Mo Liunian saw that the half-immortal sister and brother chased after him, so he no longer urged the little half-immortal, and the little half-immortal asked, "How do you know that there is a demon coming?"

Mo Liunian said, "There is a smell on this demon, I smelled it when I looked for it, and at first I thought it was an illusion, until Xiao Fang screamed." ”

The little half-fairy asked, "The aroma of orchids?"

Mo Liunian said, "No, it's similar to the atmosphere of the Qian Mansion at that time." ”

The breath of Qianfu, that is the smell of desire, the tapir demon bewitches people's hearts, the heart is the source of desire, and it is inevitable to be contaminated with the breath of desire.

The little half-fairy remembered Mo Liunian's absorption of the snake spirit again, and there seemed to be more and more secrets in her body.

Xiao Banxian didn't want Mo Liunian to worry, so he said, "It's good that you came in time." ”

Mo Liunian's face immediately turned red when she remembered the scene she had just seen, but fortunately it was not obvious in the dark night, she teased, "You are motionless, I thought you enjoyed it very much." ”

Xiao Banxian smiled bitterly, "My soul was not possessed by the body at that time, and I couldn't move at all. ”

After chatting a few words, the situation on his body disappeared, and then he stood up and walked to Mo Liunian's side, "Do you see the appearance of that tapir demon clearly?"

Mo Liunian said: "I see it clearly." ”

The little half-immortal said, "Let's go, go back to the room." ”

Back in the room, Mo Yan also got up, Xiao Banxian took out a palm-sized paper bag from the package, and there were three pieces of old yellow paper neatly stacked in the paper bag, and took out a small vermilion pen and dipped it in some water, "Come, turn the appearance of the tapir demon on the paper." ”

Mo Liunian said: "I can't draw. ”

The little half-fairy stuffed the pen into her hand, "Just try your best to draw, you must be sure in your heart, and be sure that you are drawing that tapir demon." ”

Mo Liunian said, "Okay, I'll try." ”

To be continued......

Case 1: Chapter 12 (Adopted Outline Sub-Chapters)

Han Rou opened her eyes and found that she was being attacked by a lewd man with a fat brain, she subconsciously struggled, and the man fell to the ground and died instantly.

Han Rou was so frightened that she couldn't figure out the situation at all, the lights were bright outside, and she was surrounded by a group of fierce and vicious people.

Although the number of words is not much, two things are explained in detail, first, I found that I was being molested. Second, there was a homicide. Such an outline is convenient for the writer to expand his imagination when writing. If a meal is going to be reduced to a chapter, I guess no one will want to read it.

Case 2: Chapter 13 (Outline of the Shooting Death in Chapters)

Lan Yingying was in a melancholy mood on the way to the Oujia villa, and recalled in her heart that she only came to the villa this time to pay off her father's debts and work as a maid.

When I arrived at the Oujia Villa, under the leadership of the maid Xiaolian, I passed through the maple forest of the villa, and was attracted by the beautiful sound of the violin, and was even more attracted by the person who played the violin (here I want to write the beautiful picture of the white monsoon playing the piano under the maple tree with red leaves, highlighting the beautiful handsomeness and melancholy and charming temperament of the white monsoon, which deeply touched Lan Yingying's heart, so that she couldn't help but stop and listen and watch. ）

Xiaolian briefly introduced the identity of Bai Jifeng (here I want to bring out Xiaolian's love for Bai Jifeng.) ）

The analysis outline is just the main line for the gunner, don't write too long-winded, and besides, this subchapter is very empty. Two bruises appeared.

1 The beginning is too bland and there are no highlights.

2 shows just a picture, although there are many words, but there is no storyline progression. It's just a scene of an encounter, and it's going to be described in three chapters. So we ask the author to write chapter by chapter, or 2 chapters together, unless your outline can support it, you can write three chapters, but it generally won't pass. The detailed chapters of the outline are not the number of words that means that the number of words is supported, it is the event rather than the description, which is the most important flaw, and everyone must master this well.

The solution is to ask the author to revise the outline, let her say what is written in each chapter, instead of only one thing written in 12 chapters, and the fastest way to pass the manuscript is to write three things in 12 chapters to support. Ring by ring, we are not suspenseful, we don't need to be very strict one ring after another, just need to be very tight and attractive. The main thing is that the plot does not drag. For example,The male and female protagonists don't like it.,There's definitely an obstacle when you like it.,You expand the misunderstanding.,What female owner quarrels with an aunt when she goes to buy clothes.,This aunt is the male owner's mother or something.。 As long as it's dramatic enough and engaging enough.

1. The style setting of common themes in the outline

1. The narrative of the president of a wealthy family is smooth, sadistic or light-hearted, but the style must be white and not obscure.

2. The narrative of the ancient sayings is smooth, the body is sadistic or relaxed and cheerful, and the style is simple and incomprehensible.

3. No matter how dreamy the background setting of the youth campus is, the stage for story development must be on campus. The plot should be brisk and swift, and the style should be relaxed

Sprightly. It is forbidden to be sad in spring and autumn, and it is strictly forbidden to be small and fresh. Readers generally prefer the plot of dog blood, but there is novelty in dog blood. Like a car accident, you

It can be man-made, it can be a natural disaster, it can be a deliberate crash by the person in the car, it can be an accident, it depends on how you arrange it, in fact, many dogs

The bloody plot will also be very novel and attractive when combined.

