[Dragon's World: The following comments are made by the puppet sister who has nothing to do today, and the flute is sorted out (it's really served, you said how good it is to have time to do housework), and you have to send it up occasionally, saying what "Why do you always think that the review is better than your book?" The depression on my face after listening to it was unbearable, and the status of the couple was low.

Occasionally, I think this move is suspected of pleasing readers, but I always feel that I am a little bored writing alone, so I 'plagiarized' your comments without asking for your consent, so I will treat it as a companion. No wonder, hehe. Upload it with the updated chapter.,You should have no opinion.,Don't sue me for infringement.,Brother can't afford to pay for it.。 】

1: [Rising Sun¥] Great

1:) The dragon is very humble. In fact, I read the book just to have a good time, this book makes me happy to read it, I believe that many of them should be similar to my mind (a bit of a gang, hehe). If you want to say that there are omissions, it is inevitable. 'Liang Jin Gu Wen Huang' can be regarded as a generation of grandmasters, and it is not all discredited until now.

1, Liang Yusheng opened a generation of atmosphere and is the originator of the new school of martial arts. The writing is rigorous and smooth, the classical poetry attainments are quite skillful, and there is no problem in sending sentences to make sentences, but the good and evil are clear, the plot is flat and stable, square and square, and there is not much passion.

2. Gu Long has a cynical personality, and I like his books very much. But most of the male protagonists in his books can be classified into three types: "prodigal type", "killer type" and "cool brother type", and almost everyone is good at drinking and lustful, among so many people, I admire Tie Zhongtang, Chu Liuxiang, Yu Peiyu and a few others. There are more women, including "hot girl type", "resentful woman type", "fox fairy type", but few of them are my favorite.

3, Wen Rui'an's writing is like poetry and prose, which is also enjoyable to read, and it is quite windy. But his old man later liked to play with words too much, and the resulting books became more and more bizarre and ridiculous, and they simply got worse and worse. I suggest that the brothers who haven't watched it go and watch "The Four Famous Hunting Generals", I was depressed for a long time after watching it, and I didn't know what to do.

4, Huang Yi has a bizarre imagination, but he can justify himself, he should be the pioneer of fantasy. has a rich imagination and superb ability to make up stories, but he writes more than love in many books, or it's like Xu Ziling and Concubine Shi Xuan in "The Tang Dynasty" to engage in a bullshit spiritual love, TNND Who said that the pursuit of heaven can't move ****, it's too far-fetched.

"The Proud Sword" is a good book despite its shortcomings. Come on.

Borrowed the dragon's treasure and poured a bunch of water, one is to encourage the great, the other is that my brother is a little bored today and complains, and you can delete it after reading it.

2): I think the author's current way of thinking is very good, and this book has always given people a feeling of warmth and silence, comfort and comfort. Affectionate and colorless, it is much stronger than those books that know 'doing' all day long. I remember that the author said a lot about this book 'danger and sweetness', and now it seems to be starting to manifest itself, the ability is about to come out, there are Che Yuli and Mu Xinhua and the like on campus, and there is a chapter 'The Wind and Clouds are Rising', it must be inseparable from the killing, let's just wait and see.

3): I'm very disgusted with some of the current fantasy novels that 'only write about desire, not about love'. Some scenes are depicted as close to or completely pornographic, and even add a lot of "passionate" shots where they don't matter. Although fantasy novels are not Tao Te Ching, readers don't mind the "children's buyi" shots. But if it is deliberate, or even exaggerated in the details, the whole text is 'babbling', trying to please the reader, it will be a last trick. In many fantasy novels today, there is almost no mutual affection, the accumulation of feelings, and it is not love at first sight, some are just "lustful and lewd", and the hero's expression of love for the person he likes is also "on the go".

That's why I like Long Dada's book, there is no simple erotic pile-up, there is no simple 'love at first sight, goodbye chuang' and other vulgar descriptions, the plot is reasonable and the appropriate psychological description, so a good book is presented in front of the reader. Even if it's like what Da said,There's a slight lack of writing,I'm laughing at it.,It's a small problem.,Hehe.,But I hope it's true that Da Da will update it soon.,What's the hurry!!

