As soon as Mo Liunian left, Wu Biao asked the little half-immortal secretly: "Brother half-immortal, what did Mo Gongzi say?"

This Wu Biao is an errand boy in the yamen, seven points to see love, three points to see people, Wu Biao, who has read countless people, can guess whether this thing can be done or not.

In today's situation like Mo Liunian, it seems that it is basically no play.

But Wu Biao still has to confirm whether it is or not, just relying on Wu Biao's pair to see people is sometimes inaccurate, and he must confirm it again before he can die.

Xiao Banxian also lowered his voice and said to Wu Biao: "Look at Xiao Mo's attitude towards you, do you think there is a drama?"

Wu Biaocai doesn't care whether he Mo Liunian is intentional or not, intentional or unintentional, even if his sister-in-law has no place to live, he Wu Biao can also make the king have his own wife......

As long as the owner of Xiao Banxian agrees, Wu Biao thinks that everything is easy to say.

Although Wu Biao didn't dare to say that there were countless people, at least he had the ability to observe.

But the temperament of the little half-immortal in front of him is like the color of an antique, which is indescribable, but it can be felt at a glance.

This person's popularity is introverted, and he doesn't leak, not a little hairy child like Xiao Jiang who has not yet grown the hair on his mouth.

The eyes of the little half-immortal are not like the old fritters whose eyes are as sharp as knives, and their bearing is not like ordinary people at all, and the whole person gives people an impeccable sense of mystery.

And Mo Liunian looks like a son-in-law, so handsome that he looks like a white-faced scholar.

The angular and handsome face is put aside, and the body is as thin as a piece of paper.

But when Mo Liunian was in the Wang's Mansion that day, he poked it and raised his hand to knock down the two of them, so he was ruthless!

It's just that Mo Liunian is ruthless Wu Biao doesn't say it, then the moves, that posture, why is it still so good-looking?

That move is critical but not fatal, ruthless, accurate and beautiful.

There are two such characters in the Feng Shui Pavilion, Wu Biao has never seen them so big.

Only for that Mo Yan, Wu Biao couldn't see anything outstanding for the time being.

However, people should not be disguised, and those who can stay in this feng shui pavilion must be very capable.

Even the county magistrate of Yucheng told Wu Biao not to trouble the feng shui pavilion.

But Wu Biao's smile at this time immediately faded, thinking that it seemed to be no fun.

Because Wu Biao heard the meaning of the words.

So Wu Biao put down what he was doing and sat beside him, because the voice of the little half-immortal was low, but the walls were empty, how to listen to it There was still a slight heavy echo, which made Wu Biao very unhappy.

So Wu Biao said: "Does Xiao Mo dislike Miss Zhou?"

The little half-fairy didn't want to hit her too much, so he said, "No, it's just not right." ”

Wu Biao sighed, "That's right, it's normal for such a good-looking Xiao Mo to look down on Zhou Lingyun." ”

Xiao Banxian smiled: "You only see the surface, in fact, Mo Liunian's temper is bad, he will stare at people with his eyes if he doesn't agree with each other, Miss Zhou is suitable for finding someone who is gentle." ”

Wu Biao hurriedly asked: "The gentleman doesn't move his mouth, this Mo Gongzi can be regarded as knowledgeable! And he looks so handsome and glaring at people is also very graceful!"

Xiao Banxian said casually without thinking about it: "This little Mo looks average, and he has no demeanor, in fact, he is two hundred and five." ”

"......" I really can't talk about it properly!

So, Wu Biao didn't say anything more, but his eyes were still glancing in the direction of the backyard, but Mo Liunian never came out.

Wu Biao's heart sank suddenly, and for a while, Wu Biao didn't know how to answer.

And there was a sense of comfort in Xiao Banxian's voice, and Wu Biao's initial joy had faded away like a tide.

Wu Biao also knew that this was just a little polite little bit of the little half-immortal, and it was not good to say it directly on the surface.

I had to nod to myself, as if I understood something, and I knew it!

After nodding, the displeasure on Wu Biao's face deepened.

After Wu Biao left, Xiao Banxian found Mo Liunian, who was grooming the pony, "Wu Biao is gone." ”

Mo Liunian glanced at the little half-immortal: "Did he misunderstand something?"

Xiao Banxian hurriedly said: "No, no, there is no misunderstanding, even if there is a misunderstanding, I will help you explain it clearly." ”

Mo Liunian's face softened a little, revealing a hint of approval: "When are we going to Zhou's house?"

The little half-immortal said: "Just now." ”

It's noon.

The heat of summer and the final ravages of the autumn tiger did not resist the arrival of autumn.

Mo Liunian's heart also followed the coolness of early autumn, less irritability under the scorching summer heat, and more calm and anticipation for autumn.

At this time, the sun was in the middle of the sky, there was not a trace of wind, the yellow dog stuck out its tongue, the chicken drooped its wings, the cicadas kept screaming, and people were even more upset.

The sun is shining at noon, the sun is scorching at noon, the sun is raging at noon, the sun is scorching at noon.

The sun was hot, there was not a hint of wind, and there was not a single pedestrian on the road.

Mo Liunian looked at the Yucheng City, the cooking smoke was curling, every household was making lunch, and wisps of green smoke rose into the sky in a straight line, and there was no trace of wind.

The sorrow of an autumn cicada, the sadness of drifting away, the elegance of a yellow leaf, all know the approach of autumn.

Overnight, the alternation of seasons and the scattered light rain in early autumn drove away the impatience and impetuousness of the summer heat.

Mo Liunian's past thoughts are still lingering in the torment of the bitter summer, and he looks back at each other.

