Chapter 252: Who is it?

The heat on Mo Liunian's body has basically dissipated, but the whole lake has become foggy, becoming an open-air hot spring, the little half-fairy took her to swim to the lake, the warm sun shone softly on the two of them, Mo Liunian knew that he had come out.

The little half-immortal took Mo Liunian to the shore and directly picked her up and flew to the bamboo house, Mo Liunian wanted to say that he could go, but in the end he shrank back.

And Wuji has already caught the ice demon, and in addition to Mo Yan, the half-immortal sisters and brothers have also recovered most of them.

The ice demon lay in the snow like a puddle of mud, moaning incessantly, and even if she was given escape, she would not be able to escape.

Seeing Mo Liunian shrinking in the arms of the little half-immortal, Wujian hurriedly asked, "How is little Sister Mo?"

The little half-immortal said: "It's nothing." He didn't look at the ice demon, he returned to the room with Mo Liunian in his arms, and walked to the room, Mo Liunian's clothes and hair were all dry, and the little half-immortal put Mo Liunian on the mattress, "Have a good rest." ”

Mo Liunian nodded, Xiao Banxian pulled the quilt to cover her, Mo Liunian obediently closed his eyes, but the fluttering eyelashes betrayed her, Xiao Banxian also knew that she couldn't fall asleep at this time, but she could only pretend not to know, get up and leave, there was something waiting for him outside.

After the little half-immortal went out, he walked up to the ice demon, "Say, why do you want to harm me again and again?"

The Ice Demon's eyes had begun to drift, and she muttered, "Who is she? Who is she? Tell me who she is?"

Yannei True Flame completely destroyed her soul, and the ice demon was already dying, so the little half-immortal got down and asked sharply, "Who sent you here?"

The ice demon chuckled, "It's my lord, naturally my lord sent me, if you offend my lord, there will be no good results." ”

The last time I asked you about the writing questions, there were several faction friends who left a message saying that they would not write an outline (detailed outline), in fact, on the issue of the outline, Xuan Pai sent several articles to explain, and after reading the previous articles, he still couldn't write the faction, and the editor had to resort to the last trick, and posted the outline of the Xuan faction directly.

As we said in the article before, the outline is mainly written for yourself, it is a more personal thing, and there is no need to force consistency, so we only make suggestions, and do not force everyone to write like this. What makes a good outline? I think it's enough to be able to understand it.

So what does a complete outline consist of?

We believe that: 1. Theme 2. Characteristic selling points 3. Positioning the readership 4. Story synopsis

The first three points can be displayed in the outline or not, because the information in these three aspects is just to remind yourself to do a good job in the positioning of the work, and not to deviate from the original theme or readership. If you are an author who is prone to deviation when you write, it is recommended that you write it and mark it in an eye-catching font.

Synopsis: including causes, developments, turns, endings, etc. Summarize it in one sentence or a few sentences.

4. Related settings (including environment settings, level settings, character settings, cheats, etc.). As shown in the figure below, what we did was a level setting (note: the theme of the book is urban cultivation of immortals, and the mind mapping software used is scapple)

Level setting

Environment settings

The top brain map is the outline of the protagonist's first critical task at the beginning.

The brain map on the left is the environment of the protagonist in the early stage.

The brain map on the right is the map setting. (It's also an upgrade process)

Some of the characters are set

Goldfinger setting: slightly

5. Storyline

The depiction of the plot (including the main line and branch lines) is the most important significance of the outline, as shown in the figure below, according to the plot points, one by one, and the generation of a plot should indicate the location and the main events that occurred.

For example, X-9 in the picture, which is the 9th plot point, you can see where the plot takes place and the main events. (Just use a few short words to indicate that you can understand it.) οΌ‰

Part of the plot brain map

There are many benefits of writing an outline, and everyone should understand it, so I won't repeat it.

According to the above display and explanation, I don't know if you understand it? Here is also a point to note that mind map is a tool for many authors to make outline selection, in addition to scapple, there are a variety of other software, such as Xmind, mindmanager, mindnode, Baidu brain map, etc., not one by one.

But if you are not used to mind maps, it is okay to express them in plain text, after all, what suits you is the best. Here is a partial outline of the "Shura God of War" posted by the kind bee in the dragon sky, not in the form of a brain map.

Finally, after reading the article, is there anyone who can't do an outline?

Links to related historical articles

Online Writing Tutorial 9: Teach You How to Write an Outline (with Outline Examples)

Writing Guide Series 3 - Outline Template for Publication and Submission Outline

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Drunk for a long time

May I ask where I can find such a diagram or table?