2: [I'm the wind liu] great

Good books will bring happiness, there is so much helplessness in real life, why should you go to the Internet to find sin, how good it is to be happy, thank you for bringing me happiness with great good books!!!

3: [sykwalker02] Great

Since the rise of Master Huang Yi, fantasy novels have begun to flourish, and today they are almost flooded. However, most of these works win with plot and YY (Huang Yi is), and there are few real masterpieces with fresh writing. When people are accustomed to the "whimsy" of these authors, fantasy must seek change and innovation, but no matter how it changes, people will always get bored with it. From pseudo-history, alternate history, other worlds, and future science fiction, to later Western magic, gods and demons, ghosts, and now the Oriental fantasy immortals and Buddhas, cities are all like this, and sooner or later they will be bored! At this time, they will inevitably return to the starting point -- seeking refinement, not seeking change! Reading your novels is for refinement

4: [Zero Degree Enthusiasm] Great

If you want to write a wonderful book, you must write your own emotional color~ write the protagonist as yourself, this book is a good book, if you don't put your feelings in, you have no soul in a good book~~ Your own feelings are the soul of this book~ You have to work hard~~

5: [Rising Sun¥] Great

How can I not feel that there seems to be nothing similar from the plot to the style of writing, and if you insist on it, the protagonist will have medical skills, but if this is also counted, it seems a little too far-fetched. Besides, so many fantasy works don't seem to be anything even if they have a similar plot, so many time and space travel to other worlds or something. Big, well written, I absolutely support you.

6: [Fallen Mage] Great

1): The kid wants to give some opinions, when there is a conflict with someone, it's been a semester! Like Yun Na's suitors, none of them have jumped out to deal with Fang Shao, but they only verbally threaten Fang Shao, which is too inconsistent with the character of the third beauty guard group of Yun Na School! Contradictions and conflicts are the catalyst for the climax of the plot, love is a beautiful picture of the novel, and suspense and surprise are the fantasies that readers are waiting for! Come on, Fang Shao, I hope you are amorous but not rotten, Feng Liu is not obscene, true love is not false, There are flowers that can be folded straight and need to be folded, don't wait for no flowers and empty branches!

2): I think you must have anticipation when reading this book, a good book is like facing a beautiful woman, slowly peeling off her mysterious clothes, in order to appreciate her thrilling beauty!

The world in the book is the stage of our fantasy, and Fang Shao's pen is the waving baton. Every article is a beautiful music, and every sentence is a dancing elf. Heart-to-heart communication is like a stream paddling barefoot!!!!!!!!!!

4): I think novels are illusory life, but they can't be separated from the real world! Why Korean dramas are so popular now is because they originate from life, are close to life, and show love, family, and friendship with real pictures, and any civilization is rooted in deep cultural soil. We Chinese pay attention to the golden mean, Fang Xu is in contact with the essence of Chinese thousand-year-old culture, how can we take the initiative to pursue those beauties, only feelings accumulate in the bits and pieces of life, and in the end like a volcanic eruption composes a touching love! A large number of psychological descriptions on the one hand show the protagonist's delicate feelings, on the other hand, we can experience Fang Xu's emotional changes as if we were there!

5): In my memory, college life is colorful! Like what name visits, college games, various competitions, student union elections, etc., Fang Shao should inevitably clash with various forces in the school when he is studying in college, but I didn't see any strong people in the school in the first semester, only the leaders of various clubs. The classroom should also be a good place for Fang Xu to entangle with various beauties!

6): Aren't there all kinds of international students in the university? Like some judo and karate masters in Little Japan, shouldn't they come to the university to challenge? And then let Fang Shao eliminate them, what I appreciate the most is a novel in which the protagonist says to the Japanese, "Chinese will never bow their backs to dogs". In this way, people can be happy!

