Chapter 139: Footsteps
After the three of them walked on the mountain road for a cup of tea, suddenly the little half-immortal stopped leaving, and Mo Yan also seemed to stop with it.
"It's coming!"
At this time, Xiao Banxian suddenly said softly.
"Hmm"
Mo Yan nodded in response, obviously he also knew.
"Where?"
Mo Liunian was a little nervous, could it be that the snake demon was really a demon?
"All the way behind us. β
Xiao Banxian didn't look back, but whispered to Mo Liunian.
And when Mo Liunian heard Xiao Banxian say this, he suddenly had a creepy feeling, and unconsciously clenched Xiao Banxian's hand.
"I'm here, don't be afraid!"
Xiao Banxian felt Mo Liunian's nervousness and comforted Mo Liunian softly.
The little half-immortal led Mo Liunian to continue walking, and he remembered that he would not walk far to the top of the mountain.
There is a platform on the top of the mountain, and the platform has a radius of three zhang, and the little half-immortal feels that it is more convenient to fight there.
The little half-immortal said that the snake demon had been following them, and Mo Liunian felt it very carefully, and he didn't notice it at first.
But gradually, Mo Liunian heard some doorways, obviously there were three people, but there were four footsteps.
This fourth footstep almost overlapped with Mo Liunian's own footsteps.
Mo Liunian realized this fourth footstep, and Mo Liunian got goosebumps all over his body.
"Don't look back. β
Xiao Banxian noticed her mood fluctuations, and squeezed her hand hard to comfort Mo Liunian.
Finally came to the platform at the top of the mountain, there are stone tables and stone benches on the platform, at this time the moon is prosperous, and the whole platform seems to be covered with a layer of silver light.
Xiao Banxian took Mo Liunian and sat down directly, and Mo Yan also sat down, and there was only the last seat left at the stone table.
"Since you're here, you don't have to hide it, come and sit. β
The voice of the little half-fairy echoed in the silent mountain forest for a long time......
"Huh!"
At this time, a graceful woman in Tsing Yi walked out of the void, and the woman in Tsing Yi had her own light.
It's just that the face is beautiful, and there are traces of time, but there is a mature charm when you look closely, which makes people feel intimate when they see it.
This appearance is more human-like than many people.
......
"The Old Child of God's House."
Old rules, let's first introduce the results of this article:
23rd place on the gold list;
No. 90 in the cultivation monthly list.
The articles selected today are still not the kind that rank high, they belong to the valuable, but hopeful.
These two lists are the ones with high gold content in Jinjiang:
The cultivation list is ranked according to the number of nutrient solutions obtained (that is, the number of fertilizers) obtained by all VIP articles, and the nutrient solutions are obtained after subscribing.
The end of the gold list is the V chapter subscription revenue ranking of the main station 30 days after the end, which is simply and rudely linked to monetary benefits, that is, on the list = making money.
And the book is not long, only 260,000 words. This means that it has a short update cycle, but it makes money, and this model is very suitable for female frequency novices to learn, so that they can try more articles in the short term.
Then let's take a look at what is written in this article, which can have a short cycle and make money?
The Old Child of God's Family
Grandma Hu is old, diagnosed with Alzheimer's disease, has a confused memory, acts like a child, carries a schoolbag all day to find her father, and the family is a little inattentive to the person is gone, although the daughter-in-law does not dislike it, but there is a lot of impatience, grandpa is uncomfortable, and takes grandma out to live.
As soon as the old man moved out of the old house, he saw his old wife following behind a handsome tall young man, looking up like a child, shouting at the young manβ
"Daddy, Daddy, you go slowly!"
"Dad, I'm not going to get an injection!"
The young man stopped, smiled and said, "If you don't get an injection, you're not a good baby." β
The old man was angry: "Where did the little young man come from?!"
The young man raised his eyes, and Old Man Hu shuddered: "Dad!"
The prequel is "My Dad Says He Is God", so the later will explain why Daddy Death hasn't been by Porridge's side.
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That's the basic information for this article.
Let's analyze each item one by one:
Book cover
The cover of this book is not complicated, just a relatively special back cover + brush words + standard font.
Why recommend this cover here?
Because her covers are in series:
There are several copies of this cover.
One of the benefits of this is that the person is distinctive.
If you use it more, others will know that you wrote it at a glance, which is equivalent to establishing an iconic personal logo.
Authors, to put it bluntly, are to build a personal brand, so that your work, or pen name, is valuable, has fans, and is remembered.
Compared with the style and subject matter that are difficult to find at a glance, and the difficult to obtain a unified title, a unified cover with personal characteristics can undoubtedly make it easier for readers to remember you.
