The little half-immortal stared at the transmission note closely, and when the transmission note came from Lao Chai's voice.

"Sir, we have found the nest of the Black Jiao. ”

Xiao Banxian was overjoyed when he heard Lao Chai's voice, and his heart was finally no longer worried.

"Where are you, come back quickly, there is fraud in it, we have been fooled. ”

The little demi-immortal shouted, and his voice drifted through the valley.

"We're ....... in the grass"

As soon as Lao Chai's words were gone, Lao Chai's voice was interrupted so abruptly.

The little half-fairy told himself that he must be calm, and he repeated the word 'green grass'.

In less than a few breaths, Xiao Banxian thought that from here to the west, more than two hundred miles away from here, there was a lake, which seemed to be called Qingcao Lake.

Jiao is the master of the rivers and lakes, and it is reasonable for him to set up his nest in the green grass lake.

However, because the little half-immortal was not familiar with the location of Qingcao Lake, he could only use the Tengyun technique.

By the time we found Grass Lake, a fierce battle had ended, and it was already dawn, but the sun did not bring light, but illuminated the bloody wreckage all over the ground.

The little half-fairy saw Granny Cui, whose limbs were broken alive and drained of blood, and saw the bitten black dog, and finally he found Lao Chai, who had become a bloody man.

Lao Chai's eyes were wide open, and he was still dragging the transmission note in his hand, what kind of massacre was this, so that Lao Chai didn't even finish the last sentence.

The little half-immortal picked up the transmission note, held it tightly in his hand, and knelt on the ground, because of his carelessness, he would fall into the trap of the other party and let them die so miserably.

The little half-immortal kowtowed three times to the corpse in this place!

"I, a little half-immortal, swear that I will kill the murderer and avenge you. ”

After speaking, the little half-immortal stood up, ready to use the fire resistance technique to burn their corpses, but suddenly thought of something, and squatted down again, one by one, and sure enough, all the demon Nedan was gone.

The little half-fairy was silent for a long time before he finally cast the fire control technique, and when he saw a raging fire by the lake, the little half-fairy's heart became colder and colder.

Before starting today's topic, let's review yesterday's content, yesterday roughly talked about the use of narrative in this expression, as far as everyone's message feedback is concerned, most friends use it very well, and a small number of friends may still not be very clear about the difference between narration and description, here is a little mention.

Narrative is an explanation and statement of the experience of the characters and the development and change of things, and it is a very general statement of a fact, giving people a feeling of being as plain as water. (The higher requirement is to use various narrative techniques, such as flashbacks, interpolations, supplements, etc., to break the flat and direct narrative, resulting in ups and downs and waves in the text.) ）

Description is to use figurative language to depict the state of characters or scenery concretely, giving people an immersive feeling and a strong sense of image.

Take a chestnut

Narrator: In the winter of 1945, he died on the streets of Chongqing.

Description: In the winter of 1945, a cold corpse was lying on the streets of Chongqing, only to see his eyes open, covered in wounds, wearing only thin clothes, and pedestrians on the road hurriedly walked by, without looking at him.

Comparing the expressions of the two sentences, I believe everyone can see the difference between these two expressions.

Descriptions are more detailed than narratives, and it is very difficult to cover everything in an article. Let's start with the general direction.

From the perspective, it can be divided into positive description and side description, from the content can be divided into character description and environmental description, character description can be divided into language, action, demeanor, psychology, appearance description, and environmental description can be divided into natural environment and social environment description.

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Next, let's use a fight description in "Romance of the Dragon and Snake" to talk about how to better apply the description to writing.

Wang Chao first surged blood on his face, and then anger rose from his heart, and evil was born to the side of his guts, and he secretly calculated in his heart.

"If you have revenge, you don't want to take revenge, Lao Tzu wants to take revenge today, and by the way, you can get a handful. Wang Chao thought quickly in his heart, "There are so many people, how are you going to fight? Grab a handful of money and leave?

Comments: The foreshadowing before the fight, using demeanor description and psychological description.

The depiction of demeanor is a series of movement changes of a person's facial features in a specific situation, which is actually a dynamic portrait depiction.

Using demeanor to describe the characters can express the inner world of the characters, and the second can portray the characters' personalities.

In this paragraph, there are not many descriptions of demeanor, what we can see is the sentence "blood gushes to the face" to express the anger of the protagonist, in fact, if you want to add more demeanor descriptions, you can also describe the eyes, the feeling of glaring angrily.

When using demeanor description, it should be noted that it must be combined with the situation in which the character is located, and cannot be separated from the need to portray the character and express the theme, and write the demeanor for the sake of writing the demeanor.

Psychological description is to use language and words to describe and analyze the inner world of the characters, reveal the inner life of the characters, and portray the characters' personalities.

