The second volume of Saibei Xiaofeng is written after the second volume

I was going to write some thoughts after I finished the second volume. However, in the past two days, this uneasiness in my heart has become more and more intense. I'm just going to write out my thoughts today and talk to you.

There are several things I want to say.

First of all, there is the question of this second volume.

If I can give me an eight points for the first volume, I estimate that the second volume is only six points. When I was writing the second volume, I was in a bit of a hurry, and I was in too much of a hurry to write and lost my taste. There are several places where I could have written better, but I still haven't grasped it.

In my imagination, the altar of the slaughterer "Heavenly Gate" should be colorful and very beautiful, and the internal setting should also be more substantial, but I didn't write out my imagination. The final drug and poison dispute should have been more brilliant. There are also a few places where the dialogue is not very well grasped. These are all problems, and overall, this volume is really unsatisfactory.

I would have liked to go back and change it. It turned out that the project was too big, and it took more time to rewrite it than to rewrite it. I want to change it, but I don't have time to change it for the time being. It's better to put this volume down first, and wait until I'm done with the whole book, or when I'm really lucky enough to publish a physical book. I'm going to make the whole book a big change to make it more efficient and of better quality.

But there is good news on this front. The third volume is quite satisfactory so far, and it is better than the first volume. I hope you will enjoy it too.

And then I want to talk about the second thing, which is a little change in me after that.

I live in New Zealand and have a five-hour time difference from my home country. So when I post in the afternoon, it's usually noon in China.

I work as a managerial worker in the construction industry, and I am usually very busy, working more than 10 hours a day. Every day when I get home from work, I basically only have three hours of rest, including eating. On the weekend, almost all of them are used to code words.

I'm actually typing very fast, but every chapter, I have to change it several times before I send it, and I reduce the speed by at least half. Engineering students, it also takes a lot of time to check historical and humanities materials, and in general, the speed of writing is much slower than that of other writers, and 5,000 words a day should be my current limit.

The update speed is limited, I hope everyone Haihan.

In fact, I am also preparing to change jobs recently, and I have chosen a job, which is about 200,000 yuan less a year, but the working hours will be reduced from 60+ hours per week to 40 hours, and I am ready to accept it. This way I can have more time to do what I want to do, and I can write novels better.

This brings us to the third thing.

I write purely as a hobby. So I also hope that I can write well, and the quality of the novel is very important to me. I don't want to write water, I don't want to write routine essays, I just want to depict the plump martial arts fairy world in my mind. Grievances and hatreds are colorful. I have a lot of bizarre ideas and I want to show them all one by one.

Honestly, it's one thing to want to do it, and it's another thing to want to stick with it when you actually start writing.

I really need everyone's encouragement, whether it's a monthly pass or a book review. I know that there are people who are watching and like to read it, so I can be motivated to keep writing.

I hope you'll let me know as much as you can if you have any thoughts on my book.

It's okay if you think it's ugly, or if you like it. Please let me know that I will try my best to write better in return to everyone.

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You can come and talk together when you're fine.

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Love you guys!