157 Major Proofreading (4)
——After a lot of hardships, a young man finally entered a powerful sect, but he provoked a tsundere beautiful girl in the sect competition. Of course, a real man will not be tempted by a mere beauty, so he didn't spare his hand and defeated the girl with three strikes and five divisions.
However, most of the beautiful girls have a backstage - so the girl's boyfriend makes a strong appearance! This boyfriend has a wide range of contacts in the sect, is skillful, and has an extremely deep background - his master is the head of the sect. is also rich in money, and some treasures will definitely fall into a fight - no matter how you look at it, it is the most suitable natural template for the important role of "early mini-boss"!
...... First is the boyfriend's younger brother, and then he himself, in strict accordance with the order of the weak first and then the strong, trying to clean up the young man, and after failing to succeed, he simply summoned a large group of friends to come forward...... is called suppression and revenge, but in fact, it sends money and treasure to help Shaoxia climb all the way.
If it is not cleaned up in the end, then it will simply be up to the master in charge to go out in person, and even the masters of the entire sect will go up together, and they will desperately find trouble for the young man for the complaint of a little girl...... But it doesn't matter, anyway, according to the needs of the plot, with the help of Jin Thigh and the author's father, these schemes will definitely fail, and the young man is naturally soaring in the process, with both people and money.
At this point, even the first sect in the world has been stepped on, so it doesn't seem to make much sense to stay in this world and beat children, if you don't want to end the book, just break through this world, go to heaven to become an immortal, and then go to heaven to start from a small minion...... With a little procrastination, it won't be a problem to water a few million words.
- What a perfect story, except for a slight lack of logic, and a slightly clichéd plot, there are no other shortcomings, and it is sure to be a fire when written...... Well, if I didn't happen to play the villain role in it, maybe I would really be interested in deducing it.
But think about it again, it seems that it's nothing to play the villain once in a while, just enjoy it!
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"Brother Chang, what are you thinking?
- Huang Chang was making an outline of his Xianxia masterpiece in his mind, and was suddenly woken up by Ji Ruo, who saw him distracted, glared at him very unhappily, and reminded again:
"Don't forget to teach him a lesson!"
"Ahh
Huang Chang looked at the strange young man who offended Ji Ruo, and felt that with the strength of the other party, it was not a big problem to enter the Fifth Heaven team, but to say that he could rush to the Sixth Heaven team, I am afraid it was a bit mysterious.
——With Huang Chang's mathematical mind, he can naturally see that the so-called rule of "winning three games in a row" is actually a simple division: one-eighth of the disciples in each level of the realm can enter the upper level and participate in higher-level competitions.
There are more than a hundred Quadruple Heaven cultivators here, and there will be about a dozen of them who have entered the Fifth Heaven Stage, and with the strength shown by those outer disciples, these positions are estimated to be theirs. But if you go up again, the five heavens of the sect are not small, there are hundreds of people up and down the mountain, and there are only a dozen four heavens, and it is not easy to break through from the inside.
After thinking about it, Huang Chang suddenly had a fun thought, and immediately said to Ji Ruo with a smile:
"I don't think that kid will last that long, so he might as well go find two younger brothers to play with him tomorrow. ”
- The sect competition is said to be a random selection of opponents, but in fact, it is not absolute. There are a number of venues in the martial arts arena, usually one person enters the arena to challenge first, and wait a while to see if anyone takes the initiative to go up to fight. If not, the presiding Fa Yuan Immortal Master will order one of them from the crowd preparing for the battle.
Fa Yuan Immortal Master has a vicious eye, and the opponents he chooses are often somewhat related to each other - either the level is similar, or the exercises restrain each other, in short, he will try to stimulate the potential of both sides in the battle, so that it is also convenient for him to make evaluations and guidance.
Like this time, according to the immortal master's post-game comments, Ji Ruo actually didn't have no chance to win, but her reaction was too slow, she was too slow to enter the battle state, and in the final analysis, she was still inexperienced in actual combat, so she was caught by someone and instantly defeated.
And what about the ruthless swordsman? His martial arts and tactics are all on the path of one-hit killing, and his martial arts are also good at quickly mobilizing the strength of the whole body, concentrating on one point, and they are quite appropriately matched with each other, which can be called perfect.
However, according to what the immortal master said, it is precisely because of this "perfection" that his current path has come to an end. It's hard to keep improving. Unless you break and then stand up, and give up something, you can pursue a longer-term goal.
Of course, in the short term, the actual combat capability will definitely decline as a result, but if we are reluctant to give up this low-level "perfection", then we will not be able to continue to improve.
"Although your kung fu is quite good, it can only play a role among innate martial artists and pre-Qi refining cultivators, and the effect on the truly strong is very limited. The enemies you came into contact with in the past were not of a high level, so you can use them easily, but in the future, I am afraid that there will be no such good things. ”
——Fa Yuan Immortal Master's guidance is not only good words, many comments hit the nail on the head, pointing out the weakest omissions of the disciples, of course, it sounds quite harsh.
After the young man heard this evaluation, he inevitably hesitated a little - in order to practice this kung fu and achieve today's achievements, he didn't know how much hard work he had spent and how much pain he had tasted! He even passed Kunlun's assessment with this kung fu, but this immortal master only said lightly, "This road is over, there is no future", so he had to give up everything in the past and start again?
Said that he could only deal with mortal martial artists and low-level qi refiners? Didn't he just win two battles? Or are they all disciples of the mountain cultivated by Kunlun himself, all of them are above the four heavens, and they still can't withstand their thunderous blows?
Seeing that he hesitated, the immortal master didn't say much, anyway, if he could continue to win a game, enter the five-heaven competition stage, and fight with those higher-level monks, he would naturally be able to understand it. And if you can't even feel this aspect, then there is no need to continue to point.
When the first day of the battle was over, those who finally won three consecutive victories and were able to continue to participate in the next day's competition were all those outer disciples who came from the bottom of the mountain and took the initiative to participate in the great school inspection. Even if not all of them are outsiders who have been assessed to join the Kunlun faction as casual cultivators, they are all familiar with the experience of the rivers and lakes and the actual fighting experience.
- It's important to have actually seen blood in a fight.
And the young swordsman who was named by Ji Ruo to ask Huang Chang to "teach a lesson" was also among them: he won three games in a row and successfully entered the next round.