Immortality, a gift, or, a curse, this is the theme of the fourth part, in fact, it is reflected in many people, such as Azk, Anderson, Leonard, etc., etc., and in the end, Xiao Ke saw those cocoons, saw the earthlings who were wrapped in the cocoons, and dressed in modern clothes, when he saw that three of the cocoons had been broken, the gift, or the curse, I don't think I need to point it out again, the thriller, horror, suspense, crazy and dark tone of the whole world appeared again.

This is one of the most impactful images I expected before the book opened, and it seems to work out well now, lol.

The entire fourth part, layer by layer, recycling foreshadowing, including the line buried in Anderson from the middle of the third part, finally had a strong outbreak and reverberation, I am still quite satisfied, and some of the remaining lines will also be recycled in the fifth part.

However, there are still some problems in the fourth part, one is the lack of conflict in the daily life of the rich man, once it is extended, I don't know how to build tension, and many points have to be explained, I have to mention, which leads to the fact that before going to Chanismen, I was a little anxious, the turning point was not soft enough, and the lack of the last pad was not enough, as I said before, I won't talk about it much.

The second is that the plot amplitude is too long, and there is something wrong with the rhythm in the middle and late stages.

From late June to mid-July, I was a little anxious about writing, from Klein to getting the formula, Leonard's grave digging ended, the tension of the whole plot dropped from the peak, I tried to make up for it, to reconstruct, to find new stimulation points, but the effect was not too good, as for the reason, I later roughly figured it out, lack of changes.

Generally speaking, it has been too long to upgrade, from the middle of the third part to the secret puppet master, to the middle of the fourth part, there are two or three hundred chapters, the aesthetics are starting to get tired, the tension is beginning to decline, and the essence of the change is urgently needed.

So, I adjusted the rhythm, pushed everything that could be put in the back to the back, and described everything that could be described on the side, aiming very clearly at the two lines of upgrade and revenge, and from the perspective of self-feeling and specific data, the effect is still good.

Of course, this also caused some problems, and there are a few places that are more rushed, such as the Calderon section, which should be a little more stretchy and a little more tortuous.

Well, for me, upgrading is not only a cool point, it is an expectation point, but also a tool to control the rhythm, the former is easy to understand, even in the real world, upgrades are everywhere, employees have a way to promotion, businessmen and officials have, the reality of not upgrading does not exist, but some are not obvious.

The latter one is more complicated, I simplified it to the pursuit of change, and even the daily book needs to change, it needs the stimulation of new things, and an upgrade can bring a lot of changes, so it can be used to control the rhythm and measure the problem.

Speed up the pace, and after coming to the final ** plot, the most important thing for an author is to straighten out the emotions, straighten out the emotions that he wants to express, eliminate the harmful and superfluous things, and ensure that the progression, accumulation and explosion of emotions are not disturbed, interrupted, or diluted.

So, in the last part, I gave up a little bit of urgency, first of all, after Adam's line was pulled out, unless I pulled in the Rose School, I would naturally lack a little sense of urgency, and if I did, the scene would be too chaotic to put the emotions on revenge and sadness.

Secondly, Xiao Ke is the director of this scene, and he roughly wants to keep things under control, too many accidents and urgency will lead to digestion and escalation that cannot be logical, and dividing revenge and escalation into two lines will be too procrastinating later, and there will definitely be problems with the rhythm, and there will be no tension.

Also, the existence of the evil spirit of the red angel at the beginning will also make the sense of urgency unable to pull up, which can be regarded as a little sacrifice to shape the character.

Well, to intersperse Ince's memories, the plump characters don't actually help the emotions, so I also sacrificed them.

Actually, it's not impossible to create a sense of urgency halfway, such as bringing Dai Li's death forward and detonating that emotion in the middle, creating a sense of urgency that Ince can kill everyone and escape, but in this way, the afterglow of the ending and the poignancy of the ending can't guarantee that the mood is in place, and after weighing, I can only make such a trade-off.

For Dai Li, in the earliest character design, I put her into the line of the goddess of the night pursuing the authority of the god of death, and later gave up this idea, let her be an ordinary genius, and the captain, an ordinary mid-level night watcher, has a story that is not so protagonist's template, which is very unique and rare under the entire atmosphere of the whole story background.

Ah yes, and a lot of the time I use words that can be a little irregular, very strange, and so is the word order. I am making some attempts, I hope to convey the picture in my mind, the emotions in my heart, to you in the most vivid way, at this time, I will not consider whether to use adjectives, verbs, or nouns, but to consider which word or which words can show the key to the picture, more intuitive, more intuitive.

Many authors have similar troubles, I remember many of Wen Ruian's later books, some places seem to be flooded, such as a bunch of "knife" words around a person's name, but in fact, they all want to better shape the picture, better convey the feeling, break through the limitations of words, at this point, words are always inferior to pictures.

This is the technical summary of the fourth part, as for who the third or first traverser is, you can guess, hehe.

Well, as usual, take a break at the end of the first one, and sort out an ideal method, although there is a weekend, but it is still only three days off, and the update will resume at half past twelve at noon next Tuesday.

The fifth part, "Red Priest", you can do reading comprehension, laughs.

Finally, push two books, one is "The Heavens and Ten Thousand Worlds Divine Dragon System", the story is rare, what blood romance, in the name of the people, it is still very innovative.

One is "Say to the Sword", a new work by the veteran god Emperor Lan.

Finally, at the end, the fourth part ends asking for a monthly pass~