the Western Regions, and had the same red Tai Chi shaped birthmark as evidence, and let him show up when he was xxoo with Zhang Shouzhi, Zhang Shouzhi thought that he would go to Sima Chengzhen for a showdown when he caught the handle, and then ...... But because the protagonist group who is responsible for solving the puzzle is not equipped with enough information, it can't be deduced to such a detailed point, and it's a little bloody in addition, so it was fictionalized by me.
One of the texts, slightly ruining the three views, you can jump directly.
The fourth volume is finished, and the most unsatisfactory chapter so far has basically made all the mistakes that can be made.
I didn't think about it in the early stage and started writing in a hurry.,And after it was put on the shelf, because of the pressure of mixing the word count.,It's also a state where I want to write.,So the rhythm of the whole fourth volume is very problematic.,Now re-read it.,I can delete a lot of side details.,Especially the fight scenes that I can't hold back as soon as I write.,Compress the content of more than 130 chapters to less than 100 chapters.γ
And it's too much to pursue the complexity of the layout.,It's also very disruptive to the rhythm.,And for the complexity of the layout.,And add a lot of settings.,What this formation.,That spell.,A bunch of messy things I look a little big.,I guess the reader looks at the same pain.γ Speaking of layout, in fact, I still like Hu Li's layout this time, the bureau is quite complicated, but it is also very important, let me sort it out.
Through a series of weakening from the third volume, the division of troops made the Shangqing faction's internal air defense, coupled with the arrangement of Ji Yaoyu, made all those who had a heart think that the flower transfer technique was carried out in the Shangqing faction, but Hu Li used the blind spot of his thinking to play a 'black under the lamp', and the real plan was actually in Si Tiantai. The plan on both sides is mainly based on Si Tiantai's, but the Shangqing faction's is equally important, the best result is that Ji Yaoyu does not resist, and obediently transfers her soul to Yang Yuhuan pretended to be Hu Meier, but relying on the soul beads obtained from Sima Chengzhen, it will inevitably fail to transfer flowers and grafts, so kill Ji Yaoyu and take Mu Yuan (key), and at the same time let everyone think that the plan failed, and lost the mind of profiting from it. And even if Ji Yaoyu resisted, the plan of the Shangqing faction could at least play a role in delaying time to ensure that Si Tiantai's side was not disturbed.
What a good layout, but this layout was a flash of inspiration when I went to the toilet, and after thinking about it, I immediately gave up the original idea without hesitation, overturning the original plot, but then the problem also came, this layout is so good, I don't know how to crack it, so the men and women of the Shangqing faction have a feeling of relying on the setting to break the skill. And Si Tiantai completely relied on Ying Feiyang to flip the table against the sky, which made me feel aggrieved for Hu Li, and I couldn't help it, and at the same time I was the enemy of the two protagonists with excellent natural luck, and I didn't pit you Hu Li.
Fortunately, the whole disaster plan is also a cover for another plan, and that plan was also successful, Hu Li was successful in the end, and of course I won't explain it in detail if the plan has been successful (laughs), and it may take a long time to reveal the answer to make you a face, give a hint, 1. The role of Mu Yuan 2. The missing person 3.
There are also a lot of characters stuffed in this volume, mainly because I feel that the fourth volume is 4o million words at the beginning, and only three of the peak masters who want to be described in thick ink and color have appeared, and the new generation of talents except for the Lingxiao Sword Sect has not appeared, so that the impatience in my heart has sprung up like a lot of cow x coaxing characters, and then there are many people digging pits, and they are all pits that I don't know when I can fill them, first take a notebook to remember, the long-term pit to be filled in the future has Yuwang Jiuding line (those who have read the introduction of the first version should be able to guess that this is the main line of the whole book), the knife line of killing Buddha, the seven murder lines, the six pure heaven altar lines, the Qiankun casting hand and the gambling line of Ying Feiyang,Ghost knows when it will be filled.,Today, a reader saw me write the end and mistakenly thought I was going to finish.,I want to end this thankless street book and open a brainless little white article to make money.,But this broken book is really just beginning.,The end of the book is far away!
Speaking of the plot of the fourth volume, what runs through the fourth volume is actually a love word, but the author and I am an older single waste! The emotional drama written by an older single waste is naturally not distorted and uncomfortable! So I wrote a kind of "hypocritical true feelings" that were influenced by the country's natural fragrance.
After that, the incarnation of Hu Li vented his emotions fiercely, Hu Li's explanation of the national color and natural fragrance was interpreted by the thinking of the ancients, and when translated into modern words, it can be clearly expressed in seven words - aroma stimulates hormones.
It is said that the feelings produced under the influence of supernatural powers are fake, but human feelings themselves are hormone secretion, appearance, artificially created romance, flowers, diamond rings, can stimulate hormone secretion to produce feelings, these feelings are true, how can the feelings produced by the fragrance in one step be considered fake, to a certain extent, this kind of love is closer to the essence, because it will not deceive, but does produce love hormones, at least, than the large number of people in society, the kind of people who say beautiful love words to people who have no feelings for various interests"Love" is real.
Let's say it's true, it's overbearing and doesn't give people room for choice, that's another topic, love without a choice is still not love.
And when it comes to exploitation, isn't love itself a use of relationships? Couples will hope to get spiritual comfort from each other, help in economic life, a way to get catharsis, support when they are old, and even in order not to be forced to marry by their parents, not to be looked at by relatives and friends, just imagine, will you fall in love with a person who has no help to you?
So having said that, now you can understand why I'm an older single waste, right?
All in all, the fourth volume is not well written, and the only thing I can be proud of is that I am falling on the way forward.
From the short and exquisite layout of the first volume, the excellent human sculpture and bloody fighting in the second volume, the multi-party competition driven by the clues of the criminal investigation case in the third volume, to the more cumbersome and complex layout of the fourth volume, which is driven by emotion, and involves more forces, I try to write something new and make some new breakthroughs in each volume, even if the attempt fails, compared with those writers who are paid 10,000 times higher than me, but still only dare to carefully write routine essays to please the audience, and dare not make the slightest breakthrough, I have fallen, but I still fall above themγ (To be continued.) )8