Chapter 124: Good Demon
Xiao Banxian explained to Mo Liunian very carefully, the most important thing now is for her to have the ability to protect herself, after all, she can't take care of her all the time, not to mention that Xiao Banxian knows the strength of her opponent.
The future may not be easy, but every minute and second will be much easier.
When the little demi-immortal cuts everything into small pieces, everything will become easy.
As long as the anxiety is calmed down for a while, the little half-immortal will instantly not know what the anxiety is.
Besides, it should be able to be clean for a while, and the little half-immortal will not think about it in his heart.
When the time comes, if you think of a way, time will not bring greater magical powers to the little half-immortal, because after all, things are not determined by the wishes of the little half-immortal.
It's just that now the matter has not yet fallen on the head of the little half-immortal, which makes the little half-immortal feel that it is possible to avoid it by chance.
If the little half-fairy really lives in every moment, the little half-fairy will have no time to regret, no time to worry, but only focus on the time in front of him.
Xiao Banxian is not like Mo Yannian, he usually speaks very well, but once it comes to a critical moment, he can always break it with one word, and any big problem can be easily and gently broken, solved, and disposed of properly.
And this Mo Liunian's smile, Xiao Banxian often sees that Mo Liunian's smile is different from ordinary people's smiles, it is really a smile when his heart is in full bloom, which can make the darkness around him turn into light for a while.
Xiao Banxian looked at Mo Liunian concentrating on things, there was a special look on his face, his expression was usually relaxed, but now he was so concentrated, as if the whole world was locked out.
Mo Liunian didn't practice a few times, and the half-immortal Yao sister and brother came back, and the little half-immortal glanced at Mo Liunian, and then asked, "Is it fun in the city?"
Ban Xianyi pouted and said, "It's not half the size of the capital." ”
Xiao Banxian smiled: "Otherwise, how can it be called the capital." ”
Half-Immortal Yao said, "There are remnants of demonic energy everywhere in this city, but there is not a single monster. ”
The little half-fairy's smile was dyed with bitterness, "They all left before you came." ”
Banxian Yao was a little puzzled, "Big brother, if you are not from my race, your heart will be different, why don't you believe what my father said." ”
The little half-immortal is not annoyed, after all, everyone grows up in a different environment, "If you had come a few days earlier, you would have known, they are all very cute, very easy demons." ”
Half Immortal Yao frowned, obviously unable to accept Little Half Immortal's statement.
Xiao Banxian smiled and said, "You passed by a steamed bun shop and passed by an early stall, right?" ”
Banxian Yao said, "Yes, the demonic energy there has not yet been dispersed." ”
Xiao Banxian said, "The reason why the demonic spirit there has not dispersed for a few days is because those demons have been living there, that bun shop is opened by a tiger demon named Wang Dali and his wife, and the early stall is run by an old raccoon cat, they do business very well, more regular than many people." ”
Half Immortal Yi was surprised, Half Immortal Yao was even more surprised, they couldn't imagine what a demon-like life would be like.
"In fact, demons are the same as people, some demons are fierce and bloodthirsty and aggressive, but more demons just want to live a dull life and practice." ”
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The main points and selling points of the creation of works with the theme of Xianxia
Xianxia class, in fact, is called Xiuzhen Xianxia class. With the Oriental people in the background, there are elements such as Xiuzhen and Xianxia in it.
Many authors still can't tell the difference between fantasy and Xianxia, in fact, it's very simple, there are many places where fantasy can be written, and it can be a hodgepodge. But the focus of Xianxia is to highlight a fairy word, seeking immortality and righteousness.
If you have a Xianxia background, mix it with Western vampires. This kind of thing will basically be classified into the fantasy. Xianxia works, I found that many people have taken detours.
The author is all writing, the protagonist wants to be more bullish and more bullish, there are beauties to have beauties, and there are magic weapons to have if there are magic weapons.
In fact, it doesn't matter what the subject is.
If you don't determine the long-term goals of the protagonist, and inadvertently remind the author to satisfy the reader's collecting habits with some short-term goals during the period, then it is actually conceivable whether this book can be popular.
Let me explain this passage.
is the protagonist of a Xianxia work, his goal is to live forever and upgrade to the highest level, and the author will arrange some plots to remind readers that the protagonist's ultimate pursuit is immortality and the highest level.
Then, often in the main character to upgrade to a certain level, defeat the enemy, harvest beauties and treasures.
Satisfying the reader's collectivism - Think about it, when the protagonist gets the treasure beauty, will he feel good? Wish the protagonist could get everything? This is the collector's fetish.
With a long-term goal, remind readers not to forget to follow this book, and have a short-term goal to satisfy the reader's cool psychology.
Can such a book not be popular?
Back to business!
There are also several themes in the Xianxia category.
1, the flood is sealed by the gods, and the representative work is "Buddha is the Way"
2, interstellar treasure hunt stream, the representative work is "Ethereal Journey"
3, urban fairy flow, there are many masterpieces.
