I'm going to talk about this volume at the end of each volume, and I feel like it's going to be a great help for me to organize the plot.

To tell you the truth, the end of the first volume was a bit hasty, according to my original thought, Xu Changan should have ended standing in front of that stone bridge.

The reason why I chose to end here is that if I don't end again, I can't hang on my face...

In fact, I can't hang up for a long time......

Because in chapter seventy-one I said that there are still forty or fifty thousand words left in the first volume, but now I have been writing in chapter ninety-eight, and the number of words has long exceeded the forty or fifty thousand words I said.

There is still one chapter left to end after the ninety-one chapter, but it took six chapters to finish...

Of course, it's not that it's always watering, but when the idea becomes words, I realize that there are so many things to write.

Some people may say that Xu Chang'an standing in front of the stone bridge can also be used as an ending, the number of words is the same, it's just a few names.

Not really.

If it was Xu Changan, he would still write about the choice of him and Lin Ying standing in front of that stone bridge.

Because Xu Changan is the protagonist, it is impossible to go over directly with Wu Qitu and Fang Chang.

I was terrified when I found out that the word count exceeded my expectations, so I kept the details as small as possible.

For example, Yan Weichu is at the mouth of Solo Alley, the two fights are very simple, everyone only makes one move in one game, and I am still trying my best to say that the fight is simple because of what... If I let it go, it will be three or four more chapters.

And I didn't write about him at all during the time Yang Hejiu left, and if I did, it would have to be several chapters, including when I reappeared in front of everyone, I just briefly mentioned it.

I didn't write again after Dasi Nong Huaxuan was rescued.

At the beginning of the next volume, Xu Changan came directly to the bridge, and he would appropriately mention Da Si Nong's current situation, as well as the relationship between him and Yang Hejiu that seems to be somewhat complicated now.

Even when Lin Ying and Xu Changan intercepted the pursuers at the city gate, I didn't write how Lin Ying went to fight, so everyone may feel that only Xu Changan is like swatting flies, and everyone else is not moving, all in order to reduce the number of words as much as possible.

It's really uncomfortable to write like this, and often after I finish writing five or six thousand words, I still need to reduce and merge these five or six thousand words into more than three thousand, which is far less pleasant than the beginning of writing.

So I won't say how many words will end in the next volume, how many chapters will end...

Let's talk about the first volume as a whole, and then talk about the details.

Although the ending was a bit hasty and flawed, I was still very satisfied with the first volume, and it was far more than I expected to be able to write this way.

When ideas come into words, it's something that makes me very excited and happy.

Of course, the price of all this is insomnia... This is also the main reason why the update is getting later and later.

You may not understand that insomnia and having time to get up and code words are not causal at all.

Insomnia does not mean that there is time to get up and code words, insomnia is not very mental and can't sleep, it is very sleepy and wants to sleep, but lying in bed is not able to sleep.

In this state, it is definitely impossible to work and write.

I won't say much about how personally, I have to apologize to everyone anyway, many promises have not been fulfilled, I'm sorry, I'm sorry.

I explained very clearly what the moon meant in the first volume, and I didn't go into too much wordiness.

How to end the first volume is not how Xu Changan did it.

Although Xu Changan is the protagonist, he is still too small in the whole world.

I won't force him to enlarge him when he is young, that is to embarrass him, but also to embarrass myself, I will only make him slowly become less small.

The premise at the end of the first volume is that the building appears in everyone's eyes, and some people have found their own way, which is already what I want to write in this volume of Shengmingyue.

The reason why Liu Chunsheng's last stroke is the end has nothing to do with the first volume, and it is to use this to lead the second volume into the current.

All of this has been achieved in the book, and although it is a little different from what I thought, it is still very good.

The difference is that I said at the beginning, without the testimony of the protagonist, you can't do it, this is the problem that the end I said above is a bit hasty, these are my personal problems, the number of words is not well controlled, and I should have said the end of hundreds of thousands of words at that time...

And then at the end, my pattern became smaller, and my initial idea was that everyone should find their own way, not just the characters who are active in the book.

There are also unknown warriors, merchants, farmers, Hongchen women in the green building, princes and nobles, but when I went to implement them, I didn't say that this idea was unrealistic, I could have written them all from the perspective of the world.

The need to use too much pen and ink is one reason, but the main thing is that these are written at the beginning, and then it will be verbose to write later, which is exactly what I said before Some people don't find because the time has not come.

Then there are the soldiers in the book, and I have a sense of admiration for the soldiers, and these are not counted if I say them with my mouth now.

So it's not just a mouth, it should be seen between the lines in the book.

No matter what the armies in the book do, I'm going to wash it away, and that's something that other characters and organizations don't have.

I won't deliberately weaken the army, I'm not writing that you can't beat me because your army is weak, you are strong, but I am stronger.

This is also what Yang Hejiu said about the benefits of cultivation, higher, faster, and stronger.

The Jing Dynasty was a special one, and the army was very weak, so I didn't let them play at all.

The first character with a name to die in the book is Jiang Xiaobai.

