I don't want to write, I'm not motivated.

After writing it once, the grades are even worse, and it is not as good as the previous one.

Of course, it is mainly my own problem, there are too many poisonous points at the beginning of the previous book, and it is too easy to persuade me to quit. Although the beginning of this book avoids the poison point, it is not enough, and the whole thing seems mediocre and difficult to attract people.

The content of the article is unattractive and, naturally, there are no readers.

Reflect on this.

The expression is not qualified. I won't talk about whether my expression is bad or not, anyway, in my own opinion, it is completely unqualified. I obviously want to show the thoughts and pictures in my heart to the readers, but I often get stuck in the expression. It's not that the words don't reach the meaning, or it's messy without distinguishing between priority and priority.

The foreshadowing is too long. I am a person who pays attention to logic, and my personal logic is also strong, and the foreshadowing of this book actually buried a lot in the front. But unfortunately, I didn't have the opportunity to write it, and my grades were too poor to lack the motivation to continue writing. The other also shows that it is not enough to be logical and reasonable, but also to be able to make people understand the hidden flavor at a glance. Otherwise, it is to dig a pit for yourself, and let people see it in the clouds, it is better to explain it directly.

The lack of fun is what I think is my biggest flaw. In fact, in today's blooming flowers, no matter what the subject is, there will be people who like it and someone will watch it. But once it lacks interest, the whole book will not have the conditions to be engaging, and the reader will naturally not be able to read it. Therefore, to exist is to be reasonable. There is a reason for the popularity of Shuangwen. Modern people themselves have to face huge work pressure, family pressure, parental pressure, children's pressure, etc., if you can't relax and face pressure when you look at the novel on your mobile phone, then it is natural for this novel to be abandoned. But this doesn't mean that there is nothing wrong with brainless coolness, what kind of wealthy son-in-law, what kind of order to gather 100,000 soldiers and so on, anyway, I won't write this kind of thing. Writing articles is just a hobby for me, not for food, and my wife and children don't expect this text to sell for money. Of course, I didn't look down on the wealthy son-in-law or anything when I said this, there are all kinds of people, everyone has their own ideas, which I personally think is understandable. When I write, I still like to write about things that I like and like.

Structural issues. There are indeed big problems with the structure, and this book is the most complete structure of my main story, well, even better than the previous one. However, only the structure of the general direction was done, and the details were not. This is the problem, although the general direction can be consistent, but in the details it is easy to fly, and the result is that the article gives people a scattered feeling.

Substitution questions. The sense of substitution is too poor, this is a fact that has to be admitted. Originally, I wanted to write a new world completely, but after reading the articles of various gods, I realized what it meant that "art comes from life and is higher than life". Articles that are not combined with and connected with reality can only be seen in the clouds and fog, just like the castle in the sky.

Character issues. The characters are not detailed enough, not flesh and blood enough. In the early stage, there was a lot less detail portrayal in order to promote the plot, so that there was a feeling of lack of agility in pushing the characters for the sake of promoting.

Therefore, in the next book, I will strive to solve my own flaws and be able to write what I really want to express. As for the newly discovered defects, that will naturally be solved later.