The little half-immortal flew over, and his feet were stepping on the line drawn by the Futu Sword on the ground, and the long sword was like a dragon going out to sea, and once again blocked in front of the snake demon!

The floating slaughter sword slashed, the waist twisted, and the phoenix rolled the morning glow style, and the sword flower danced wildly, and flew smartly.

The three-foot long sword picks left and right, slashes in front and back, winds up and down, and slashes obliquely.

The battle between one person and one demon is like a rainstorm hitting a pear blossom, and like thousands of pearls falling on a jade plate, cutting thousands of air currents into sharp rotating fragments.

At this time, the little half-immortal waved the Futu sword, as if it was unstoppable, and the lotus petal hit the girl in Tsing Yi like a broken bamboo, and the woman in Tsing Yi surrounded her long tail, carrying the sword momentum with her own flesh and blood.

"Bell!"

The Futu Sword swirled like ripples, and the sound of the collision was humming.

The snake demon is clothed in the night, like a steep sky, and does not show weakness in the flying attack of the sword.

The little half-immortal snorted coldly, the long sword came out of the sheath, and the sword flower that burst out of the body of the Futu sword was also like a golden snake!

The golden snake and the snake demon's body collided with each other, stirring up countless colorful splashes of light, surging in all directions like a flood rushing from the mountains and seas!

The little half-immortal met the body of the snake demon, and the swordsmanship was not only undiminished, but added three points, and the figure of one person and one demon was suddenly encircled in the colorful sword shadows.

She can be as steady as Mount Tai or as a stubborn stone, and there is no flaw to be found under the attack of the little half-immortal.

"Bang!"

Between the lightning and the stone fire, a line of golden light suddenly appeared, and then there was a loud buzz, and the little half-immortal flew out of the floating sword, and the sword body was cold and bright.

"Edict!"

The little half-immortal raised his fingers and pinched the trick, and in the next moment, he made a loud noise, only to see the light of the Futu Sword descending with his arm, and the momentum was like a bamboo, and nothing could stop it!

With a loud bang, the wind rose on the ground, and Mo Liunian looked at this battle in amazement!

I saw that with the snake demon's feet as the center, the wind blade rolled wildly like a whirlpool, and his back quickly changed in the eye of the wind.

The little half-immortal chased after him, the sword momentum was sometimes thunderous, sometimes light and fluttering, and the golden light of the tip of the sword was like a meteor in the sky against the background of the snake demon, enveloping the whole body of the snake demon.

And the snake demon did not panic and calmly responded, Mo Liunian on the side saw that the snake demon's hands were moving slowly, but the momentum was slowly solemn, his fingertips trembled slightly, and there were faint bursts of groans, sealing the little half-immortal's wave after wave of sword momentum.

Long Yuan groaned, like a meteor falling into the sky, a small half-immortal. Without saying a word, he flipped his wrist and slashed out the Futu Sword.

"Wow!"

At this moment, the Futu Sword slashed down at the snake demon with a thunderous momentum!

The little half-immortal bit the tip of his tongue and sprayed it on the Floating Slaughter Sword, and with a loud burst of electricity, it swirled straight up along the Vajra Floating Slaughter Sword.

At this moment, the body of the Futu Sword burst out with dazzling white light, as dazzling as a long dragon covered in thunder and lightning!

This sword snake demon didn't have the slightest intention of dodging, just used his hands to resist, and at this time, the Futu Sword had already slashed over like lightning.

The ground that followed the back mountain was smashed over, blood mixed with sweat splashed on the back of Xiao Banxian's hand, and a vast force poured into his arm.

I saw that the Futu Sword in the small half-immortal paw emitted a golden and silver light, like a coiling dragon, and surrounded the body of the Futu sword in a circle, and the ancient famous sword actually made an exuberant and bloodthirsty sound in the blood of the little half-immortal!

Immediately, the little half-immortal picked up the long sword, and when the blade of the sword pierced through the air, a distant dragon roar sounded in the void again!

