Chapter 131: Jiaodan
The little half-immortal was so angry that he stepped forward to catch it, but as soon as his body stood up, he felt that the world was spinning.
Mo Liunian said: "Hold on." ”
The little half-fairy half-leaned on her and said, "It's okay." He took out a pill given by the pure monk and took it, and after a little conditioning, the chaotic true qi in his body was straightened out a little, but his body was still weak and weak.
Seeing that half of Heijiao's body had already entered the water, Wujian made a move at this time.
As soon as he grabbed the tail of the black Jiao and shook it vigorously, the body of the black Jiao, which was originally about three feet long, instantly shrank by one zhang, and the black Jiao shook three times in a row, and the black Jiao became a small snake no more than a foot long.
Xiao Banxian and Mo Liunian were dumbfounded, although this black Jiao had been seriously injured, but three shakes could break the foundation of the black Jiao for hundreds of years, and this technique was too amazing.
Put the little snake in the palm of his left hand, the little snake consciously spit out a bead, and put his right palm in front of him, "Amitabha, you have sins so much that you can't keep your foundation, sins and sins, I just hope that you can regain the right results one day." With that, he put the little snake into the lake.
When he turned around, he was facing the gaze of Xiao Banxian and Mo Liunian, and Xiao Banxian swallowed his saliva, "You kid has a lot of strength." ”
Wujian smiled, and then said, "Brother won't blame me for letting it go." ”
Xiao Banxian said, "Forget it, its foundation has been destroyed, and it will be impossible to help the abuse in the future." ”
Wuzhi said, "This evil Jiao gave me Neidan, I want this useless, brother, do you want it?"
The little half-immortal immediately said, "Yes." ”
Cultivators all know that the inner pill of the demon is a treasure, and each sect uses its own method of refining the inner pill.
However, in comparison, the Danding Gate is the first, and the inner Dan refined by the old man of the door is even better, and the second is the ability of the Trick Medicine Dao to refine the Inner Dan is the highest.
The main points and selling points of the creation of works with the theme of Xianxia
Xianxia class, in fact, is called Xiuzhen Xianxia class. With the Oriental people in the background, there are elements such as Xiuzhen and Xianxia in it.
Many authors still can't tell the difference between fantasy and Xianxia, in fact, it's very simple, there are many places where fantasy can be written, and it can be a hodgepodge. But the focus of Xianxia is to highlight a fairy word, seeking immortality and righteousness.
If you have a Xianxia background, mix it with Western vampires. This kind of thing will basically be classified into the fantasy. Xianxia works, I found that many people have taken detours.
The author is all writing, the protagonist wants to be more bullish and more bullish, there are beauties to have beauties, and there are magic weapons to have if there are magic weapons.
In fact, it doesn't matter what the subject is.
If you don't determine the long-term goals of the protagonist, and inadvertently remind the author to satisfy the reader's collecting habits with some short-term goals during the period, then it is actually conceivable whether this book can be popular.
Let me explain this passage.
is the protagonist of a Xianxia work, his goal is to live forever and upgrade to the highest level, and the author will arrange some plots to remind readers that the protagonist's ultimate pursuit is immortality and the highest level.
Then, often in the main character to upgrade to a certain level, defeat the enemy, harvest beauties and treasures.
Satisfying the reader's collectivism - Think about it, when the protagonist gets the treasure beauty, will he feel good? Wish the protagonist could get everything? This is the collector's fetish.
With a long-term goal, remind readers not to forget to follow this book, and have a short-term goal to satisfy the reader's cool psychology.
Can such a book not be popular?
Back to business!
There are also several themes in the Xianxia category.
1, the flood is sealed by the gods, and the representative work is "Buddha is the Way"
2, interstellar treasure hunt stream, the representative work is "Ethereal Journey"
3, urban fairy flow, there are many masterpieces.
4. Historical Xianxia, which is combined with history and integrated into the Xianxia category, is relatively rare.
For example, the sword immortals with Li Bai and the Tang Dynasty as the background, Lu Dongbin and the like, rely on the history of the creation of Xianxia works.
5, returning to the furnace Xianxia, it is very simple, it is a failure to cultivate immortals, and go back to dozens of hundreds of years ago to re-cultivate.
There are also some less popular ones, so I won't say much about it.
Xianxia, remember that the harem must be written according to reason. How do you say it? You always write about a person who cultivates immortals, who is ambiguous with this one today and intimate with that tomorrow.
This fairy spirit is gone, and naturally it won't look good, of course, if you write well, it doesn't matter. It's not just harem women who should pay attention, but also those behaviors like killing people and grabbing treasures, which should also be controlled a little.
If a protagonist has a super-hooligan character, kills people and grabs treasures, and has a lot of harems, this is actually okay. But the problem is that a large percentage of readers don't like this kind of subject matter.
Then, some authors will design something like a catastrophe for the protagonist's behavior, so that the protagonist can get through it with difficulty, and then his personality changes.
In this way, from a rogue fairy, turn back to a fairy-like fairy. It's just an assumption that we try to think about the balance of the world when we let the protagonist get the benefits
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If you always do bad things, you will also get retribution, and in this way, the level of the overall work will be raised.