Second, the outline content is set, pay attention to the details and control

1 Pay attention to the supporting roles, the supporting roles must also be very awesome, such as the horizontal intervention of the second male protagonist, in order to highlight the ups and downs between the male and female protagonists.

2The beginning must be exciting, the topic is fast, there must be an ambiguous plot (referring to the first three chapters) The male and female protagonists must all appear, and slow heating is strictly prohibited.

For example, Secretly suddenly found himself crossed, and when he woke up, he was regarded as a princess, and then the emperor asked him to marry a man, and secretly ran away, but was caught, and met with the person he hadn't met, and then this man has been hating Dark, because Secretly killed his mother (any reason for hate), but in it, the male protagonist fell in love with Dark unknowingly, but Secretly was already disheartened, and asked Male 2 to take her away, and then Male 1 searched everywhere, and then when he found Dark, he found that she was with Male 2 has a child (male 1's child,Male 1 doesn't know,We ask for one-on-one) The male protagonist disregards brotherhood.,To rob the secretly.,Male 1 and male 2 began to compete.,In the end, I secretly chose male 1.。 That's probably the kind of narrative, just make it clear anyway. It is basically kept within 10,002,000 words.

(12) Sweet crossed over to a female killer cultivated by a prince, and because she loved the prince, she was made a big fuss by the favored concubine under the pretext of not saluting her, and severely injured her face and framed her to death. The prince was impatient with this female nymphomaniac, so he took advantage of the situation and asked her to go to the palace to ask the whereabouts of the emperor's edict, and ordered someone to throw her into the palace, and life and death were up to heaven. Because of the miserable injuries on his face, Tian Tian tore off his underwear and covered his face with a light veil and hid behind a rockery.

The prince played hide and seek with several palace maids in the imperial garden, and the masked man tripped over the corner of the rockery, threw himself on Gantian, and touched his hand by mistake. The two were at odds. The prince ripped off his scarf and faced a masked woman with a soft look, obviously not a palace maid. Sweet opened her mouth to ask for help, and the soft and charming voice shook the prince's heart, and the prince carried her into the palace for treatment.

(34) The prince personally fed the medicine and gave her a special hot spring to bathe. Sweet and shy, wide clothes into the bath. Graceful posture. The prince was a little curious about her appearance, so he sent the palace maids in to serve her, and asked them to describe her sweet appearance to herself. After the palace maid entered, she screamed loudly for the monster, and the prince rushed in. Sweet was helpless, explaining that she was smashing into mud with flower petals and making a mask. The prince was embarrassed. Because she likes to make face masks, the prince often gets up early to collect flower petals for her.

The meticulous care warmed the sweet heart, the sweet heart moved, and the prince played and enjoyed the scenery together, recuperated the body, and was ambiguous. Because of the facial injury, she wanted to show the prince the most beautiful self, so she never took off the veil. The prince found out that she was not dead but won the favor of the prince, and mocked her for using her tricks well, and asked her to approach the emperor to secretly investigate the whereabouts of the edict.

When writing a detailed outline, you only need to explain what happened in this chapter, you can't add the details you think, you are a director, not an actor, don't limit the reader's free imagination!

Born in a small village, (crossing or not to see the author's preferences) single-parent family, it is best to have only one grumpy father, well, very rough kind, life is very hard. Dad's profession, blacksmith, hunter, is the most suitable.

Six or seven years old, working, chopping wood, raising a puppy. Poor and happy. I picked a broken urinal by chance.

Talent trial, it was found that the protagonist is a waste wood, but according to the customs of the xx continent, waste wood also has to be cultivated. Well, yes, and then go to a college and study a major that hasn't been awesome for thousands of years, but there was a great character in this major a few years ago. Leave the escalation of the gram foresight.

Then arrange 2 face makeup sets. A noble son, a noble dogleg. Bullying the protagonist.

But there is a cute little Lori who is good for the main character.

Inadvertently, the urinal was touched, triggering the golden finger. The protagonist has special abilities, and his martial arts have soared. No one knows except the main character. Others thought he was, for the future pretending to be a guarantee.

I took the exam, and I competed.

No one looks down on the protagonist, the protagonist deceived and defeated the opponent very badly, and the most stunned thing was to defeat the nobleman who was favored by everyone.

Then try it, kill a few mobs, and get some white equipment. The level has increased slightly. (Little Takah.)

Among them, he saved the little Lori of the academy once, and his goodwill increased.

At this time, an unexpected event appeared, leading to the mystery of the protagonist's life experience.

It turned out that he was the son of xxx, how many years ago, the whole family perished, and he was the only descendant, burdened with heavy responsibilities. Well, at this time, his father should die, so as not to be burdensome again. provokes the protagonist's hatred a few.

Follow the clues and change the map. Fight monsters, know a royal sister. And this royal sister fell in love with him inexplicably. (Prelude)

The two fight monsters together and level up. Favorability continues to rise. Warm a little.

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