The spiritual power of the small half-immortal suddenly soared, and the Futu Sword came in an instant, and the cold light suddenly appeared, and between the thunder, a sword light carried waves to the sky.

The demon's sword was fearful, and it collapsed in an instant.

Especially looking at the sudden change of the nebula, the roar of the wind and waves, this sword is like a thousand troops, and it is flattened.

Futu is out of the sheath, and the ghosts and gods kneel!

"Bell ......"

But this sword was forcibly blocked by the snake demon with his hand, and under the layers of attacks of the little half-immortal, the golden lotus also wrapped the body of the snake demon from all directions, like the waves of the sea, winding and attacking.

The Futu Sword also cut through the sleeve of the snake demon, revealing a jade arm and a few blood marks.

The little half-immortal's sword spear broke the bone hairpin on the snake demon's head, and it fell to the ground and cracked into countless pieces, and the white jade turned into powder and disappeared.

The bun of the snake demon's temples fluttered and fell instantly, and the flamboyant black silk flew in the air.

The snake demon also seemed to be angry at this time by these provocations of the little half-immortal.

At this time, the golden light was flourishing, and lotus patterns appeared around the snake demon, and those lines gradually became clear and protruding, turning into real lotus flower bones.

The lotus flower bloomed, the petals fell, and suddenly became extremely hard and sharp in the air, wrapping the girl in Tsing Yi and reuniting into a budding golden lotus.

Mo Liunian looked at Xiao Banxian, Xiao Banxian turned his back to her, his back was very tight, and Mo Liunian could see that he was very nervous at this time.

The snake demon's green robe and long hair flew to the ground, like a phoenix flying in the nine heavens, the sleeves of the robe fluttered to reveal the slender arm, and the left hand grabbed the golden lotus spell of the little half-immortal!

The shadows of the swords all dissipated, and the snake demon's momentum continued unabated.

It was only Mo Liunian who saw that his hands were twisted together, and his nails were deeply cut into the flesh, but he didn't know the pain.

The golden lotus burst open suddenly, and the woman in Tsing Yi had a little blood on her body, but it was obviously just a flesh wound, she stretched out her right hand, and the golden lotus appeared in her palm.

The woman in Tsing Yi said coldly: "The people of the half-immortal family are really not as good as the generation. She shook it hard, and the golden lotus was instantly crushed into an inch of golden light.

Although the little half-immortal has been delayed in cultivation for the past three years, the lotus that was cast just now moves in all directions, and the little demon who has practiced for a hundred years will be directly beaten into its original form.

The little half-immortal had already used all his strength for the blow just now, and the difference in strength between him and the girl in Tsing Yi was too great.

The little half-immortal said in a loud voice: "Since you are a member of the Nuwa clan, you should not have a demon heart, sister, turn back to the shore." ”

The snake demon flicked its tail violently, swallowing black light, like a sharp point, like a sharp blade, scattering incomparable light.

The long tail of the woman in Tsing Yi slapped at the little half-immortal fiercely, and the little half-fairy hurriedly dodged, which was able to avoid the blow of Mount Tai's pressure.

The golden light around the little half-immortal soared, and the golden light suddenly shone in a radius of ten battles, as dazzling as the sun.

The snake demon didn't ignore it, and hit it hard! Every move between the snake's tail seemed to be overwhelmed by Mount Tai, and it was impossible to catch it.

The little half-immortal spirit is not strong, just now the snake demon has not yet made a counterattack with clever moves, but now under the snake demon's counterattack, the little half-fairy has no room to fight back, so it is not good, and he is forced to retreat.

The snake demon's first snake tail stretched for dozens of zhang, followed by the second and third times, and the power of the snake demon made the little half-immortal heavier and more difficult to parry every time than the previous one.

The little half-immortal could quickly retreat with all his might, flying in the direction of the high platform, and barely blocked the snake's tail that stood up to the sky by retreating.