This function is like the logo of major brands, even if they have a brand name, an iconic logo will still be easier to remember.
title
The Old Child of God's Family
This title follows the criteria we said earlier:
Goldfinger is written, and the main story line is prominent.
The golden finger of this book is: the heroine's father is the Grim Reaper.
Recently, there have been a lot of golden fingers of this style in Jinjiang: establishing contact with powerful people, becoming the golden finger of the protagonist, or contrasting the hero's greatness.
Such as "I Gave Birth to a Villain Son", "Married to a Contemporary Crown Prince", "Reading with the Prince" and so on. If you can't think of the title of the goldfinger book, you can learn it and save time to polish the plot.
Without further ado, let's return to the storyline of this book:
The storyline of this book is very unique: "Old Child" is the old man, and at its core, it is to see how the Father of Death spoils the daughter of the old man. It's about pension.
The heroine "Porridge" is the child of the Grim Reaper, but the Grim Reaper is locked up in another dimension. Congee Congee and her husband have spent their whole lives studying related theories and trying to save their father.
Later, her father was rescued, but the escaping energy made Congee lose her memory, she became a "Alzheimer's" patient, and her husband was sick and hospitalized.
Alzheimer's porridge porridge is like a child, and her children, although they take care of her, have a bad attitude towards her.
The "princess" porridge, who has always been confident, is disliked by the child every day, becomes timid, and is afraid of the world around her.
In such a situation, Father Death is back, with Daddy's Porridge and Porridge, and there is someone who treats him as a "princess", Porridge Porridge is pampered again, and she has become old, not the pearl of the child's palm, but still the pearl of the father's palm.
The author's description of mental activity is very delicate, which makes people have emotional resonance.
Although it is only a short article, because of the unique and delicate emotional entry point, it sublimates the theme and makes people can't help but start reflecting on the relationship between parents and children.
Why do parents always give more than their children?
Now, what can we, as children, do for our parents?
This is very unique in the female frequency text: when we talk about emotions, there is no longer only love, but also family affection and friendship.
Of course, the current mainstream market is still sweet love and sweet pet articles, but before we write about a theme, we have to think, what are the advantages of me writing this kind of theme?
Or after writing a theme to summarize, where do you stand out in this theme?
If you feel that your advantages are not enough to make yourself stand out, you might as well find another way and try to cut in from other angles, such as the last urban career article, this time the family card.
And the emotional card is the strength of this author:
Most of her recent work has been written about emotional orientation.
For example, "My Dad Says He Is God", that is, the theme of caring for children;
"Don't Be Friends with Monsters" is about friendship, and it also reflects the problem of school violence.
And the emotional card itself is easy to resonate with female readers.
Series of articles
Another thing worth learning from this author is to write a series of essays.
When you find a subject that you're good at, write a series of essays.
As mentioned in the last Jinjiang list, the infinite series:
From the Jinjiang list, see how to tap your strengths and write essays||Xuanpai data analysis
Or the characters in the middle are the same, and they will play a supporting role in the other part.
This will attract people who like the character to see you.
Or the protagonists all live in a macro context, and their lives will be intertwined to a certain extent.
And the title of this book is not eye-catching, it is also the type of modern urban literature, this type is a particularly common category, it is difficult to stand out, so this book from Jinjiang thousands, all kinds of selling points of the book, to get the overlord vote list 60 such a result, it is very rare.
Let's take a look at why it has achieved such results.
The heroine pleases the personality
The love story of a small island, Mr. Shark who has been wronged
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The above is the synopsis of the book.
It can be described as a capricious short, but she grasped the essence:
The personalities of the heroes and heroines, the location where the story takes place and the main line are all written.
The most important thing is that her selling point has also come out - romantic love on the island, how does the pleasing personality grow, and why does the male protagonist named Mr. Shark suffer so much?
The character of the heroine
There are a lot of doorways in this, first of all, let's take a look at why this hostess has caught the reader:
We writers write books, in addition to writing about our own creativity and self-expression.
Our readers are also a part that cannot be ignored.
Their thoughts, preferences, determine your grades, and determine how many people can see your book.
So, do you know what women in this range think about every day?
The 18-35 age range is the time when women grow the fastest, they go to college, experience society, get married and have children. From the protection of the family to the cruel society, it will be accompanied by painful but rapid growth.
In the process of growing up, it will not be smooth sailing, self-confidence may be suppressed, work may be denied, scumbags may be encountered, etc.
And why do they come to see it, because they want to see another possibility, or to see the protagonist grow, or to see the protagonist "flying and domineering" full of self-confidence.
This is what our author wants to do, and the heroine created by "The Next Island" is such a "growing" heroine. The author labeled her as a "pleasing type" personality in the copy.