Quietly, Mo Liunian was already a group of autumn landscapes, autumn paintings, autumn charm, autumn artistic conception, and autumn taste.

Mo Liunian didn't understand why Xiao Banxian had to go out to Zhou's house at noon.

It's as if the world thinks that noon is the time when yang energy is at its highest.

As for why the little half-immortal went to Zhou's house at noon, one of the reasons was that the yin qi was the heaviest at noon, and the monster would inevitably attack Zhou Lingyun at this time.

Although the yang energy is the most vigorous at noon, he pulls out the noon at three o'clock in the afternoon and asks outside the door.

Therefore, three o'clock in the afternoon is the most vicious, and the recidivists or heinous criminals must choose three o'clock in the afternoon.

At this time, the yang energy is the heaviest, and the yin energy dissipates immediately, and the soul of the person who was cut down has not yet come out, and the soul is scattered by the yang energy, and even the ghost has nothing to do, as a punishment.

Therefore, at three o'clock in the afternoon, the yang energy is at its peak.

But I don't know that anything is a victory or a decline, at this time the yang energy is abundant, but it is also a yin energy.

At the beginning of the afternoon, the five elements restrain each other and grow together, the yin and yang poles disappear from each other, the yin is prosperous, and the yang is prosperous.

Three quarters around noon, the yang energy is at its peak, and after the peak, there will be a critical point, and after the critical point is the most declining.

Therefore, it is very likely that the noon ghost will appear.

And some demons with Taoism like to haunt at this time.

The Zhou family has some distance, and it took an hour to get home last night, and the little half-fairy went to lead the little jujube horse, and the little half-fairy cherished it very much.

Mo Liunian sometimes thinks that this horse is the real uncle, the horse feed is the best, and the horse shed is also a big house, although the smell is not very good, but it is very warm inside, and the forage and water are complete.

The courtyard was full of baskets, baskets, and sacks, and mules, horses, and donkeys were eating forage with their heads bowed.

Horse manure and forage are mixed into a heavy smell that does not disappear easily when hung on the nose.

Even so, the stables are cleaned by the little demi-sen himself every day.

Xiao Banxian, a person who is so particular, has no regrets in the face of so horse manure every day, which really makes Mo Liunian unable to figure it out.

The dialogue is boring, mostly lacking in subtext.

People don't say anything, on the contrary, people often don't say what they say, they don't mean what they say, and they say a thing in their mouths. It may be shy, it may be stupid, or it may be a bad deceit.

Thinking "I love you", saying "I hate you", thinking "I hate you" in my heart, saying "boss wise".

When what you think in your heart is different from what you say, the reader will read it with great interest.

You can't write:

M: I love you, don't leave me.

F: No, I'm looking for a rich second generation.

You have to write:

M: Tomorrow for your birthday, I bought pork ribs, star anise, and lotus root to make your favorite stewed pork ribs with lotus root...... Come back early tomorrow?

F: Tomorrow he invited me to Michelin.

M: Then I'll put it in the refrigerator and do it the day after tomorrow, okay?

F: The day after tomorrow, we'll go to the Maldives to play.

Man:......

F: Don't contact me in the future.

You can't write:

Official: Give me a million, and this project package will be done for you.

Merchant: Good!

You have to write

Official: It's not easy to do, municipal construction, we must abide by the principle of openness and fairness, I opened this opening for you, and the people want to point at my backbone and scold this painting is good.

Merchant: Oh, this is Zhang Daqian's fake painting, imitation, imitation, not worth much. I'll have you put it back on.

Hide the true meaning of the dialogue, and let the characters tell the truth, speak human words, and say what they will say every day.

The effect is really visible when the subtext is combined with context. Like what:

Wang Er, do you love me?

This is a common dialogue.

Childhood sweetheart, two little guesses, she coquettishly grabbed the neighbor's boy's arm: "Wang Er, do you love me?"

Subtext: Give you a chance to please me, and say sweet words, big fool!

Falling in love, seeing parents, getting married, pretending to be a house, quarreling, cheating, divorce.

A divorce agreement was placed on the table, she looked at her ex-husband with red eyes, "Wang Er, do you love me?"

Subtext: You, the old lady is blind to take a fancy to you! But...... As long as you lie to me, I will believe it.

Later, the man died, and she was also old. One day she was basking in the sun in the yard, the sun was solid, there was no wind, she looked at the sky through her reading glasses, and suddenly said to herself: "Wang Er, do you love me?"

Subtext: I miss you.

Dialogue:

The dialogue should be colloquial.

The dialogue is mostly short sentences and few complete sentences.

Don't use dialogue to explain the plot. Use dialogue to detonate feelings.

If the reader can judge the tone based on the context, don't describe the tone.

Example: (Excerpt from Liu Heng's "Poor Mouth Zhang Damin".) Zhang Damin's wife had no milk after giving birth, Zhang Damin gave his wife stewed Wang Ba to urge milk, and his sister thought that Damin had married his daughter-in-law and forgot his mother. ）

"Originally, it was! How many crucian carp and melon seeds have you eaten all day long? Have you ever bought them for our mother? Our mother can't eat fish once in half a year! You're the eighth king again, and you've become a queen! You're so careful, and you think about your mother when you buy good food, it's not better than anything! What kind of strength have I come to? I just can't get used to it!"

"Mom doesn't give milk!"

"But mom is mom. ”

"I just bought fish last month. ”

"That's not called a fish!"

"It's a fish, it's a hairtail!"

"It's a little wider than the strap!"

"That's a hairtail too!"

"It still stinks!"

"Don't blame me, I don't have enough money!"

"It's enough to buy Wang Ba!"

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