And this side ......

After the contact was disconnected.

Su Xian sat in the bathroom for a while, then got up, reluctantly pushed open the bathroom door, looked at Xie Yunyun with a disgruntled face outside, and said, "What are you called a soul?" I was just talking to my mother, and you interjected not long after we chatted, and my mother thought that it had delayed me from chatting with my classmates. ”

"Ah...... Is it Mom?"

Xie Yunyun suddenly panicked, and said helplessly: "You, you, you...... Why didn't you tell me, and you still hid in the dark and whispered, those who know know that you are chatting with your relatives, like me, who don't know, of course you will misunderstand that you want to use to get rid of me, she and her...... She didn't hear me just now, did she?"

"Well, I didn't hear that. ”

Su Xianxin said to you~ Mom shouted and flew up.

"Hmm...... That's good. ”

Xie Yunyun sighed lightly and said, "If my mother misunderstands that I am the kind of girl who stays in other boys' rooms very casually, then it will be troublesome, Su Xian, I warn you, next time if it is my mother, remember to tell me in advance." ”

"Don't worry, I'll tell you in advance. ”

Su Xian sat down on the sofa, picked up a book and read it.

Xie Yunyun's eyes swept over the book in Su Xian's hand, a look of surprise appeared on her face, and she said in shock: "This, this, this...... Isn't this my aunt's book? I remember it was still her debut~ female novel, she just said that, you actually read her book?! Su Xian, are you too idle, her first book is very badly written. ”

"You don't understand this, but the author's first book, generally is indeed the worst, but it is also the most aura, at this time the author has not been bound by those rules and regulations, although the writing is a little worse, but the imagination is wild, it is very rich, to find your aunt's fault, you have to find it from the first book. ”

"You're really ...... Are you trying to please her?"

"It's not a good deal, it's all said, it's just mutual benefit, she is also a martial arts instructor of Tianshu Academy, and she should be able to help me a lot when the time comes." ”

"Oh, let's see, I've seen it anyway, it's boring. ”

Xie Yunyun fell on Su Xian's bed, tossing and turning boredly, turning for a while, and said boredly: "By the way, Su Xian, you said that you also wrote it before, can you tell me what your name is, and I will go and see it too." ”

"It's been because of pornography 404 for a long time. ”

Su Xian glanced at Xie Yunyun, although the long skirt worn by the girl was over the knee, and there was a slight conservative in her beauty, how could she say it...... She turned over on the bed like this, and her long skirt was rolled up slightly, and most of her jade ~ legs were exposed.

White and delicate, slender and slender.

After a little more glance without a trace, Su Xian withdrew his gaze and said, "And I'm a theorist, let me write, I can't write, but there is no problem in teaching people." ”

"Just blow it, my aunt is very shrewd, you can't fool her for long. ”

"I'm just talking about it. ”

Su Xian Zhengse said.

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"So, my question is too egotistical?"

Picked up people......

Before the arrival of the starship, Xue raiders were also idle.

No, as soon as she woke up, she invited Su Xian to the café in the building, and she didn't seem to see that her niece was hiding in Su Xian's room.

Now, she finally has time to ask Su Xian for advice.

"That's right, I've finished reading your debut~ masterpiece. ”

Su Xian put Xue Xianren's work on the table, and said: "Yours is completely written for self-esteem, this is not for your readers, it should be for yourself...... You have to understand that your book is for readers, so you have to put things in the book that readers like, and then mix in what you like, but the proportion of it must be well controlled, rather than a vigorous self-congratulatory and thinking about how to have fun and how to write......"

"Yes...... I've pounced so many times, is that the reason?"

Xue Xianren leaned forward excitedly and asked, "Then what should I do?!"

"You've got to crouch down. ”

"Huh?"

"You have to put down your haughty posture and show them the best of yourself, remember, the reader is God, you have to let them see what they want to see, you have to keep them in their footsteps, and when you leave them, you can play with them as you want!"

"Hmm...... I slowly, slowly......"

A strange look appeared on Xue Xiren's face, and he said, "It sounds really reasonable, but how do I feel it, there seems to be ambiguity in these words...... Get down...... Showcase ......"

"It's a metaphor, and it doesn't really make you crouch down. ”

"I see...... Thank you, Master!"

Xue Xianren Zhengse said: "In short, for the next work, I will try my best to collect materials, and then use the theory that Master taught me to write my most perfect work." ”

"What are you going to write about?"

"Lily!"

Su Xian: "................................................"

He didn't want to talk to this guy who was fighting to death anymore, how could anyone watch Lily?

Changing the subject at the moment, he asked, "Ahem, when are we going to leave for Tianshu Academy?!"

"Aren't you curious to ask me about the assessment?"

Xue Xianren glanced at Su Xian and said, "After all, it is also closely related to you, you have to work so hard to get this information out of my mouth before...... Now I don't care at all, I heard that you have a younger sister, and she is also a special enrollment of this year, shouldn't you ......?"

"Well, I was trying to remind her to come, but I couldn't get in touch, so I couldn't help it. ”

Su Xian smiled: "As for me, I'm sorry, I'm just a minor, and there are people in front of me to charge into battle...... I'll just shout 666 in the rear, why bother with that?!"

"This ...... It makes sense!"

Xue Xianren smiled: "Okay, I originally wanted to tell you more information, but now it seems that you don't need it, so go back and prepare, tomorrow morning, we will set off!"

"Hmmm!Okay...... I'm going to prepare. ”

Su Xian smiled and said, "I will slowly follow up on your later works, and when the time comes, I will strive for more suggestions from you......"

"Thank you, if there is anything that needs to be used by the disciple at that time, Master, you are not polite, just give orders!"

Xue Xianren smiled: "Just call me this master, I will never sit idly by and ignore your affairs, so don't worry!"

"So, I like to talk to smart people. ”

Seeing Xue Xianren like this, Su Xian smiled and said, "Then I'll go and pack up my things." ”

"Well, by the way, you tell Yunyun to tell her not to come back, and stay with you at night. ”

Xue Xiandao: "That girl, her sleeping position is not very good...... It's really annoying to kick my quilt at night and talk in my sleep. ”

Su Xian: "................................................"

Coincidentally, that's what your niece said about you.

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