When the first snake tail attacked, the little half-immortal burst out with golden light, and when the fifth snake tail came, the Futu Sword had already emitted a sharp wail!

The sixth snake tail collided with the Futu Sword, and dense lightning was dissipated from the body of the Futu Sword!

The snake tail immediately followed the trend and beat the little half-immortal half-cut arm to blood.

The place where the little half-immortal was just now was smashed out of a crack that was two zhang long and two feet wide and two feet deep, and the earth and rocks around him were flying, and the little half-fairy looked embarrassed at the moment.

Mo Liunian and Mo Yan were not implicated because of the protection of the golden light mask.

The girl in Tsing Yi saw at a glance that her child's Yuan Shen was on Mo Liunian, she was determined to regain the Yuan Shen, and she didn't have much nostalgia for the little half-immortal, and with a sweep of her long tail, she slapped at Mo Liunian and Mo Yan.

In fact, it can be summed up in one sentence:

Don't make a mistake.

Speaking of which, this is really the lowest level of requirements, and for newcomers, it is really impossible to expect a novice to create a classic, plump and three-dimensional, and fascinating character in just 10,000 words at the beginning.

This is really difficult, even many gods can't do it, at most, they can only seize a shining point of the protagonist at the beginning to emphasize it, and highlight the difference of the protagonist.

Of course, in addition to the main character, there are also various supporting characters, which can also create a sense of expectation for readers.

One could even say that.

Some of the supporting characters create a sense of anticipation for the reader, even stronger than the main character.

For example:

President's text, ambiguous text, emotional ......

Frankly speaking, the "opposite sex bonus" of this type of article is really very big, but the difficulty is also that it is not so easy to shape such a "opposite sex" at the beginning.

Of course, Rome was not built in a day, and any of them is very, very important for the "continuous shaping" of the protagonist and important characters.

So, if you can't do amazing things at the beginning, then you must meet the minimum standard we just mentioned - don't make a mistake.

So, about the introduction of the opening "who am I", now only the last one remains:

Be sure to let the reader realize as soon as possible - who is the main character.

Let's talk about my own experience in writing books.

As early as when I first started writing online articles (06 years), when I was chatting and farting in the author group, everyone said a few taboos.

In addition to some 404 points to note, the "double protagonists" and "multiple protagonists" mentioned in the previous article are also a point.

And in addition to that, there is another point that is also very important.

That is, the protagonist does not appear for a long time.

Just like in "Heaven and Dragon Slayer" and "Smiling Proud Jianghu", it was Zhang Cuishan and Lin Pingzhi who just appeared, including Niujia Village on the plane at the beginning of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" - this kind of writing has been taken out countless times as a "negative teaching material".

Of course, this "negative textbook" does not mean that Jin Lao's writing is not good, but that - don't think that you can compare with Jin Lao.

What's more, with the development of the times, the change of models, etc., the patience of readers now is far less than it was back then.

So, this is what we have emphasized countless times - the main character is highlighted at the beginning.

So how to stand out?

A few small ways to give it to everyone.

1. Reduce other characters

I've said this several times, and I'll repeat it briefly today.

The amount of information at the beginning is extremely limited, and you have to explain the world, the characters, and your expectations, so there is really not much information left.

If you write about the characters of No. 5, 6, 7 or 8, the first is that if the amount of information is not enough, these characters will definitely dilute the protagonist's role, and at the beginning, readers don't know anyone, so many characters will make people dizzy.

Especially!

Many readers learn the beginning of "Dou Po", and arrange a bunch of people with the same surname at the beginning.

For example, Xiao Da, Xiao Er, Xiao San...... The protagonist is Lao Jiu.

At a glance, the reader can see that I rub it, and they are all surnamed Xiao!

If you don't handle this situation well, it will be very embarrassing.

It's like watching an Internet celebrity show, with a uniform Internet celebrity face, or the same hairstyle.