I didn't spend too much time on the description of the characters, I only wrote some things with characteristics that can show what kind of person he is, and as for the clothes he wears, he changes back and forth between black, white, gray, red, and green...

Even the protagonist should not be able to tell what he looks like through the text description, only that he has a pair of full eyes and wears black clothes.

But Jiang Xiaobai, it's hard for me to write a little more details, although there are very few, but compared to others in black clothes, wearing green robes, it is enough details...

The description of his dress is black with a light blue neckline, and everyone should be able to guess that this is not wine.

Jiang Xiaobai is wine, Jiang Ming is tea, and Jiang Shui'er, the king of Qi, is water.

Jiang Xiaobai is in such an idea, and he died generously, and Jiang Ming was also willing to enter the game out of such thoughts.

The idea that there is water to have tea and wine is absolutely correct, after all, no one but monkeys has jumped out of the cracks in the stones.

But whether Jiang Xiaobai and Jiang Ming's approach derived from such an idea is correct or not should be controversial.

Yang Hejiu and I let him leave the team for a long time, not only to let Xu Changan and others have some room to play, but also to let him try to pursue what he needs to pursue.

He is willing to be nice to others, so I should try to be nice to him.

It is normal for Mr. to guard the students he has selected, but he should not always just stand by Xu Chang'an's side.

He was a man before he was a gentleman, so he should also pursue what a man should pursue.

So I wrote Huarong, a big beauty.

With this bureau of the state of Chu.

There is no Yang Hejiu in this bureau, but it is completely written for Yang Hejiu.

The story of him and Hua Rong should be the most beautiful paragraph in the book.

As for the person who watched Yan Weichu, it should be easy to guess that it was Lin Pinggui.

What is the monk going to do in Wangshulou, he will write in the future.

Then there are eleven kingdoms under heaven, and among these eleven kingdoms there is one emperor and ten kings.

No matter which country I am, I always firmly believe that those who can be the lord of a country will definitely not be fools, so whether it is the two emperors of the Dachang Dynasty, or the layout of Jiang Shui'er, the king of Qi, or the settlement of the king of Chu, they are all scheming.

Regarding the Spring Festival Wine, the Spring Festival is the Spring Festival, so the Fu Wine written in the book is the Spring Festival Wine.

Originally, I was quite satisfied when I came up with the name of the wine, but after using it for a while, I searched the Internet and there was really this name.

Another search for blessing wine...

There are actually some of them, and these two are not the same wine at all...

It's embarrassing.

I didn't want to introduce myself too much, but after thinking about it, let's talk about the author's name.

He Beichang is the name of a sword. That's right, it's the sword of the Son of Heaven called He Beichang.

The name may not sound like a sword, but it's the fifth heavenly sword.

I should be able to tell that this is the way I choose a name.

Names like Broken Stars, Asking the Moon, and Divine Fall generally don't use names.

I am willing to use it because these names are really useful for the later plot unveiling.

What about the talisman, what I wrote is about to be lost, because this is a martial arts, and there will be a lot of fantasy plots when using the talisman.

Originally, this book was fantasy, but after the book was published, my editor read it and said that it was not appropriate to put it in fantasy, so it was changed to martial arts.

The person to whom Wu Qitu threw the book was definitely not Xu Chang'an, who would write later.

Xu Chang'an has always had gains, for example, he almost reaped death in Sifang City...

Ahem...

I met Yang Hejiu, so I went to Wangshu Tower later.

There are still seven of the ten gold cakes that Wu Qitu gave to Xu Changan.

These ten gold cakes are very important for Xu Changan's future direction, and it should be seen through the three pieces that were sent.

So Wu Qitu did indeed make the most profitable deal in his life.

As for what Xu Chang'an's direction has to do with Wu Qitu, I will write about it later.

What I can say is that I will definitely not write about Xu Changan, who will think of these ten gold cakes in the future, and then go to repay Wu Qitu with a thousand gold, or under what conditions he saved him.

There are a lot of details and foreshadowing buried in the book, so I won't pick them all out.

Everyone is happy to watch, and there is no need to find those small details like picking thorns.

As for why I buried it, it must be to echo the context, otherwise the sudden plot will feel a little too jumpy.

For example, I emphasized many times in the previous article that Huarong must have the help of nobles to escape, so no, the plague god will come at night.

If it hadn't been emphasized, Yan Weichu had gone directly, and perhaps he hadn't emphasized it in advance, and the effect would have been better.

The first volume was finished before the end of the month, and there was still one day to go, just two months, a total of 320,000 words, and the average month should be 160,000.

This speed is not fast, and I will try to do more in the future.

Finally, I will make a summary.

Although the end of the first volume of Shengmingyue was hasty, it also met or even far exceeded my expectations.

After all, 320,000 words have to be written around these three words, and the direction is easy to control.

But looking back on the first volume, I was able to hold on, and I wrote some nice things that I hadn't thought of before I put pen to paper.

To put it mildly, I think it's well written...

The second volume is about the inflow of the sea, and it is mainly about the sea.

There will be some main thing in each volume, the first volume is the mountains and the bright moon, and the second volume can now reveal only the sea.