Compared with Cai Zishi, Du Ziyuan is obviously stricter.

"The modus operandi is a bit simple, but considering the 24 hours of creative time, it's not bad to be able to come up with such a modusive, but ......" Du Ziyuan turned a pen in his hand and said, "We didn't set a theme for you this time, you can draw whatever you want, that is to say, even if you have a long time ago The idea can be used, it depends on how you integrate it within 24 hours, and the point exposed by this comic is that your past accumulation seems to be a little lacking." ”

"The rhythm is the same as Director Cai said.,It's very good.,The plot points are quite compact.,It's an excellent comic.,But the final reversal is a bit reluctant to be honest.,There's a little less foreshadowing in front.,If you can add some foreshadowing in front, I think it would be better.,Finally,This painting aspect ...... To be honest, it's not bad as a halfway manga artist, but compared to other contestants, this point of yours will be the biggest disadvantage, and I hope you can understand it. ”

Si Xingwei's expression was a little heavy after listening to it, after all, what Du Ziyuan said was on point, and his shortcomings were not hidden in front of Du Ziyuan, and he could see the light at a glance. If it was usual, he would definitely be very happy to be instructed like this, but now that it is a competition, Du Ziyuan's comments still have a great impact on his score.

In the final scoring session, Si Xingwei's audience score was 615 points, and the tutor scored 100 points, with a total score of 715.

Among the tutors, Cai Zishi gave 100 points, but Du Ziyuan did not give it.

Cai Zishi looked at Du Ziyuan: "I think it's okay." ”

Du Ziyuan shook his head: "I don't think so." ”

Hearing his answer like this, Cai Zishi could only shrug his shoulders helplessly at the camera: "Teacher Shanfeng is really strict." ”

Next, it was the turn of the Yan Lingtian team to appear. And their debut character is actually the trump card - Cheyenne!

No one thought that she would be the first to come out, how do you think she is also the last big axis!?

Songzi looked at Yan Lingtian suspiciously: "What tricks are you playing?"

Yan Lingtian said with a smile: "That's what she asked for, she said, anyway, the scores have to be added, and her work doesn't matter the order, the score won't change much." ”

"So confident?" Matsuko opened her mouth and didn't say much. Du Ziyuan's apprentice is indeed qualified to say this.

So, let's take a look at Cheyenne's work. ”

With Tang Junhao's announcement, a beautiful cover appeared on the big screen. The overall picture is bright, and there is a hundred-story floating statue floating in the painting, in front of which a man and a woman are wearing black and white robes standing against each other, and the swords in their hands are staggered into an "X".

Sword Art Online!

This is the name of the work that Cheyenne brought out.

"Oh?" Du Ziyuan was slightly surprised. Although I mentioned to the students that they should take out those five works in this competition, I didn't expect Cheyenne to move so fast.

Xia An drew a new version of "Sword Art Online" written by Sikong Lingling, although the basic setting is the same, but many plots have changed.

Du Ziyuan picked up his spiritual jade and flipped through it, and found that she only took out 1 word. After all, it's only one day, even if she and her 4 students work hard, it is quite good to be able to draw 1 word and 30 pages and still ensure the quality. Si Xingwei, who appeared in the front, drew worse than her, and only took out 18 pages.

The audience and the instructors began to read the work in silence.

The story takes place in an alternate parallel world, which is not much different from the armillary star, except that the first holographic online game has changed from "Glory" to "Sword Art Online".

Unlike "Glory" produced by the fairy world, "Sword Art Online" is completely made by mortals, so the scale is much smaller.

At the beginning of the open beta, there were about 300,000 registered players.

However, what no one expected was that the genius who developed the game was also a madman. He locked everyone's consciousness in the game, asking players to play through the game, otherwise they would never go offline. And if you die in the game, the real player will also die. Even in reality, you can't forcibly take off the game helmet.

300,000 people are locked up in Sword Art Online.

The slogan "If you are a man, you will go up to the 100th floor" has become "If you want to live, you will go to the 100th floor".

And it was in this context that Kirito, the male protagonist who had participated in the closed beta, resolutely embarked on the road of conquering the hundred floors.

With his vast experience, he quickly leveled up and was ahead of all players.

He has better equipment, has stronger skills, and occupies more easter eggs, but the more powerful he becomes, the more empty he feels inside.

Man can't completely live on his own without society, so he hides his edge, puts on an inconspicuous fashion, and tries to join the ranks of other players.

Kirito chose the "Blood Alliance" that is in the first echelon of the player. And to join the Blood Alliance, you must take the entry test.

He was assigned to a team of 5 people, and a flaxen-haired girl on the team caught his attention, as the two had a previous relationship.

At that time, she was still a novice, and she was met by Kirito by chance, so he kindly taught her some small tricks. Unexpectedly, when she said goodbye, she was already strong enough to be qualified to join the strongest team of players.

The goal of the squad is an elite monster, and the 5 master joint raiders should be more than enough. However, Kirito noticed that something was wrong, and he quietly removed some hidden dangers in the shadows, avoiding the situation where the elite monster summoned his parents. Otherwise, they will not only face one elite monster, but two big bosses.

In the team, only the flaxen-haired girl was vaguely aware of this, and the other teammates thought that he was lazy in other places because he couldn't work hard.

This also made Kirito successfully enter the blood alliance, but the interpersonal relationship was not very good, and the only one willing to befriend him was the girl.

He finally learned her name, Asuna, a very strange name, but because it was a screen name, there was nothing wrong with it.

Kirito is already very satisfied with being able to make a friend, and his feelings for Asuna are gradually changing.

Until that time, the Blood Alliance was ready to attack the Lord of the Gate.

This is where the comic comes to an abrupt end. The length limits the play.,It's already a rush to be able to stuff so much content in 30 pages.,Guarding the boss is naturally no drama.。

"It's really in the same vein. Cai Zishi looked at Du Ziyuan, and the look of dissatisfaction in his eyes was self-evident.

It's all your fault, what is wrong to teach, you actually teach your apprentice to break the chapter! Wait to collect the knife!