The swordsman positions him as a hero, not a gentleman.

Take a typical case as an example: in the original book of Shushan Swordsman's Biography, in the second sword fight in which the Wutai faction challenged the position of the head of the Emei Xuanmen, Qi Shuming and the head of the Wutai faction, the mixed yuan patriarch, made an appointment for one-on-one heads-up, but he couldn't fight others, so he directly took a group of fellow disciples to beat him, and also resorted to the despicable means of sneak attack. From this incident, I can already see the faces of the core characters in the Emei faction, and no matter how Emei fans wash the floor, they can't change the facts of this incident in the original book.

In this incident, you can say that Qi Shuming is an unscrupulous hero who will do anything to achieve his goals, but the means are not above board anyway, and he can't match the image of a righteous gentleman. In the original work, the reason why Emei was able to conquer the world and dominate the family was because of Qi Shuming's heroic quality, but he usually spoke and acted more sleekly, and he didn't forget to set up an archway when he was a bitch, giving people the illusion of a righteous gentleman (similar to Yue Buqun, the head of the Huashan faction in the smiling proud rivers and lakes), in fact, a pedantic gentleman can't make a big deal.

There is also the problem of the positioning of Qi Jincicada.

In the original work, the mixed yuan patriarch was beaten to death by Emei, and the other brothers in the Wutai faction were afraid of the Emei forces, and they each closed their own troubles. Her person has no bad deeds, just because she is the enemy of Emei, she is called a demon woman (the typical winner is the king and the loser Kou, the winning party holds justice, and everything is reasonable), other elders scolded her so much that the demon woman is a peer after all, he is a junior of Qi Jincicada, and the difference between others is six or seven hundred years old, seeing Xu Feiniang directly scolding the cheap maid, it can be seen how arrogant and uneducated he is, just this detail, it is enough to put a domineering and arrogant label in his personality.

People who have read the original work of Shushan,See the later stage of the story,Most of them have no good impression of Emei,And even the more you look at it, the more disgusted you become,These people are the protagonists of the whole text.,The protagonist is so disgusting and annoying.,The owner of the pearl building is also very powerful.,The root cause,In fact, it's not the collapse of the protagonist's personality.,Resulting in a polarization of readers' attitudes towards the protagonist of Emei.。 For example, in the second sword fight, Qi Shuming was described as a hero, and Wei Guangzheng was described later, and the behavior and personality of the characters before and after produced huge contrasts and contradictions.

No one is perfect, and the master of the Pearl House wrote that Shushan created the era of Xianxia, and his achievements in imagination and setting are very high, no longer under the Journey to the West and the Fengshen List, so that many subsequent martial arts writers can look at him, but it is undeniable that the design of the plot and the portrayal of the characters are his shortcomings, resulting in the original setting and imagination of Shushan, but the story is lacking, the plot is not shocking, and there are not many impressive characters left。

In fact, the highest achievement in the plot and character portrayal is Master Jin Yong, every protagonist in Jin Yong can be remembered, and even popular, even a supporting role, can leave a deep impression on the reader after reading it, this kind of skill is really extraordinary.

Although the swordsman is written as a Shushan fan, it is self-contained, only retaining the magic weapon of the original work, treasures, characters, some major events and other essences, there will be a new set of world view settings in the book, in order to make the plot more exciting, some of the old settings of the original text have been outdated, and a large number of new settings have been added, everything serves the plot, everything is just to make the book friends read more refreshing and enjoyable, everything has refuted with the original text, please automatically substitute into this book, try not to be affected by the original work, and treat this book as an independent Xianxia work。

In the process of serialization, this book was sprayed by a small poke of original powder.,What is highly toxic.,Bullshit.,Underworld cultivation,What forcibly black Emei.,Brain-dead two,Said to write Shushan Homo as a joke.,Brain-dead Xiaobai, etc.,As long as you catch a refutation with the original setting, you will spray wildly.,How vicious the words are.,It feels like the author accidentally killed his whole family.,The two sides have the same hatred as they don't share the same day.。

The swordsman is actually the same as Spiegel in his heart, which settings in this book and the original book have refutations, and the swordsman actually knows it, and deliberately changed it in order to make the plot more exciting (there are always some original fans who rely on this to show their superiority, thinking that they understand it, the author is a LO force).

The swordsman has his own ideas.,And it's not affected by that little poke of poisonous tongue.,Still write this book down little by little according to your own ideas.,Strive to bring forth the new.,Write a book with some new ideas.,Don't follow the rules.,Not so routine of the same people.。

Judging from the results of the first order of 2000 on the shelves at present,It should be regarded as the best one in Shushan in recent years,Most of the book friends are very powerful,Very supportive,It also proves from the side that the swordsman's exploration direction is correct,Really want to write according to the idea of a small poke of original fans,It is estimated that I have already pounced on my grandmother's house,Many senior original fans like those who look very rigorous,Very in line with the original,The content of the original Shushan homo,There are also authors who write according to this idea,The result is completely reduced to a niche,Become a carnival reading material for a small poke of original fans,Unfortunately, the test of the market is:Without exception, almost all of them hit the streetIf you don't know how to keep pace with the times, just blindly follow the rules, and don't know how to bring forth the new, sooner or later you will be abandoned by the readers of the new era, facts speak louder than words!

The swordsman vented a small grievance here, don't blame the scholars, this situation is very similar to the reform of the ancient dynasty, every time a minister proposes to reform the outdated old system, there is always a large group of conservatives desperately to stop it, on the grounds that the law of the ancestors cannot be changed, and spare no effort to criticize.

I hope that book friends can continue to support the dream of the swordsman.,Support this Shushan fandom that is not a routine.,Let it go further.,Become a clear stream among the Shushan fandom.,Thank you, swordsman!