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author

You are the third to ask the name of the software, and it is mentioned twice in the article that the software is called scapple, and the table is Excel

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Qingyan*

In layman's terms, I'm going to start bragging, but for the sake of reasonableness, I'm going to make a draft first

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author

You know too much

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Sseakom

Well, still won't

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author

It's embarrassing

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Open word is dry, and the outline is used to cope with editing.

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author

There should be a big wave of the old man's hand here

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So-called sir

Sima Guang is the real god: I want, what is the use of this outline

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Where did Xiaoqiang escape

I suggest that those who don't know how to write an outline should first divide the whole book into three sections, that is, three major goals, such as: first, the destruction of the family, revenge; οΌ‰; the second (the heroine was captured by a powerful force and saved people); The third (the death of the female owner,Leaving the soul origin,The male protagonist swears to become the peak of the strong,Resurrect the female owner),And then it will be divided into volumes.,Preferably more than eight volumes.,One volume represents a major event.,This basically determines the goal of the protagonist, that is, the driving force.,It can also support the complete structure of a book.。

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No distractions

It's still hard because our newbies are all broken

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author

Then add it slowly, and don't rush to finish it all at once.

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Cats who don't like programming

The article is very practical, it does not say that it should be written like this, but that it can be written like this. I love such instructional articles.

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author

There is no fixed law, let alone an outline.

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AL

There is an outline of the marriage and love essay of the wood and women...... l Similar ......

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author

I don't think the outline is just to write the storyline that you set yourself, and if you provide a ready-made one, wouldn't it be easy to model or plagiarize?

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A few shooting stars

I just want to spend a month on how much?

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author

Most of the authors are richer than I am

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Xue Feng

It's messy, I don't understand it at all, and sure enough, my IQ is in arrears, so I'll go to telecom tonight to charge my IQ

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author

Your own outline is probably only understood by yourself, and you can borrow the form.

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Peel it off

Is this kind of software called mind mapping software?

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author

Right.

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Look at the geometry

Please share some of the background and experiences of the great god becoming a god

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author

In fact, I want to say that it is difficult to replicate the success of others, so it is better to read more books of great gods and learn to write more realistically.

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Xincheng

The outline, or usually write more, will be found in the process of writing.

If you only read and don't write, then the possibility of progress is very low.

This kind of logical thing, practice makes perfect.

Write more, write more, write more.

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A lonely boat

Indeed, it is enough for the outline to be able to understand by myself, I just write a concise outline first, and when I write the essay, I can naturally find out what the outline is missing, and I can know how to write it when I write the outline later.

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Fliggy~

No. No. Is there a beautiful master who taught me?

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author

Is there a beautiful master downstairs who is willing to teach this handsome guy?

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Zhang Xinsheng (rabbit lover) 18255199369

Sofa

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author

Couch.

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Yang Weiming

If you say no, just one word, lazy. I didn't even write it myself, I just thought about it there, and it was strange to be able to think about it.

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Yan Xiaoqing

Add chicken legs to the editor.

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Chen Kengkeng

How does the outline treemap above work?

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author

with software

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Manny

Personally, I think the outline is similar to a ladder, layer by layer, you want to know what your head plans to look like, just build the framework first, so that you know that your steps are simpler like people's birth, old age, sickness and death, that is, the stage, just born, teenagers, middle-aged, old age, after distinguishing the beginning of the filling event, such as being born with infinite strength or emaciation, etc., and so on, and so on, so that the brain hole is much clearer, I hope I am right, after all, I am also touching the stone in the river.

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Yang'

Well, it's still a bit vague

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Afterthoughts

I like the editor so much, I pushed the detailed outline of the article so quickly, and gave you a refill. Well, I said that after reading it, I will know some, and I will hurry up and practice it

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Huang Qixiang

Dry goods, good, thank you

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567

What if I have an outline of the storyline, but I can't expand it to write the main text?

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author

To expand a thing, it is the beginning, the development, the turning point, and the result.

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Silly bear

I have a disgusting experience to tell me.,The outline design similar to a mind map that comes with the Xuanpai client,In a certain situation,The outline that has been written will directly change to 0k,And then there will be no more。 Using that to illustrate the relationship between the characters and the experience of events, it's quite handy, and it's all gone. And there was no backup, and I almost didn't smash the computer.

As for what the situation is, it's not very clear, but the general experience is to open it, click on the menu toolbar, and then shut it down. That's where the bug comes in. Compare pits, I hope it can be improved

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author

Good. I would like to reflect that I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused.

Oda Nobunaga

Can you share the download address of scapple's windows?

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author

Just go to the official website, we all spent money to buy it. You can switch to free software.

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zero

Can you write a chapter on how to write a good fight scene?

author

I've been out

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St. Michaelj

In fact, I like the way the snowflake outline is the one that makes the outline. I think it's a lot like doing it that way. He has done a lot of outlines, so the final book will be very interesting

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Masters

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