【Current Thoughts】

So far, it's a two-line narrative, and it's too messy for me to read myself. It's not the right rhythm.

All in all, the narrative ability is too poor, and there are reasons why I didn't think enough about the details of the story before.

Now the social level built by Slow Mountains and Rivers has appeared in the fourth-tier characters.

At the bottom, Aqing Mingai (mortal), the shopkeeper of the inn silver building (a middle-level mortal who has contact with cultivators), the high-crowned old man (a cultivator driven by the bottom), and a group of children of the "family" at the bottom. They were not very old, and Linzi City's murder against the Feng family's head and customers was just a small gamble that they improvised in their chat.

In the next few days, I will add another chapter as soon as possible, continuing the ending of "Squinting with a glass of wine", the scene of the boy and the big bird weaving the mountain.

In the next chapter, the real "mountain people" in the mouths of this group of Baizhu old people will appear, and the small scenery of this part of the mainstream layer of the Xianxia world will be unfolded.

A week after the new chapter ends, it will be moved to the first chapter, allowing it to open in place of the "customer enters town" that seems too trivial and boring at the moment.

Then the order of the chapters that have already been set will be adjusted, and the dates will be added. Retain the jumpy sense of the two-line narrative while making it easier for the reader to cut in.

【Future Plans】

The invisible background thread in the first half of the first volume of the Slow Mountains and Rivers is the struggle for power between the suzerainty of the Great Lu State, another great dynasty and the family. A mixture of factional struggles within Confucianism, Taoism, and Mohist influences on the mainstream court. The aftermath affected the changes in several dependent countries, and even the war.

The visible camera perspective follows the protagonist, Aqing, Dong Luzhu, and Pei Wenhu, especially the protagonist, who is eager to seek immortals for the "big things" that he and Aqing want to do, and finally embark on the road of cultivation.

I'm still working on the style of writing. The first time I try to write a book, it is easy to fall into the two circles of "describing the scene too carefully" and "will the dialogue be too watery". For new book authors who want to write online articles and want to ensure that the quality of their writing is retained, the two circles will directly lead to the plot procrastinating and not advancing, which is another flaw opposite to the general Xiaobaiwen "only writing the plot".

The solution of other gods in the online article is to use cologne-style stream-of-consciousness sentences to cleverly jump out, and the dialogue situation and emotions are mixed together to form a unique atmosphere; The manager uses concise narration to quickly advance the plot, and then puts a lot of information into the dialogue of the characters, and almost "throws away" the environmental description in order to prevent redundancy. Both methods have extremely high requirements for the characters' lines, and they are both powerful.

I'm still figuring out how to write it myself, and I can only find this balance by myself, and it's useless to ask readers. So I've been thinking more and writing less lately, and the progress is not fast. Some book friends have said that new books are too slow and easy to lose readers, and I understand this truth, but I still want to focus on polishing the quality. Here is also an optimistic estimate for everyone.,At most a dozen chapters, you should be able to find a balance between them.,When the time comes, try to make two to three changes a week (I'll say so first).

There are also readers who have reported that there are many rare words in the article, so let's take this as my personal personal selfishness. Not for the sake of deliberately idleness and profundity, then I would be too naïve. Writing this book, I actually want to deliberately popularize science, and show you some interesting points in traditional culture that everyone "is too lazy to understand", including allusions, as daily life.

Everyone can take a look at it and learn about it by the way, and if you don't want to watch it, it won't affect the plot. And most of them are not rare words, just "written language", and I will add pronunciation and annotations to the paragraph review for the words that are difficult to recognize. The more the online articles are written, the more they are written, and the readers are becoming more and more unintelligent, which is not a good thing.

Outside of the update time, you can give me any suggestions you have, and I will accept them appropriately. Thank you for being so slow and still watching. Thank you for your support!