Summarize the key points of the creation of Xianxia works:
1. Don't mix too much with the background of Xianxia, don't write it as a hodgepodge
2. Long-term goals and short-term goals must be taken into account
3. For Xianxia works, the level setting should be reasonable, and the balance setting should be done well
The selling point of Xianxia works, Xianxia works, is now slightly weak.
Especially for mortals, it is millions of words when it is written, and basically the selling points of the Xianxia class have been written. And the mortal flow is good at copy writing, which is to set up an enclosed space for the protagonist to get treasures.
Many readers read this book for the sake of treasure collecting fetish. Therefore, to write a good Xianxia work, you must figure out its selling point.
As I just said, the reason why it can't be written as a hodgepodge is one of the selling points.
Most readers who like Xianxia still prefer pure works with oriental backgrounds, mixed with things with western backgrounds, and they will feel very weird.
The pure oriental background of Xianxia is a selling point that attracts readers, because many authors write and write, and they all go to the vampire werewolf.
The second selling point of Xianxia's works is manufacturing. Treasures, elixirs, formations, charms.
This kind of thing that the protagonist painstakingly obtains materials and makes them himself will be more popular with readers than artifacts.
The third selling point of Xianxia's works is upgrades.
What is the scattered immortal land immortal Tianxian Da Luo Jin Xian, level by level, so that readers have long-term and short-term follow-up goals, this is the charm of Xianxia's works.
Of course, there are more people writing now, and if this upgrade system is not very new, it is also disliked by readers who have developed reading fatigue.
The fourth selling point of Xianxia's works is persistence. Cultivation is a very difficult and troublesome thing, if it is a casual protagonist, although there are many adventures, but the reader will have a feeling of bluffing, thinking that it is a bad book.
Martial arts is all about punching and kicking, swords coming and going. Xianxia changed the magic weapon, elixir, magic weapon, charm, and formation.
I want to ask, the situation of the urban fairy class
First, don't write about college, it's rotten
Second, try to add as much new ideas as possible
Third, don't hang out in nightclubs.
And these are often the failures of those urban immortals.
45. Creation skills of online texts, the creation of oriental fantasy themes
Today I want to talk about the creation of oriental fantasy themes, mainly some of my own perceptions and ideas
First, don't make a big hodgepodge, Oriental fantasy, as the name suggests, is based on the oriental background, with a little fairy and martial arts as the backbone, and has a more reasonable and orderly upgrade system of fantasy works
At the beginning of the article, at least until 1 million words, don't think about Western vampire magicians or anything like that.
Why? Because it will drive away your readers
As for 1 million words, I don't care about you, what should be red, no matter how you write it, it will be red, and if you should pounce, you will already be a eunuch.
A hodgepodge can increase the readability of a work, but it can also create dissatisfaction among the readership
This involves a secret to the creation of online literature, if some plots are easy to cause dissatisfaction among some readers, unless it is extremely necessary, it is best to write later.
Second, Oriental fantasy is somewhat similar to Xianxia martial arts, but one important thing is that Xianxia martial arts is described and portrayed as the main line in the pursuit of Tao or immortality
Oriental fantasy, on the other hand, is more inclined to the experience of the protagonist
Recently, the Oriental fantasy has been on fire, and Xianxia has returned to the cold, and the main reason is that the author's main line of Xianxia has been biased to some experiences and adventures.
Readers of Xianxia are actually more willing to see the protagonist's exploration and pursuit of immortality and Taoism.
The direction of the two sides is inconsistent, so most Xianxia readers will think that Xianxia's works are not good-looking
And Oriental Fantasy, because its compatibility is stronger than that of Xianxia, readers are relatively well tolerated, and there are a large number of novice readers.
These readers love to see that the protagonist is a little ambiguous, killing people and grabbing treasures, revenge, adventure travel, learning arts, doing tasks and other popular elements in RPG online games
Basically, these elements are found in Xianxia and Oriental fantasy works, the question is, an immortal who cultivates immortals will engage in dozens or hundreds of women at a time? Will he kill people and set fires?
Third, Oriental Fantasy must have a relatively clear upgrade route
It can be said that works that are too vague in the upgrade route will not be able to attract readers who like to read oriental fantasy works
I won't say much about the upgrade route, it's a way for the author to set long-term goals for the reader, and if not, then learn more
I use the synopsis of "The Journey of Piao".
It can illustrate the creative ideas of oriental fantasy
At the outset, he said, "Maybe we will see the continuation of ancient China; Perhaps an advanced civilization will be seen; Maybe you will see the enticing magic weapon; Perhaps the remains of the immortals will be seen; You may see the medieval castles of the West; You may see all sorts of strange beasts; This is the Journey of Piao. ”
I used to think about the reason why fantasy is so popular
I've found that the hardest thing in life is not being able to do what I want
Readers, on the other hand, dream of a freewheeling fantasy to relax their minds and experience freedom.
Therefore, Oriental fantasy, in order to attract readers, it is necessary to closely follow the words "do whatever you want".
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