This depicts the protagonist's complex psychological change process from wanting to take revenge to worrying about the other party's strength, which well reflects the protagonist's bold and careful character traits.

Attention should be paid to the following three principles in psychological depiction:

1. When writing about the psychological activities of characters, you should write about the mental activities that will inevitably occur in a specific environment of a specific character, and you should not write about psychological activities for the sake of psychological description.

2. When writing about mental activities, it is necessary to prevent one mental activity on the left and one mental activity on the right.

Only when the key plots, actions, and expressions appear, are they accompanied by psychological descriptions.

3. When writing about psychological activities, we should strive to write about the subtle emotional waves and complex psychological changes of the characters.

These three points, compared with the above examples, the protagonist's psychological activity is before he prepares for the fight (in a specific situation, in a key plot), and the protagonist's psychological change process from wanting revenge to worrying is well written.

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Wang Chao calculated all the changes in his heart, took a deep breath, and walked up quickly.

A group of people's minds were on the cards, and the hundred-yuan bills were handed back and forth, without noticing Wang Chao at all.

"Brother Guang, it's time to be bored, I'm bored at fifty!" Another red-haired thug knocked on the table at that Brother Guang.

This Brother Guang is the gangster who beat Wang Chao before.

"Shout Mao. Mom's B. Brother Guang seemed to have lost money, and he was very unhappy, so he slapped the table with his hand.

"Xiaoguang, don't worry if you lose money, wait for the winner to invite K Song, help find a punctual girl to play!"

Brother Liang rubbed his cards, and then leisurely spat out a puff of smoke rings.

At this time, Wang Chao had already reached Brother Guang's back, suddenly made a move, grabbed Brother Guang's hair and pulled it back!

Click, Wang Chao pulled his hair violently, took Brother Guang's body and dragged it to the ground, and even the chair was broken.

Notice my bold words, which are described with a lot of action.

Action depiction occupies an important position in character depiction, and it is one of the most commonly used depiction methods to reveal the character of a character through the description of the character's personalized actions and actions.

The role of action depiction is to show the mental outlook of the characters and directly reflect the characters' personalities.

Let's analyze the first two actions of the protagonist in this paragraph, "deep breathing" and "walking" are two actions, and they are two coherent actions, take a deep breath before doing something, which shows that this person is actually a little nervous about this matter.

The two actions of "deep breathing" and "walking" well show Wang Chao's mood in that situation, although he is a little nervous but resolute, it can be seen that this is a person who dares to face and not escape.

Looking at some of his actions of beating people, "grabbing" and "pulling" the other party's hair, and then "dragging" the other party to the ground, it is also very coherent, from the use of these action words, we can fully feel Wang Chao's extreme hatred for Brother Guang, and the character of revenge is also on the page.

So how should we use good action to describe in our daily writing?

1. Write coherent movements and use verbs accurately.

2. The actions should be in line with the character's identity, personality and situation.

3. It should be skillfully linked with the demeanor, psychology and language of the character, and the actions of the characters are not isolated, when they are associated with the emotions, attitudes, postures or expressions of the people, they are meaningful and personified actions.

4. Metaphors, rhetoric and other techniques can be appropriately used, which can not only make the characters more vivid and vivid, but also increase interest.

I won't go into detail here, but everyone should understand it by comparing the examples.

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There are several types of character descriptions mentioned above, and we will also talk about environmental descriptions below.

Just give a chestnut

A quiet autumn rain has been falling for ten days, the rain is not heavy, with a hint of late autumn chill, fine and dense on the endless field.

Piles of dark gray clouds pressed low on the earth, it was already late autumn, the woods were bare, the autumn rain washed the old trees, but the merciless autumn stripped them of their beautiful clothes, and made them stand gloomily, brown moss hiding the deep wrinkles in their bark.

The autumn rains, which lasted for ten days, also made the ground extremely muddy, and even the official roads were full of muddy puddles and mud, making it difficult for pedestrians to walk an inch.

- "The Warrior of the Poor"

This is a typical description of the natural environment. The description of the natural environment is nothing more than starting from our six senses, and it is nothing more than grasping the main characteristics of the environment to describe.

The six senses here are (take a thunderstorm day as an example)

Outside the window, there was a vast expanse of white, and the earth turned into a boiling ocean in an instant. The storm raged, and the trees in the garden trembled. A purple flash of lightning in the distance tore through the void......

The sound of sobbing wind, roaring thunder, and the sound of rain are all in one;

(nasal) heavy rain carried the smell of earth;

The cold weather made the tea that Lou Xinyue drank a little bitter;

He felt a heavy chill;

His heart was also disturbed by the thunderstorm, and his woman was like a frightened rabbit, cowering in his arms.