Codewords should pay attention to the rhythm of the plot, pay attention to the feedback of readers, and often check the previous text.

This is the key to the longevity of a book.

Since I've written 1.1 million words, I definitely don't want to give up halfway, so I'm serious about it. After looking back at the updates of the past few days, I feel a little bored.

It's not that I'm bored, it's that the plot is a little boring, and there aren't too many twists and turns.

I didn't feel the collapse, the plot was actually progressing step by step, and the level did not fluctuate. But I thought about it for a while, and I dug a big hole for myself.

People who like this book, more of them like to watch God's turns and complain, and they are not particularly interested in the story or something, just have fun.

And this volume I want to tell a story.,So the foreshadowing is a little long.,And the new volume has to be set up because of the two settings.,So there's too much narration and too little dialogue recently.,It's not good.。

Using narration to push the plot to let the reader understand the plot is far less comfortable than using events to push the plot to make the reader understand it on their own.

I understand the reasoning, but the setting can't be left behind, which caused me to make some mistakes.

Thank you, the recent data has not fallen but risen, but in times of peace, I still have to change it.

Let me explain to you the plot outline of this volume, which is also my overall idea for planning this volume in the first place.

This volume is actually going to make a big news.,The last volume has been paved.,There will be a fall of the supreme boss.,There will be a complete story.,Connect Qi Lin's ex-girlfriend in series.,I also made up for the Super God Academy.,Because there have always been book friends who asked me to write about the second dimension.,So I'm trying to integrate the worldview of Super God and Marvel.。

In order to let the children's shoes that haven't seen anime and movies be able to watch them, I embedded them in the new world background and made two sets to ensure that those who have seen it can understand the stalk, and those who haven't seen it can understand the plot.

Saying so much, I just want to tell you that I wrote this volume seriously, and there are children's shoes that are ready to jump and read, so try to read them all, and I shouldn't be too disappointed.

A complete story is interlocking, echoing before and after, with foreshadowing in between. If you don't watch it, it's very likely that the later plot won't be connected, and even if you do, you won't have that feeling of sudden realization.

Of course, I will calm down and think seriously about the plot, try to make the style of writing in the back closer to the front, so that the foreshadowing of the story will also become interesting, so that everyone will not feel bland.

I promise that there will definitely be a lot of divine twists in the back of this volume, and there will also be the feeling of revealing the truth in the front and making your scalp tingle. All in all, don't skip this volume.

In addition, let's explain the plot that everyone has reported recently:

1. The fairy forces of this universe are not the only protagonists, the protagonist is only in charge of the earth, and other planets also have the forces of the fairy world. On the whole, this universe was won by the fairy world in the last immortal and demon war, and now the demon world has invaded in a big way, which can be regarded as having the upper hand for a while. However, the confrontation between the forces of the two worlds of immortals and demons, without the top boss taking action in person, is the game of Da Luo, the strength of the two sides is about the same, and even the fairy world has more background. It's just that Qi Lin's ex-girlfriend hasn't finished yet, and there is no need to write too much about the worldview of this universe, so I haven't written many people yet.

For example, Divine Kaisha is on Qi Lin's side in my setting, so don't say that the strength of the demon world is so strong, deliberately leaving the protagonist not to kill, the protagonist's aura or something.

It's not that you can't kill it, it's that you can't kill it.

Qi Lin is not as weak as he imagined, and the fairy world will not let Qi Lin have an accident, don't substitute the settings of other fantasy immortals into this book, I don't write that, the protagonist is bullied by the other party's boss in various ways, and as a result, the big guy on his side is called exercising the protagonist, and no one gives the protagonist a platform.

This kind of power will not survive more than two chapters in my book.

2. The Earth is nothing but a planet in this universe, not the center of the universe. The protagonist is just a big Luo now, and it's not worth making the Supreme boss very interested.

It's normal for everyone to take on the role of the protagonist, but broaden their thinking a little.

The calculations for the protagonist are more casual, and they are serious and serious, but let those bigwigs only stare at this one thing, only at the earth, then what kind of fairy and demon war is there to fight?

If the big guy's vision is like this, then there is no need to mix.

Therefore, the immortality of the protagonist is not a routine, it is a logical calculation, there are more places in the universe that are richer than the earth's resources, and there are more people who are more threatening than the protagonist.

The protagonist of this volume is just an introduction, an introduction that goes with the flow, and it is not yet time for Qi Lin to be the marshal to play the universe. He is a general, charging into battle. In this book, he is the main character, but when it comes to the battle of immortals and demons, Qi Lin is just one of the many supporting characters.

When Qi Lin really came out of the Heavenly Dao Library, condensed the Divine Kingdom of Truth, and then combined with the martial arts inheritance of the Divine Kingdom and the Abandoning Heavenly Emperor, and took over the position of the Heavenly Emperor, then he would truly have an equal dialogue with the Lord of the System and play the pattern of the universe.

There will be this kind of plot.,But it's not out now.,I still hope you can bring some brains when you read my book.,I'm not writing about Long Aotian.,The protagonist needs to climb up step by step.。 In fact, the protagonist has indeed been improving, but he is not yet at the top.

A process is required.

3. Everyone posts this chapter more and says ah.,Recently, this chapter has been saying less and less.,I can't even copy the book review←_←.

Seriously, in fact, the overall context of this book is very clear, the ending has already been thought out, and the main line has not been messed up, what needs to be done is to fill in the details, make these details look vivid and interesting, attract everyone, and promote the plot.

The power of a person is small, so if you have any ideas, you can really mention it in this chapter at any time, and I will usually read it.

Crowdfunding to write a book, to a certain extent, is also to respect the opinions of readers, well, that's it, do not accept rebuttals←_←