7): A "Dream of Red Mansions" has made people argue for 200 years, Taoists see ****, revolutionaries see decay! Although "Dream of Red Mansions" was banned in the Qing Dynasty, it is not yet famous in history, don't care too much about what others say, Fang Xuda, I support you! Go your own way and let others say it

7: [Lonely and invincible Kaede] Great

1): Hehe, all the tickets will be given to you in the future. ：）。。。。 Such a good article will be in the top 10 sooner or later, but don't be a eunuch, hehe, we Yantai people don't have eunuchs as if :)。。。。 It's really well written.,I hope the protagonist soaks a few more mm.,There's nothing to do.,As long as it's true to everyone.,And ah.,When the protagonist should be in the limelight,,Try to get out (especially in front of mm.。。。 That's all.,Keep up the good work.。。 Also, keep adding my essence, hehe

2): In fact, the most attractive thing about the novel is nothing more than love and friendship.,Big love is close to perfect.,But friendship is slightly insufficient.,You know,Sometimes the friendship between brothers is more heart-wrenching than love.,Just let me be lonely and invincible maple debut.,Haha,Guaranteed invincible.,Big you say it's good.,You answer me.。。 If you don't answer, you won't sleep 555555... ZZZzzzzZzZzzzzzzzzzzzz.......

3): The author is very good, I'm here to smash the ticket again. On the question that the author said that he wanted the protagonist to have a relationship with MM,I suggest that you can create another MM image.,This character should be cunning.,To play with the protagonist I'm happy.,Of course,The most important thing is that she likes the protagonist very much.,Because the protagonist went overboard.,And the protagonist just went crazy or something.,They had a relationship.,Of course,Although this MM likes the protagonist very much afterwards.,But because of her character.,But it said that the protagonist is not responsible.,And then the play depends on the author to write it himself.,I think this kind of MM is also very attractive.,Hehe,Here's the emphasis.,This is just a little suggestion from me.,Just for the author's great reference. ,There is no meaning to influence the author's big ideas.,Da must continue to work hard.。。 ：）

8: [Bluesky] Great

1): A good book, the first Qianlong seems to be mainly about love, and it's a pair of N, hehe, even like it. From the current point of view, Dada's writing intention seems to be to write a few classic love cases: sister and brother love (Ruoruo VS Fang Xu), childhood sweetheart love (Liu Jia VS Fang Xu), normal love (Yun Na VS Fang Xu), ...... ,It's good.,But the transition seems to be a little faster.,To be exact, the pace is fast.,I hope to slow down.,Write about love.,Of course, it's better to be more delicate.,(At present, the psychological activities of girls are commendable from time to time) I hope it can be more exciting.。 (especially when it comes to showing love in the future). The foreshadowing of the 25 chapters is worth looking forward to, it is very big, it is very natural, the transfer is very natural, praise!

2): I have a different opinion from the "Zongnan" brother, in real life, when you like a person of the opposite sex, of course, you want to win as soon as possible, and if you write a book like this, then the attraction is not enough, you should have to show the beautiful feelings that girls are pregnant with spring and young men love to the fullest. Think about it, the kind of claws that a young man has when he has a crush on a MM, and the kind of gains and losses after the pursuit, if it is clean and slippery in two or three clicks, then ......

9: [Tenryu laughs] Great

Good book,Write out the dream of every young person (that is, an all-round person,Anything,Everything,But it's not a hidden master who shows the mountains and waters),But the first few chapters just wrote about the friendship with two brothers in the same house.,Moved out and lived in less than a few days.,So the two friends were thrown away.,Love is important.,Friendship is also evocative.And from this writing to the present,MM who likes the protagonist will develop into countless people.,I hope the protagonist is not an abusive person...............

10: [Fang Xu] Xiaoxiao (written by my sister, Leng is not allowed to change, is there any reason for this?)

