Chapter 264: Details
"But......" Windtwilight continued, "you may have overlooked a detail. ”
"Details?" said Fuyu, frowning.
"Yes," said Twilight, "Actually, I can't blame you for this, it's a career advantage, you look at the beginning of the first volume, there is a description of everyone getting together to introduce themselves." ”
With her words, not only did she drink from the top, except for Du Ziyuan and Songzi, everyone else turned their hands to the beginning of the first volume.
So the nine people sat in a circle, and the first was the old man holding the cigarette stick, he took a deep breath of cigarette, and then introduced himself as a doctor, and now he runs a medical hall in Liangcheng, and when he spoke, white smoke came out of his mouth, lining him like an old fairy...... The man to his right called himself Wang...... In the end, it was the woman's turn, and she said that she was a singer who sang for a living......"
The content of this paragraph is mainly to explain the identities of the characters on the stage, so that readers can better understand them. After reading it, many people still don't understand why Feng Duzhao said that the details here were ignored by Fu Yu.
Feng Duzhao said: "Notice here, they are sitting in a circle, and the introduction is from right to left, so it is certain that the last singer who introduced herself is sitting on the left side of the doctor, and as mentioned earlier, this old man is holding a cigarette with his left hand, that is, his cigarette stick is facing the singer, I am very uncomfortable when I see this, because I am also singing, I will never be so close to a smoker." ”
Only then did everyone suddenly realize that Feng Duzhao was referring to this! If this was really a foreshadowing, it was too well buried.
The first to introduce himself was the old man, who spit white smoke like an old fairy or something, and everyone would think it was a rhetorical device when they looked at it. Authors of that era were still very fond of writing about this kind of thing. After that, there were seven people in between, and when it was the singer's turn, who would care so much about them sitting in a circle? Not to mention the sentence "carrying a cigarette in his left hand" when the doctor appeared in front of him.
And even if there is such a picture in my mind, I don't deliberately mention it in the book, and it is easy to ignore it. Only some people who really understand singing and singing will understand how much they value their voices.
She said that she made a living by singing, but she was actually lying, so it is very likely that she is not a real singer. So who will she be? There are three women in the whole story, except for the singer, only Mrs. Li and Miss Li are left. Among them, the young lady of the Li family, who is about the same age as the singer, was only thrown into the well back then, and the thieves did not confirm her death, so her appearance is completely reasonable.
As a prince, Fuyun Drink naturally does not have a deep understanding of this aspect, in contrast, Yanyun Songzi, who is a singer, realized this violation for the first time. So in the version she wrote, the reason why the singer sat close to the doctor was to be the first to kill him. The presence of the doctor is a great obstacle to her subsequent murder plan, so it must be solved first.
And because Fu Yu Drink set the thief as the mastermind behind the scenes, although it was also mentioned that killing the doctor first was to prevent him from saving people, the killing method was completely different.
No one knows if the foreshadowing mentioned by Twilight Zhao was the original author's intention, maybe it was really just a casual write-up by him, and if you ignore this, the sequel versions on both sides are perfect.
It's just that now that Feng Duzhao has mentioned such a hand, everyone will find that the version of Yanyun Songzi seems to be more reasonable.
In the end, Songzi scored 68,493 points and 64,122 points. The average score of both sides is over 8, which is already a very good result, but there can only be one winner.
Fu Yu didn't show much dissatisfaction with Feng Duzhao's comments, but silently returned to his place, as if thinking about something.
Songzi jumped back to Du Ziyuan and them, imitating Du Ziyuan's usual movements and making a "V" gesture. Du Ziyuan and Tang Junhao also gave her a "pop" applause at the right time.
"You're really lucky this time, it just so happens that the murderer pretended to be a singer. Tang Junhao said with emotion.
In this regard, Songzi shook his head disdainfully: "Second child, you are still too tender." ”
"What do you mean?"
"What she means is that even if the foreshadowing is not a singer, but another profession, she can still find out," Du Ziyuan said, "As an author, the amount of information reserve is very important, and sometimes a passerby who only appears in a few dozen words may spend a lot of effort on the author to investigate and collect information. ”
Seeing that Tang Junhao was not convinced, Songzi continued: "Do you know how the author who wrote this book "Youyaozhuang" died?"
"Didn't you say alcoholism?"
"The direct reason is indeed this, but if you have the heart to investigate, you can find that he was about to open a new book at that time, and that book is about 'wine', he actually went to drink wine to experience the taste, characteristics, brewing methods, etc. of each wine, and many things can only be written handily and perfectly written only if you have experienced it yourself. ”
After Songzi finished speaking, Tang Junhao's face suddenly showed a look of shock, and at the same time, he also had a deep admiration for the author. This kind of person who creates with his life may be the real person.
However, before he could finish moving, Du Ziyuan on the side interjected: "Didn't that guy drink to death in order to show off the amount of wine in front of the girl when he drank flower wine?"
"Huh?" Tang Junhao was directly dumbfounded, and immediately looked at Songzi.
The latter smiled mischievously: "Oh, I just broke those things blindly, how can this kind of author who is a direct eunuch who broke up with his old boss for a woman have such a good character? ”
"I'll go! You still move me!" Tang Junhao really wanted to go back and give himself a big ear scraper for the two guys who went out to talk to these two guys that day.
The three brothers and sisters are talking to each other here, and the replacement of the judges over there has also been completed, and after the second criticism committee is seated, it is the turn of Zhou Wei and Wang Zhiqiu to play.
Their opponent is the sleepwalking bird, the old driver of the Seven Blades. The first and second rounds of his writing are small yellow texts, the kind that makes people's blood "head", Du Ziyuan feels that his pen name should not be called "sleepwalking bird", it is better to call it "killing blood".
The key is that this guy's text is not a simple little yellow article, the plot is also very reasonable, and it can even be regarded as exquisite, and it will not make people feel bored at all. The first and third combinations encountered such an opponent this time, and it was also a headache.