4. Historical Xianxia, which is combined with history and integrated into the Xianxia category, is relatively rare.
For example, the sword immortals with Li Bai and the Tang Dynasty as the background, Lu Dongbin and the like, rely on the history of the creation of Xianxia works.
5, returning to the furnace Xianxia, it is very simple, it is a failure to cultivate immortals, and go back to dozens of hundreds of years ago to re-cultivate.
There are also some less popular ones, so I won't say much about it.
Xianxia, remember that the harem must be written according to reason. How do you say it? You always write about a person who cultivates immortals, who is ambiguous with this one today and intimate with that tomorrow.
This fairy spirit is gone, and naturally it won't look good, of course, if you write well, it doesn't matter. It's not just harem women who should pay attention, but also those behaviors like killing people and grabbing treasures, which should also be controlled a little.
If a protagonist has a super-hooligan character, kills people and grabs treasures, and has a lot of harems, this is actually okay. But the problem is that a large percentage of readers don't like this kind of subject matter.
Then, some authors will design something like a catastrophe for the protagonist's behavior, so that the protagonist can get through it with difficulty, and then his personality changes.
In this way, from a rogue fairy, turn back to a fairy-like fairy. It's just an assumption that we try to think about the balance of the world when we let the protagonist get the benefits
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If you always do bad things, you will also get retribution, and in this way, the level of the overall work will be raised.
Summarize the key points of the creation of Xianxia works:
1. Don't mix too much with the background of Xianxia, don't write it as a hodgepodge
2. Long-term goals and short-term goals must be taken into account
3. For Xianxia works, the level setting should be reasonable, and the balance setting should be done well
The selling point of Xianxia works, Xianxia works, is now slightly weak.
Especially for mortals, it is millions of words when it is written, and basically the selling points of the Xianxia class have been written. And the mortal flow is good at copy writing, which is to set up an enclosed space for the protagonist to get treasures.
Many readers read this book for the sake of treasure collecting fetish. Therefore, to write a good Xianxia work, you must figure out its selling point.
As I just said, the reason why it can't be written as a hodgepodge is one of the selling points.
Most readers who like Xianxia still prefer pure works with oriental backgrounds, mixed with things with western backgrounds, and they will feel very weird.
The pure oriental background of Xianxia is a selling point that attracts readers, because many authors write and write, and they all go to the vampire werewolf.
The second selling point of Xianxia's works is manufacturing. Treasures, elixirs, formations, charms.
This kind of thing that the protagonist painstakingly obtains materials and makes them himself will be more popular with readers than artifacts.
The third selling point of Xianxia's works is upgrades.
What is the scattered immortal land immortal Tianxian Da Luo Jin Xian, level by level, so that readers have long-term and short-term follow-up goals, this is the charm of Xianxia's works.
Of course, there are more people writing now, and if this upgrade system is not very new, it is also disliked by readers who have developed reading fatigue.
The fourth selling point of Xianxia's works is persistence. Cultivation is a very difficult and troublesome thing, if it is a casual protagonist, although there are many adventures, but the reader will have a feeling of bluffing, thinking that it is a bad book.
Martial arts is all about punching and kicking, swords coming and going. Xianxia changed the magic weapon, elixir, magic weapon, charm, and formation.
I want to ask, the situation of the urban fairy class
First, don't write about college, it's rotten
Second, try to add as much new ideas as possible
Third, don't hang out in nightclubs.
And these are often the failures of those urban immortals.
45. Creation skills of online texts, the creation of oriental fantasy themes
Today I want to talk about the creation of oriental fantasy themes, mainly some of my own perceptions and ideas
First, don't make a big hodgepodge, Oriental fantasy, as the name suggests, is based on the oriental background, with a little fairy and martial arts as the backbone, and has a more reasonable and orderly upgrade system of fantasy works
At the beginning of the article, at least until 1 million words, don't think about Western vampire magicians or anything like that.
Why? Because it will drive away your readers
As for 1 million words, I don't care about you, what should be red, no matter how you write it, it will be red, and if you should pounce, you will already be a eunuch.
A hodgepodge can increase the readability of a work, but it can also create dissatisfaction among the readership
This involves a secret to the creation of online literature, if some plots are easy to cause dissatisfaction among some readers, unless it is extremely necessary, it is best to write later.
Second, Oriental fantasy is somewhat similar to Xianxia martial arts, but one important thing is that Xianxia martial arts is described and portrayed as the main line in the pursuit of Tao or immortality
Oriental fantasy, on the other hand, is more inclined to the experience of the protagonist
Recently, the Oriental fantasy has been on fire, and Xianxia has returned to the cold, and the main reason is that the author's main line of Xianxia has been biased to some experiences and adventures.
Readers of Xianxia are actually more willing to see the protagonist's exploration and pursuit of immortality and Taoism.
The direction of the two sides is inconsistent, so most Xianxia readers will think that Xianxia's works are not good-looking
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