The reason is very simple, the results are too poor, even if the editor takes care of the recommendation, it will be on the shelves for a thousand orders at most.

Just don't waste everyone's time and money, and when you break it, you will break it.

To be honest, I have been preparing this book for a long time, and I can't bear to cut it at this time.

But there is no way, the author has to eat and support his family, and this achievement can't be written at all.

However, writing down these 200,000 words is not completely without gain, so write a summary of the eunuchs and sort out the existing problems.

(1) Plot:

I buried a lot of foreshadowing and dark lines, trying to write the effect of the bright lines and dark lines corresponding to each other, but the pen power was limited, I couldn't control it, and it collapsed directly, and the complex arrangement of the dark lines also made me always go around in the writing process, and in the end, not only did I not write that feeling, but also lost a lot of fun.

In the future, we should read more books, think more, write more, improve pen power, and expand our thinking.

Before the pen power is improved, don't arrange too complicated plots in the early stage, and even be able to wrap yourself in, and the pen will not be able to write well.

(2) Characters:

The characters may be templated, face-painted, and very dull, and the scene structure of each character is not well done, and there is no clear plan for when to appear and when to interact, which makes the characters who originally wanted to focus on writing and focusing on shaping become dispensable. This is also related to the plot collapse of (1), and the role of the characters in the plot is difficult to play, and it is even more difficult to shape.

In the future, try to write a simple biography for key characters, do a good job in plot planning for key characters, and have a clear outline for important plot nodes.

Analyze more of the classic character characteristics of novels, anime, and movies.

(3) Purpose of writing:

After carefully combing through my thoughts, the original idea of developing this book was not to write a story, but just to write a desolate appearance in my heart.

As a result, although the world view is set in great detail, I don't really think about what I want to express, and I don't think about what kind of story I want to tell, and the character setting now seems a bit perfunctory.

When preparing, I set up the desolate appearance in my heart, which is a world line without a protagonist.

originally thought that he only needed to throw the protagonist in, naturally deduce the plot, and show the world view, and he should be able to control it.

Now, it seems, that's not the case.

This is a very bad practice and will have to be changed in the future.

Before writing a new book, you must think about what you want to write and what you want to express.

(4) Mentality:

Follow the trend and rub the heat.,The protagonist's characters are imitated.,In a hurry.,The last book was opened before it ended.,The writing state is greatly affected by the grades.,The mood is unstable.。

Settle down for a period of time, adjust your mentality, and prepare for all aspects before opening the book.

(5) Writing habits:

Can't save the manuscript, procrastination, temporary rush to accelerate the collapse.

Want to change ...... But this point always feels very promising......

That's pretty much it.

I'm sorry to live up to everyone's expectations, and Zhong Heng's story will come to an end first.

If there is a chance in the future, this flood background should still be used, but the plot entry point may not be what this book looks like.

Well, I set up a group, and if you want to scold me, you can come in and talk.

Personal attacks are not allowed.

Group number: 1031664369 [Weekly meteor position beaten group]