I still say the same thing, this book hopes to bring happiness to everyone, even if there is any big danger conspiracy or something, there will always be people who will turn the tide, danger and happiness coexist, entanglement and passion coexist. If you look forward to tragedy, you will be disappointed, but I don't think many people want to see tragedy, although tragedy can cause tears of sympathy, but I like comedy more than the light-hearted pleasure that comedy brings. (Rollover, I don't know what I'm talking about when I see it myself? ^_^

11:【paopaolong00】Great

I think it's not bad to have a rare opponent in martial arts. Isn't this the case with Shen Lang in Gu Long's "The Outer History of Martial Arts"? In fact, what is really powerful is the people's hearts, and no matter how high the martial arts are, they may not be able to resist the conspiracy and tricks. The author's sentence "conspiracy and sweetness go hand in hand" I appreciate very much.

12: [Dark Shura] Great

The author is great~ I think there is a place that is not quite right, although I haven't read a few chapters, I can already see that the protagonist's family background is not ordinary, you said in the book that his family wants him to enter the school as an ordinary person, and you write in the second chapter that the protagonist's whole body is not more than 50 yuan, which is also too contrived, now ordinary people even if a set of summer body adds up to 50 yuan, I don't think it's worth 50 yuan, and now the ordinary family doesn't seem to have reached this level, or you can write that his family hopes that he will learn to be diligent and thrifty~ Of course~It's just a small problem~ I'm just saying my feelings, I hope the author won't be angry! I also hope that the writing is good! Please don't mind!

13: [Zongnan] Great

To be honest, in addition to the protagonist's sluggishness to feelings that makes people feel a little depressed, the big delicate brushstrokes, wonderful descriptions, and unconventional storylines are all commendable.

14: [Snow White Feather] Great

1): Come on, Brother Xu~0~ I have a suggestion, that is, the protagonist and several heroines should have a good ending, don't write fantasy in reality like some books, but you can't get rid of the shackles of reality. Especially when it comes to ****. Frankly speaking, I don't like to read fantasy novels that are generally set in reality, because of the above reasons, it makes people very worried to read them. I like this book very much, as for letting the heroines coexist peacefully, it depends on Brother Xu's pen power. 555...... The protagonist is much slower than me, but there are beauties who throw themselves into their arms, thinking that I chased my girlfriend and suffered a lot before hugging the beauty. That's really ...... Ay!

2): Hehe~ This book is getting more and more interesting :), I said before that our family Xiaoxu will soon say goodbye to the virgin era. Hehe...... It should be Ruoruo. I believe that the feelings must have accumulated to a certain extent.,This makes people feel happy and worried.,The happy thing is that if you get what you want, you're worried about our family's Nana sad (I'm a super fan of Yunna), you have to deal with it well, otherwise... It is recommended to let Ah Xu hang out a few more times in the policewoman Zhao, because she is already tempted, and experience shows that once a woman is tempted, nine cows can't pull it back. Who made Ah Xu a master of stealing hearts. And I want to say that your book is so good, so tempting!Come on!Always support you ^o^!

15: [Darker] Great

Big brother! I think that the law enforcers at this time should clean up the supernatural people sent down from above! Beat them all over the ground and look for teeth! Don't give us face! them! There is nothing wrong with most of these people with their nostrils facing the sky and look down on people! Don't give face to such people! Give your nose and put your face on it! Give them a few colors, and they will open a dye shop! them!

16: [Spirit] Great

Make a simple assumption that Liu Jia's little Taoist priest is naturally Fang Xu, and how did he find out later? Make a bold conjecture, I saw a photo of Fang Xu full of domineering in Yun Ruoruo, so... Fang Xu, the combination of dream and reality, congratulates the beautiful woman for falling in love completely.... Later, Yun Na also found out and then.... War Woman's War

17: [Person] Great

After a batch of good books, the strange man, the ethereal and slow like a turtle, finally found this book, it is no exaggeration to say that this book is my favorite at present, I am looking forward to the follow-up plot, the boss will try his best to update it, of course, you don't have to force yourself too much. The MM with a good personality in the book will let Fang Shao accept it, but as far as the author's foreshadowing, Liu Jiayunna can't run, I like it!!, but Fang Shao's EQ has to be strengthened and improved!!