A little explanation about the recent episode
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First of all, there are many people who complain about love at first sight, in fact, I have thought about that sentence for a long time, deleted and added it. (The first text is published in the reading room biquge.info)
Because I know that there will be some readers who feel uncomfortable, and I can understand this feeling, it is more pleasant than loving or being loved, so think about how long it is in a novel that we read that the protagonist has not actively loved others. The fixed pattern is that the protagonist doesn't love anyone, shows his charm, attracts all the beauties, and then develops into a relationship.
Regardless of whether this model is reasonable or not, after all, it is reasonable to exist zài. And I hesitated for a long time, but I still added this sentence to break this pattern. Because what I want to write about is a hero, a great sage, with ambitions or ambitions beyond ordinary people. Just as Xiang Yu saw Emperor Qin parade, he looked straight and said, "He can take his place." ”
As for many people, the description of Gu Yanying is not in place, but in my opinion, this is the most direct description, which cannot make people fall in love at first sight, and they are not worthy of being called a peerless beauty. And when you see a peerless beauty, if you don't have the ambition to conquer it, you won't be a hero.
I just want to write a more "normal" relationship, because of many novels, or the influence of reality, liking a woman seems to mean groveling, losing oneself, and being a slave, but with Li Qingshan's fierce feelings, is it possible? In the face of Gu Yanying, who is many times stronger and nobler than himself, Li Qingshan still only wants to marry her as a wife on an equal footing, but you put your position too low first.
Secondly, there is the battle of the mountain temple.
I think what I wrote is clear enough, Li Qingshan has not joined the Eagle Wolf Guard, Wang Pushi just gave a promise, he is obviously very unhappy with Li Qingshan, so Hua Chengzan will let Li Qingshan "run quickly", because they all foresaw this scene, and even Gu Yanying foresaw this scene, wanting to test Li Qingshan's true form. And there is a detail that many people may not have noticed, Wang Pushi asked Li Qingshan to report to Zhuo Zhibo in Jiaping City, and it was Zhuo Zhibo who sent Feng Zhang.
Li Qingshan originally wanted to lure Feng Zhang to the decisive battle, but Feng Zhang's prudence and cunning could be said to have been beyond his expectations, and he used the spirit ginseng elixir to defeat several first-class masters. At such a critical juncture, it is very likely that you will not be able to escape, but you will weaken your momentum and lose half of it first. He was not unsure, and it was possible to break through the current realm, so he made the most rational choice.
Finally, there is the issue of upgrading the system.
As I said, this is just a tool, but it is an indispensable tool, and I also thought about making a system by myself, which is very simple, just make up a few names, but there must be a lot of cumbersome introductions, and I hesitated for a long time. The system that has been sorted out by the god of nonsense is really very concise and to the point. There is no point or necessity in making an unsuitable set of tools yourself.
However, it is not a copy of everything, but a lot of its own things have been added to make it more suitable for this novel, which will be shown one by one later. If you are a reader who is upset at the sight of the name, I can only implore you to put aside your preconceptions, I don't want to write another mortal stream, there will be a whole new story here.
This book is my work of seeking innovation and change, it will inevitably be accompanied by a lot of problems, welcome everyone's correction, but also need to include and understand, at least I write this book is very sincere, for now, this change is still successful, compared to the previous book that the more I write the feeling of weakness, now I have absolute confidence and motivation, because the wonderful behind, there is a magnificent world, moving stories and charming characters, waiting for me to depict.
In many places, I blame me for not explaining clearly, but I want the text to be as concise as possible, less explained, and more expressed in details or the actions of the characters. Li Qingshan's attitude towards Gu Yanying in the future will naturally prove whether he has seen a woman tuǐ soft, and as the world unfolds, it will naturally prove whether I am copying or not, but who made this an online article?
PS: In a state of low-grade fever, writing this text, I have been covered in cold sweat, coughing and vomiting in the middle, it is really painful, life is the most painful to be sick, and the happiest to be sick, ask for some blessings, I hope tomorrow will be fine!
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